Wings of an Angel's contest:)

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!CLOSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Scroll down for results =)

    Prizes:
    1st: 5 comments and votes, and a place among my fav.
    2nd: 3 comments and votes.
    3rd: 2 comments and votes.
    HM: 1 comment and vote.

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    Angel in my heart
    By Tara-Kay

    The angels are above us in the cloudy skies,
    Showering us with love that never ever dies,
    The angel in my heart, always tells me,
    That love is something that’s meant to be.

    You are my angel, you give me all the love I need,
    You are there to mend a broken heart if it may bleed,
    You can’t stop looking down on all of your friends,
    Believing that loving is not full of dead ends.

    I feel sad sometimes, and I may be just a little blue,
    But I know that if I need a hand, I can turn to you.
    Because you are my angel, that is always there,
    You are my angel and I know that you care.

    You are beautiful, so sweet and loving, and you’re kind,
    You are always around, because 24/7, you’re on my mind,
    Angels like you, will always guide me into the right place,
    And loosing you, is something someday I might face.

    But I believe, I once had you, my little angel, my little friend,
    You promised me that you’d always be there till the end,
    You haven’t broken the promise yet, and I don’t think you will,
    Because you know so deeply, how sad that would make me feel.

    The angels are above us in the cloudy skies,
    Showering us with love that never ever dies,
    The angel in my heart, always tells me,
    That love is something that’s meant to be.

    © Tara-Kay Randall 6th August 2006

  • Oscar
    18 years ago

    My Guardian Angel

    I stand here protected, as one guarded child.
    I sit alone safely, where nothing is wild.
    Never been in danger, never in harm's way.
    and all of life's challenges, waited at bay.

    i have always been happy, for I've never felt pain.
    my angel stands by me through sun snow and rain.
    she is always smiling. and a smile she receives.
    she tricks enemies away, or is it me she deceives?

    I have always been guarded, and so never in fear.
    and I stay locked up always, year after year.
    have not seen a human, for she said they are bad
    and even though i am healthy, i remain sad.

    have i been missing out, is there much more to life,
    could i someday have children and maybe a wife?
    I must see it for myself, no longer can i wait.
    i must be fragile, for fear is a human trait.

    i wanted the experience, yet she locked me in.
    i tried to run away, but she will always win.
    I'm stuck here forever, i cry through the night.
    and for the first time ever, i am feeling fright.

    so long's gone by now, i still am stuck here.
    i now cry every night, for real life is so near.
    but here i shall stay, until my final breath.
    so is she My Guardian Angel, or my Angel of Death.

    Oscar

    is this enough about Angels cuz if not i can delete it

  • Just Lucy
    18 years ago

    My Angel

    Angels Live in heaven
    all of them but one
    this angel lives on earth
    with two feet on the ground

    this angel doesn't know it but he is admired from afar
    i know i cannot tell him so i hope my feelings leave
    this angel is alone
    he doesn't feel that he belongs

    this angel is the quiet one
    the one you never hear
    this angel is trapped
    he has that never ending fear

    the fear that there is nothing left
    nothing left for him
    this dark and empty world
    has tried to take my angel away

    so i finally build up courage
    what once was my best friend
    will hopefully be so much more
    as i stand upon his porch in awe

    i hear the screaming of his mother
    i hear the heartbreak from his brother
    i see a rope hanging in their shed
    i saw him there...i saw him dead

    My angel had left
    he'd gone up where he belonged
    this is not a fairytale
    but his memory will always live on!

    XOXOXOXO STEVEN RIP!!!

    (C) Lucy Green

    *i know its probably not the sort of 'angel' poem you were expecting, or one for this competition but he's the only angel i know and yeah, sorry if its not what you were looking for*

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    x My Guideing Angels x

    Angel of love, Angel of life,
    guide my way so i can do right,

    Angel of love, find me a man,
    For me he'd do whatever he can.

    Angel of life, make me see right,
    So i know for whom to fight,

    Angel of fire, lead my way,
    So i will know whats right to say.

    Angel of fear, dont leave me here,
    For what in this world should i shed a tear?

    Angel of air, keep in touch,
    so i will know who to trust.

    Angel of right, make me see,
    Equal oppertunaties should apply to everybody.

    Angel of death, halp me shine,
    So ill be remembered after i've died.

    Please comment if you have read this thnx xxxx

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    Very good everyone, keep it up! A lot better than I could ever expect:)

    Oscar, It's good, no need to delete;)

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Angel's Battle

    Angels of glorious value against the Lord,
    Each wanting to win Heaven's reward,
    Fighting against Hate and Love,
    Blood of the Angel's fall from above.
    God let's out a terrible cry,
    As an Angel strikes him in the side.

    Battle of wits and withered lies,
    This is where the angels die.
    You'd never have thought,
    Glorious things would have faught,
    Yet as they did the Angel's fell,
    And this ends my tragic tale.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    6 down, 14 to go:) I can barely wait:)

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    This sounds interesting, I'll give it a try later.

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Guardian Angel
    by ♥ Jєѕѕу ♥

    As shining tears slowly form in my eyes
    A hand is placed lovingly on my arm
    Wiping away the droplets of water
    To cradle and remove me from any harm..

    My eyes are sparkling with joy
    On my lips is a sweet little smile
    You are there with me, laughing merrily
    I know you shall be here for a while..

    Mouth slowly quivering, eyes growing big
    A panicked heart leaps into my throat
    I shiver hysterically with cold, hard, fear
    Until you bring me a big, warm, coat..

    To love and protect me forevermore
    Pure goodness all the way through
    A cloud of fluffiness covers me
    My guardian angel are you..

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    Very good everyone, this went a hell of a lot better than I ever imagined!!

    Keep it coming!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    My Angel of Darkness

    Come to me my angel from the black,
    If you’ve come to take my soul, I don’t want it back.
    The tides are changing; soon I’ll just be a memory,
    A picture is the only way anyone will remember me.

    My angel of darkness, what is my sin?
    What made you appear? What made this begin?
    Was I a bad girl, or didn’t live my life out?
    I can honestly say I know I lived my life in doubt.

    My dark angel, will I get wings like you?
    So I can fly around hell, and get a good view-
    Of the fires burning below, so very hot,
    For when I get there, that’ll be all I got.

    My angel of darkness, thank you for being here,
    Now take me away before I fill with fear.
    Can I write a note for my family or is it too late?
    Oh well, let’s go then, dying alone is my fate.

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    Great, anyone else?

  • Jordan
    18 years ago

    Cocaine Angel

    Take her
    Away

    Lead her
    Astray

    Make her soar
    Above the clouds

    Take pain
    Away

    Lead pain
    Astray

    Darken it with
    Loveless shrouds

    Enter
    Her soul
    Bloodstream
    Make her whole
    Lovely dream
    A reality
    Enter

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    come on people! we need a few moree!

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    when is this contest over lol xxx alexxxx

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    ...after 20 poems it says up ther..

  • FlirtingWithDeath
    18 years ago

    ~Send me an angel~

    Send me an angel
    To take my pain away,
    May it be death or guardian
    I do not care.
    My sorrows have swallowed
    Me whole
    I am in a misery
    That will unfold.

    Please send me an angel
    To make me feel loved
    I wish for no pain
    For I have nothing to gain.

    I need a hand to pull me through
    Send me an angel
    Who will fly me away.
    Help me please
    For I can not see
    Darkness is all around me.

    I am afraid the angels
    Are too late,
    Neither death nor guardian
    Can help me now.
    Send one just incase
    Maybe they can lift me
    Off the ground
    Send me on please
    The darkness is all around me.

  • FlirtingWithDeath
    18 years ago

    Wow I would just like to say....~Who Cares?~ that was like.... a really good poem.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    haha thanks! your was too! no1 seems to think so about mine though i got a 3.8 rating on it..haha o well thanks again:D

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    yes everyone did a great job, or have done so far:)

  • silhouette fairy
    18 years ago

    The Angel of Light
    by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

    As i cut an old worn scar
    i pray the angels come close to me
    the dark, the light
    the dim, the bright

    slowly i grow sleepy
    as they fight i grow weak
    surrendering to my awful thought
    i wish the dark will win the lot

    if i shall grow
    the wings of snow
    i shall die even more
    for i will not deserve that chore

    slowly it brightens
    then it dims
    as the fight
    goes to and fro

    i slowly wake up
    with an I-V
    for now i am alive
    but i wish to die

    the dark almost won
    but the light succeeded
    and now it will repeat, once again
    for the angel of light must not win

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    come on people! we need a few moree!

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    yepp, not many left now:)

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Guardian Angel {Double Tanka}

    Guardian angel,
    Strictly watching over me,
    From heaven above.
    Shining hope, faith, on my soul,
    Guiding me through life’s struggles.

    Guardian angel,
    Lending his two helping hands,
    To push me along.
    Igniting passions and goals,
    Believing I’ll live my dreams.

    August 13th 2006
    Copyright © Natalie

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    Tanka is a Japanese style. Tanka consists of five
    lines. Tanka has a strict syllable count of 5, 7, 5, 7, 7.
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    ..hope this is okay. =)

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    Style doesn't matter, so of course its okay! :D

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Come on, its not that difficult to write about an angel! You can do it people!

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Mmyeah! Cmon everyone. Even I did it! {Miss Murder}

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    I hope people sumbit some more poetry here!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Come on guys!!! I've written a trillion poems on angels! It's not hard at all!!

    xDarkSuicidex

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    i had never really written one about an angel before and it was EASY...might not be the best but its not hard to do it PLEASE!?! i'll give u a virtual hug *pouty face*

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Lol, I want a virtual hugg! :P C'mon people, just describe what you think an angel would look like, that could be a nice poem if you did it right!

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    he he he come on peeps

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    you can have a hug jessy *hug* :P

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Unwanted Angel

    Reflection within reflection
    Wings of desperation
    Peer into eternity
    Beyond songs of reality
    Inside the innocent face
    Where treachery embrace
    Inside where fire bleeds
    The eyes become recede

    Thrown from a human's fate
    A demon procreate
    Dark Angel borne from hell
    Released from burning cell
    A mother from heaven's gate
    And lust from a demon mate
    An outcast between the two
    Throughout the year, hate grew

    An angel of both worlds
    From it's womb she hurled
    Down to human's mists
    No longer did she exist
    History forbade her voice
    Left without a choice
    Dear unwanted child
    Face the untamed wild

  • Welshy
    18 years ago

    Eyes of an angel
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    With eyes that sparkle in the midnight sky,
    sparkle with beauty and grace, elegance and style,
    with luscious soft lips and a tempting smile.
    A body so curvaceous, its so slender and sleek
    beauty... at its peak
    You are an angel sent from above,
    i can see your wings, they're as white as a dove's,
    soaring so gracefully, seething with love.
    Your wings are vibrant and blindingly bright,
    all i can see is you this dark night.
    And what a sight, i can barely believe my eyes,
    the way you seem to glide through the sky,
    unto heavens is where you rise,
    to the world of beauty and light,
    hidden by the darkness of night.
    The voice of a songbird when you sing,
    singing songs of the spring,
    and all the joys that it brings,
    for winter once again has passed,
    new flowers grow fast and vast.
    But its still your eyes that conquer all,
    first time i saw them my heart did stall,
    and still this day i hear them call,
    call my name and grasp my heart,
    like they did at the start.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    5 more 5 more 5 more!!! come on FINISH IT *screams* i mean us...Please?! lol

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    not many left now;)

  • End Of Eternity
    18 years ago

    Ask No Angel

    Passion / misery / fear / agony
    all of them breathes in me
    life has been so far so kind
    sometimes I wonder, who to blame?
    God or Mankind
    to this everytime the angel replies
    my dear child, if you hate yourself
    if you cant take the darkness of life
    why dont you embrace suicide?

    Somehow the day came
    when I said to myself
    enough is enough
    the day when I realized
    no matter how hard I try
    survival in this world for me is tough

    Courtly I sipped from my chalice
    desperately I ran towards death to kiss
    only life knows how much I hated it
    but here I am still living in same shit

    This was not the first time
    when I felt betrayed
    miseries kept on visiting me
    even when I tried being dead

    Its not that I was abused by family
    Its not that I have grown being lonely
    all my life with dignity I faced my part of tide
    time stood against me so many times
    but I walked away with pride
    I used to be an idol to many around me
    now passion / misery / fear / agony
    all of them breathes in me

    once again I asked angel to reply
    why whenever I close my eye
    I feel as if I am at the threshold of victory
    but then I realize its not me

    why people only find peace when they die
    on the other these living animals are there to haunt

    to this the angel replied
    my dear child, if you think about hate all the time
    in the end you may get what you want

    so unless you would not realize the beauty of life
    why would someone motivate you to survive
    this life comes to those who deserves the best
    you live your part & in peace your soul may rest
    for those in life who try to run away
    open your eye, there is yet another day

    there is nothing simple in life
    so make the best of it while you are alive
    death is a sweet fact which will come by time
    running against the hands of time is a crime

    I stared at the mirror with a smile
    after all these years of struggle
    what a bitter fact have I realized
    if anyone of you really want to have end to this pain
    please make sure that you ask no angel again
    as they are the one, forever they lie
    talking about life as they dont have the courage to die

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    4 left;) not to many now:)