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I swear i did not pick the top 3 because they were in order, it just happened that way. let me know what you want done!

My Story
By: Jacob

I have this story I tell
When someone asks why
I put myself through hell
Or why I wanna die

It all started one day
Way back in the 6th grade
Thats when I had my first encounter
With my lovely little blade

It was one of those days
Where you regret everything you say
Where nothing goes your way
Just another normal day

The day I learned how unforgiving
God can trully be
And all the spite and hate he was saving
Just to give to me

It was around lunchtime
When I was called to the office
And was told about a crime
That was full of passion and malice

Earlier that morning
My father hit bottom
And started drinking and swearing
Pretty soon mother began yelling
So father started shouting
And before either of them knew it
They were face to face, fist fighting
Mother was scratching, bitting, and slapping
Father was hitting, kicking, and laughing

Father got tired
And grabbed a knife
He slashed up his wife
And brutally ended her life

He left the knife in the sink
And wrote a confession in ink
Then left without a blink

I've never seen him since
But still I slit my wrist
And try to hide the evidence
That I'd rather not exist

Self-Esteem Decayed
by Lost & Delirious

The spirit within feels deeply unloved,
As the frail body alone keeps standing.
Her own eyes are judging: "She'll never be loved."
Disgusted by the reflection staring.

Words keep pounding: "She's the one to blame."
"Not easy to love, she's tough, she's afraid".
Agonizing in her corner of shame,
Unreachable, her self-esteem decayed.

Ugly and broken, she rejects herself,
Craving for love, but nobody will dare,
To touch her thin skin that's harming itself,
Her fool pain, nobody deserves to share.

Doubts of Enchantment

By: David Marshall

Before we get too old,
before our lives are sold,
make me understand,
why you held my hand,
and made me feel important,
With a mighty breeze of enchantment,
as the sun blares in my eyes,
Is it doubt that I despise?
Because you I can't trust,
turning frail faith to dust,
I had always dreamed,
For an impossible life it seemed.
Treasuring the momenta charms,
like when I held you in my arms,
No matter what I say or do,
My mind digresses to only you.
I had always wished,
you would love me.
We never even kissed,
you barely even hugged me.
Is there any other man,
who can love you like i can?
Is there any one to love you,
anywhere near as I do?
This isn't just a poem,
It's my true feelings.
I really need to show them,
what true love really means.
I want to be that guy,
to give you that ring.
Together until we die,
No matter what life will bring.
I want you to be the girl,
to say the words I DO.
To start our lives unfurl,
to always be with you.
As the night falls,
and the day dies out.
I hear my hearts calls,
but I can't deny this doubt.

She Don't Cry
by Tabby

He was proud just to say "She don't cry"
His lovely girl was his world
The sparkle, the shine within his eye

She loved her dad more than anything
He was her world in her mind
There was nothing more God could bring

As she got older he became very sick
But still she didn't cry a tear
So just for her he remained solid as a brick

But days wore on and worse he became
She stayed with him hours on in
Pretending things were still the same

So weeks went by but he was no better
And she saw that he would soon die
But still she didn't cry for he wouldn't let her

She stayed with him and held his hand tight
As she knew it would all be over
She still told him that everything was all right

He didn't believe her but told her it was okay
So she sat silently by his side
There she remained as his life slowly fell away

Then one day he sat up with the strength he had
And said in a whisper "Im proud of you"
She looked at him and all she said was "I know dad"

He slowly slid down and he peacefully died
And finally a tear slid down her cheek
For the first time she laid her head down and cried.....

(I wrote this poem to show that this girl never cried because she had her dad and that was all she needed.)

Bloodless

I stay in the darkness, where i belong.
away from the human's where everything's wrong.
i used to be human, or so i thought.
but despite all my disguises, it all was for naught.

one cannot run from oneself, i am my own enemy.
i can't change who i am, i am what you see.
a creature made only of flesh and bone.
there is nothing more, than this which is shone.

if i deny the truth, only pain will i find.
if i lie to myself, i only kill my mind.
i cut you, you bleed, cut me, there's nothing.
i am but a vessel, a non circled ring.

i do not exist, nor should i be with breath.
i live with no purpose. a life without death.
no heart to be broken, no mind to expand.
but still i can feel it, like a wandering sand.

will i fade away, turn into a memory.
what else am i good for, at least a story.
shall i be remembered, shall i finally walk free?
shall i finally laugh happily? shall i finally be?

Oscar

Heart Move
by ♪↑Musicians Finest♪↑

Ever Feel like
theres only one girl
to complete you
Complete your world?

Ever feel like
Seeing that face
changes the beat
of your own heart pace

I feel it all the time....

The beat goes on and so do I
never to quit, theres no goodbye
Before I quit, id cut out my eye
Admitting I love her, Its no lie
Falling down, still giving it a try
No matter my tears, or if i cry
even though its known, she'll deny
My every offer, I've become dry
heres the gun..watch me die
light me up, like the 4th of July
cause I'm not special I'm just a guy
well i got something.heres my reply

Don't think I'm just another man
I got a heart, just understand
worth more then booty and Hands
just let me spit, my mind expand
listen to the words and my command
I snap back at you like a rubber band
I cant get enough, but its me you cant stand
I'm on the ground just give me your hand

Love is what i got for you
i get a feeling you feel it too
just let it be..just us two
ill give u a hint..give you clue
show you a sign, that i still love you
watch out for it, let it come through
feel the love, and then i will prove
we meant to be, don't let your heart move.

meaning of life....

When i look to the sky
it is crystal clear....
just as the mountain river
waiting for the morning dew
but this heart loss its way
to scheme...
to pretend...
knowing the meaning of life..
for birds only know to fly
as humans,we just grow and die
living in this path of confusion
sometimes i walk sometimes i run,
until everything feels so dry
am i right to be wrong..?
or am i wrong to be right..?
questions of my lonely soul
whispering the summer
for it's undone task....

Two Drowning Lover's Hearts

A cool autumn mist
Lightly caresses my shoulders
As we walk
Along the leaf-ridden path

I lightly peck your cheek
You smile (A picture of true beauty)

The forest sighs
For she is jealous of what we have.

As we walk
Along the colour coded path
The rain is no longer soft
But fierce

We talk...
The way that stars meant for lovers to talk

We can only hear a slight
Pitter-patter
Far in the distance

You laugh (Angel's laughter)
I take your hand
As we walk
Toward destiny's core

You smile
(A picture of true beauty)
The forest laughs
(Remembering the happiness of true love)
The rain softens once more
(Sensing that we are already drowning without his help)

For your smile is enough
To flood the world with
Euphoria
And drown any man's sorrows

The rain stops...

And you turn to me and ask:

"Did you hear something?"

-Jordan RS Parrott

wow 9 done 11 left! that was fast

10/10 (987) haha remember that commercial?! anyway 10 done 10 left! yay ppl

I can't Promise
by ŘÅÇĦ♥

Can't promise I'll always be By your side to give you a hug
But I will be on the other side of the phone.
I can't promise everything will be alright
because sometimes I know it won't.
But I will do my best to help you.

I can't promise I'll stop your tears
but i'll cry with you!
You cry silent tears
but they fall so loud.
But some day I'll be able to catch them.

I can't promise I'll catch you when you fall
But hey I always wanted to fly.
And I'll hold your hand all the way down!

I can't promise you I can get you outta you hole
To tell the truth I'm right there with you
But I can help ease your pain

I can't promise I can make you better
When you feel like you're not strong enough to go on
But I can be strong for you

I can't promise to give you a reason to live
when you can't take it anymore.
But I hope you would choose to live and stay here with me. No matter what trails we have to go throw at least we'll have each other.

And I can't promise
That things will be ok soon
But I can promise that I"ll love you

Now,
Forever,
And always.

Flying Across The Dance Floor
by ♥ Jєѕѕу ♥

He grabs my hand, pulling me towards him
My heart is pounding and my cheeks are glowing
We cling to each other and move as one
Flying across the dance floor we seem to be flowing..

Feeling his hot breath on my face makes me shiver
My waist shaking to the rhythm, my hands in his
Twirling and spinning, our eyes are connected
A scene of lust and hunger it surely is..

Our bodies start to rub, becoming a part of the music
His face moves closer and kisses my tender lips
I desperately try to get closer, wanting so much more
But the dance suddenly ends, leaving his hands on my hips..

8 more spots!

A strange unique world,
Full of nonsense and fun,
An autistic boy,
Amazed by everyone,

An adorer of life,
Never neglecting one thing,
people fighting around him,
While he happily sings.

This boy is amazing,
With incredible knowledge,
At the age of ten,
Brighter than some at college.

This boy is my brother
And forever hell be,
He is the only person i talk to,
Because he understands me.

I feel as if were all special needs,
And he is a normal boy,
Completely level headed,
With life he don't toy.

He captures every moment
And lives life to the full,
There is nothing about Daniel
Id change at all.

for my baby boi Danny xxx

-Upon A Lover's Ideal-

Lame beauty withering slowly
Against the precious life form's arm.
A kiss planted so gently
Upon a lover's palm.

Sweet teardrops of the sunlight
Bathe them in a reclusive glow
A shadow falls intently
Upon a lover's plateau.

Alas! It seems pure nature
Has followed in appeal,
So calm, the world is living
Upon a lover's ideal.

this is going so fast! 6 more!

Umm WC? In my poem I can't promise at the very beginning I left out I.. Sorry!

-Rachel

How Do You Want To Die?

Do you want to fall,
Slipping silently over space,
For a precious moment contained in eternity,
Then pushed down,
Even further than the ground,
To a pit of darkness so deep,
You will never climb out.

Would you prefer to die in your bed,
After your last words have been said,
To all you hold beloved,
Who watch you as you sleep,
And as you are finally dead.

Or to push another being,
Away from a fatal blow,
To take it yourself,
And die a hero.

There are many ways to die,
And there are many people who have fallen,
Or bled.
This is my question.
How do you want to die?

And my answer is;
Not yet.

~ Thy eyes glisten in the moon light~

Thy eyes glisten in the moon light
Shalt I hold thee in my sway?
Kiss thy tender lips
And smile as thou
Touch my skin.
Dost thou dare to take me in?
Hold me closer
Under the stars,
Bring thyself
Down on me
Protect me from
All of my enemies.
A gentleman you are
So caring to me
Wilt thou whisper in
My ear and ask me
To be with Ye to
The end of thy years?
How thy eyes glisten in
The moon light
No sun shall break this night

By me :D

A Final Prayer
by †!♪~*`Bryce Dressler`*~♪!†

A slow rolling tear
Falling down his cheek
As he stood over her bed
he began to feel weak

He couldn't believe it
No way this was true
He couldn't live without her
He wouldn't know what to do

He dropped to his knees
At the head of her bed
Looked up to the ceiling
Crying he said,

"Why'd you do this god
Why'd you take her from me
I need her so much
Why can't you see

It can't end this way
No, she can't die
God please don't do this
I can't say goodbye

She can't go away
Not here, not now
I'll do anything to bring her back
Please just tell me how

Take the life from me
Take my heart and soul
God please bring her back
I don't care what the tole

Take the blood from my veins
The breathe from my chest
I don't care if I die
Just put me to rest

God please listen
The pain is to much to bare
Her life will end real soon
If at all you care"

He stopped speaking for a minute
As she layed there dying
The only sound to be heard
Was of the teenage boy's crying

His tears crashed to the floor
As he barely made a stand
He reached across her body
And held her hand-in-hand

As he wiped his eyes
He couldnt understand
Whyd this have to happen
Whyd it have to end?

He had one last thing to do
As he watched her lay
He had one last minute
One last thing to say

"I have one more thing to ask
a favor, God, from you
If you are going to take her
Can you please take me too?"

Again he fell to his knees
Not knowing what else to say
He held her hand tight
Not ready to give her away

But then he heard the monitor
Beep for the final time
And after that, all to be heard
Was the single flat line.

He let her hand go
And kissed her on the cheek
As more tears came to his eyes
He prayed they'd soon meet

Although she is in heaven
Past the clouds and above
They could deny him her body
But not their love

And when he gets to heaven
He will soon see
She will be waiting
To be together...Eternally

(C) 2005 Bryce Dressler

((Couldnt think of any oter to put up here

YAY 2 more spots:) and don't worry about it RACH it's fine:D

~Last Strand (Lyrics)~

(Verse 1)
My desires are beguiling,
a fabrication of the truth.
The lies are all compiling,
escaping from the sleuth.

(Chorus)
Can run, but cannot hide,
with every passing stride,
I die a little more inside,
my passion won't subside.

(Verse 2)
My efforts are misleading,
misdirected by my lust.
Yet, you'll find me pleading,
to gain eternal trust.

(Verse 3)
Bonds will soon be broken,
I will not play the tease.
Words I've left unspoken,
will now come out with ease.

(Chorus)
Can run, but cannot hide,
with every passing stride,
I die a little more inside,
my passion won't subside.

(Verse 4)
Words that I've bestowed,
now will be relinquished.
My hearts been overflowed,
with things I can't distinguish.

(Verse 5)
Ties with loosened ends,
will soon settle in my hands.
With each agonizing bend,
I loosen the last strand.

(Chorus)
Can run, but cannot hide,
with every passing stride,
I die a little more inside,
my passion won't subside,
my passion won't subside.

~Sean Dohr~

1 more!!!

Living to Die

Graffiti stained soul and poisoned arteries,
Lying like everything's ok.
Stretched under the night sky, charcoal skin
Awaiting a new day.

And I miss being alive,
(the brown flowers foretold death)
Some are just made to die...

And this bleeding hole can't be filled,
The hope perished young.
And as I step off this cliff
May my damage be undone.

And these weary hands and broken heart,
Twisted insides, cut throat drips tears.
Your satanic love;
Has driven me through these years.

And I miss being alive,
(the brown flowers foretold death)
Some are just made to die...

The hope perished young,
And as I step off this cliff
May my life be undone.

YAY closed!!!

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thanks alot i cant belive i got first !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks again and again.....

yess thanx for that. you can just comment on whichever poems you'd like. Congrats to all the winners!!!

Oscar

yes same here comment on any rate any CONTRATULATIONS to the all the winners

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