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Rules:
1. must be on love (happy, sad, etc.)
2. must have at least 12 lines

Prizes:
1st- add to fav and 5 comments
2nd- add to fav and 4 comments
3rd- add to fave and 3 comments
2 HM- 2 comments
everyone else will get a vote.

DEADLINE: August 10th

This Is Where

Look at the Heavens,
Look at the stars,
This is where,
Love gently falls.
Beckon it serenly,
Graciously to you,
This is where,
Love actually grew.

In your arms,
Caress Love softly,
This is where,
You finally knew.
That love is Love,
And extravagantly true,
This is where you realize,
Love was made for you.

xDarkSuicidex

"An Angel"
by Wings of an Angel

Seven years, seven skies,
The little girl no longer cries.
She is adult, yet a child inside,
She has learned to no longer hide.
She knows she has to live, knows she has to die,
But she can't help but miss you, even thought you told a lie.
An angel didn't come, and angel didn't talk,
When you spoke you spoke, but you didn't walk the walk.
You said you'd send an angel, to help her gain her strength,
Now she know she can't trust it, she can't believe it the length.
She wishes she would have said the words she didn't say,
She wishes she would have dared, she wishes every day.
But now she sees and angel, deep down her heart,
She just didn't notice, it was there from the start.
"Ill always be with you" the beautiful angel sings,
"Don't worry, I didn't lie, you will get you're wings"

i hope lyrics are ok?

What You've Done To Me (Lyrics)
by:~*~fallen~*~angel~*~

Tears...fall from my eyes
I can't stand the pain
I'm falling...falling
I cry out...as my body hits the ground
I can't understand my fate
I'm broken...broken

Then you...you saw me lying there
I thought you really cared
I cried out for you to save me
Then you...you laughed and walked away
Broke my heart in two
I can't believe I ever...loved you

Oh baby can't you see
what you've done to me
I'm restless every night
As I cry myself to sleep
I'm an angel falling without her wings
I'm shattered can't you see
What you've done to me

Wishing I could forget you
Your image haunts my dreams
You're all I can think about
You're not as perfect as you seemed
You tore me from the sky
Ripped apart my wings
I'm falling once more
And this time...this time
I won't survive

Oh baby can't you see
What you've done to me
I'm restless every night
As I cry myself to sleep
I'm an angel falling without her wings
I'm shattered can't you see
What you've done to me

I can't stand the pain
I'm losing my mind
Are you happy now
I'm empty inside
I hope you know
What I think of you
I can't believe
I never saw through
All of your lies
Your disguise
I was naive
You made me believe

Oh baby can't you see
What you've done to me
I'm restless every night
As I cry myself to sleep
I'm an angel falling without her wings
I'm shattered can't you see
What you've done to me

Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
What you've done to me

My Teddy Bear

I want you to know just what you mean to me;
You're something I never want to lose.
No matter what you say or do,
I always want to be with you.

You may not be perfect;
a loose thread here and there,
but everyone has flaws and when you
love something
it can never be replaced.
Even by something better.

What would you do if your favourite teddy lost its fluff?
Say 'Bye bye teddy, i enjoyed the time we had together but its time for you to go"...?
No.
You keep him even though hes falling apart;
even though there are better looking and more cuddly teddies out there.
You keep him.

Well you're my teddy bear and
even when you're not cuddly
I still want you
even when you're not smiling
I still want you
even when you're eyes don't twinkle
I still want you
even when you growl
I still want you
even when I push you out of bed
I still want you

Everyone knows that old, worn, tattered teddies are better than shiny new ones.

You're my teddy bear and I love you.

A Final Prayer
by †!♪~*`Bryce Dressler`*~♪!†

A slow rolling tear
Falling down his cheek
As he stood over her bed
he began to feel weak

He couldn't believe it
No way this was true
He couldn't live without her
He wouldn't know what to do

He dropped to his knees
At the head of her bed
Looked up to the ceiling
Crying he said,

"Why'd you do this god
Why'd you take her from me
I need her so much
Why can't you see

It can't end this way
No, she can't die
God please don't do this
I can't say goodbye

She can't go away
Not here, not now
I'll do anything to bring her back
Please just tell me how

Take the life from me
Take my heart and soul
God please bring her back
I don't care what the tole

Take the blood from my veins
The breathe from my chest
I don't care if I die
Just put me to rest

God please listen
The pain is to much to bare
Her life will end real soon
If at all you care"

He stopped speaking for a minute
As she layed there dying
The only sound to be heard
Was of the teenage boy's crying

His tears crashed to the floor
As he barely made a stand
He reached across her body
And held her hand-in-hand

As he wiped his eyes
He couldnt understand
Whyd this have to happen
Whyd it have to end?

He had one last thing to do
As he watched her lay
He had one last minute
One last thing to say

"I have one more thing to ask
a favor, God, from you
If you are going to take her
Can you please take me too?"

Again he fell to his knees
Not knowing what else to say
He held her hand tight
Not ready to give her away

But then he heard the monitor
Beep for the final time
And after that, all to be heard
Was the single flat line.

He let her hand go
And kissed her on the cheek
As more tears came to his eyes
He prayed they'd soon meet

Although she is in heaven
Past the clouds and above
They could deny him her body
But not their love

And when he gets to heaven
He will soon see
She will be waiting
To be together...Eternally

(C) 2005 Bryce Dressler

She Don't Cry
by Tabby

He was proud just to say "She don't cry"
His lovely girl was his world
The sparkle, the shine within his eye

She loved her dad more than anything
He was her world in her mind
There was nothing more God could bring

As she got older he became very sick
But still she didn't cry a tear
So just for her he remained solid as a brick

But days wore on and worse he became
She stayed with him hours on in
Pretending things were still the same

So weeks went by but he was no better
And she saw that he would soon die
But still she didn't cry for he wouldn't let her

She stayed with him and held his hand tight
As she knew it would all be over
She still told him that everything was all right

He didn't believe her but told her it was okay
So she sat silently by his side
There she remained as his life slowly fell away

Then one day he sat up with the strength he had
And said in a whisper "Im proud of you"
She looked at him and all she said was "I know dad"

He slowly slid down and he peacefully died
And finally a tear slid down her cheek
For the first time she laid her head down and cried.....

(I wrote this poem to show that this girl never cried because she had her dad and that was all she needed.)

She Don't Cry
by Tabby

He was proud just to say "She don't cry"
His lovely girl was his world
The sparkle, the shine within his eye

She loved her dad more than anything
He was her world in her mind
There was nothing more God could bring

As she got older he became very sick
But still she didn't cry a tear
So just for her he remained solid as a brick

But days wore on and worse he became
She stayed with him hours on in
Pretending things were still the same

So weeks went by but he was no better
And she saw that he would soon die
But still she didn't cry for he wouldn't let her

She stayed with him and held his hand tight
As she knew it would all be over
She still told him that everything was all right

He didn't believe her but told her it was okay
So she sat silently by his side
There she remained as his life slowly fell away

Then one day he sat up with the strength he had
And said in a whisper "Im proud of you"
She looked at him and all she said was "I know dad"

He slowly slid down and he peacefully died
And finally a tear slid down her cheek
For the first time she laid her head down and cried.....

(I wrote this poem to show that this girl never cried because she had her dad and that was all she needed.)

She Don't Cry
by Tabby

He was proud just to say "She don't cry"
His lovely girl was his world
The sparkle, the shine within his eye

She loved her dad more than anything
He was her world in her mind
There was nothing more God could bring

As she got older he became very sick
But still she didn't cry a tear
So just for her he remained solid as a brick

But days wore on and worse he became
She stayed with him hours on in
Pretending things were still the same

So weeks went by but he was no better
And she saw that he would soon die
But still she didn't cry for he wouldn't let her

She stayed with him and held his hand tight
As she knew it would all be over
She still told him that everything was all right

He didn't believe her but told her it was okay
So she sat silently by his side
There she remained as his life slowly fell away

Then one day he sat up with the strength he had
And said in a whisper "Im proud of you"
She looked at him and all she said was "I know dad"

He slowly slid down and he peacefully died
And finally a tear slid down her cheek
For the first time she laid her head down and cried.....

(I wrote this poem to show that this girl never cried because she had her dad and that was all she needed.)

^^Triple post..ooh...

ok here we go

Let Me Go

You keep walking back into my life,
After all you lied to me about becoming your wife.
Listen can't you please leave, it breaks my heart,
To think of all you've done to me, we must part.

Let me go, I'll be fine, you will too,
I can't say that I don't still love you.
But I don't care anymore, you need to go,
I just can't bare to stoop that low-

As to love you again. After all this,
Running away from me, dating another miss.
Yes I know about her, and how you "loved" her,
Can't you see, you and me, can't occur.

Let me go, you'll be fine without me,
You'll find someone new, who'll make you happy.
I still love you, but this just can't work out,
So goodbye my darling, don't you pout.

Just Let me go...

My Everything
by Me-Duh.. who else would it be by?

You are always there for me,
You never leave my side.
You are my supportive shoulder,
On the sadistic nights i cry.

You can always make me smile,
It's like i have no choice.
There's always laughter in my eyes,
Whenever i hear your voice.

You're the one who helps me,
Through the darkest of the nights.
You comfort me with your kind words,
And tell me all will turn out right.

You are the one who never surrenders,
And helps me to go strong,
Forever, you seem to have my back,
Even when my intentions are wrong.

You always take my mind off
All the pain i feel inside.
you give me reason to stand up tall,
and banish my need to hide.

You are the only one i need,
And you know that this is true.
Nothing else in life matters
Because my everything is you.

=]]

Good Luck All!

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Valentine's Day
by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

They sit together
on the lover's holiday
cuddling, and smiling
acting lovey dovey
he knows she wants to die sometimes
she thinks there might be someone else
they part in their ways
he goes to the one he loves
she to the one that loves her
she holds the cold metal, his photo
crying why couldn't you love me
like the way you love her
she holds the blade closer
thinking "walk the sidewalk"
she gets closer to her want
he now feels her pain
leaving his lover
he runs down the road
now she is thinking "no turning back"
the blade "walks the sidewalk"
now turning, it "crosses the street"
he reaches her house
tears running down their eyes
she clutches the note
he clutches the nob
just a second too late
she lays there motionless
kneeling beside her
he reads the note
"we both can't get what we want"
he knows, though no one else does.
he now belongs to her
she got her wish
but he shall not
that was her happy ending
but his sorrowful beginning

To the world you may look
Like a loving mother of two
But I know you like a book
And see all that you do

You can hide all those scars
From everyone else
But I see them like stars
And hear the stories the each tell

Like the scars on your wrists
And how they always seem to scream
Look at me!,Look at me!
I'm another shattered dream

And how bout that mark your neck
From when you tried to kill yourself
Cause your life was a wreck
And no one would help

You see, I know who you are
And I know who you aren't
And you'll never make it far
Trying to be who you aren't

So what do you say
We both walk away
And start a new life
One where you could be my wife

~I'm not to sure about a title for this one. Oh well, I'm sure I'll think of one sometime~

Fallen From Heaven.

You had fallen from heaven straight into my arms,
Egniting my heart with your sweet seductive charms.
Showed me light in life that I'd never seen before,
Something that my heart and soul had been longing for.
Spreaded your caring angel wings over my head,
Protecting me and saying what had not been said.

Those three simple words that I was needing to hear,
Were right infront of my blind eyes but was unclear.
Clouds were smothering me and all that was around,
Until an angel flew down and then you were found.
The smoke disappeared leaving a vision of you,
A strong feeling of love that seemed long overdue.

The way that you would shelter my soul from the rain,
As you would clear all of the clouds ridding my pain.
You'd feel and heal the beating of my broken heart,
Painting a smile on my face like a piece of art.
Released all the emotions that were trapped inside,
Warm fuzzy feelings that I'd always try to hide.

Romantic enchanted fairytales pranced in my mind,
In books of make believe; my prince I needed to find.
Sweet tunes would play as I would look into your eyes,
And I could see the man who was hidden in disguise.
The savour who had fallen from heaven above,
Is now the angel who helped me believe in love.

© Natalie 2006

Feeling Green in the Game of Love

If only, if only youd look into my eyes,
and see that love for you hidden deep down inside.

i want to laugh with you,
to cry with you,
and hold you for all time.

but shes the one who makes you smile, shes the one you see.
im just a friend, theres no way youd love me.

I dont know how to tell you, or explain about that pain.
You see, it hurts when you walk in the room with her and not with me.

okay i admit it its jealousy im feeling,
but im really having trouble dealing with this love.

once again my dreams are crushed.
once again my heart is squashed.

but still i adore you,
still i dont give up.
Am I crazy or one day will I finally be in luck?
And youll finally feel the same as i have all through this STUPID GAME!

Let Love Make You Strong

Baby girl do your thing,
Let love guide your way,
Baby girl just be careful
That you, arn't led astray.

For love is complicated,
In which no one understands,
Its a deadly virus baby girl
So don't jump at it with all hands.

Look outside your window,
See couples everywhere,
Baby girl just you make sure,
That the one you love really cares.

Baby girl there are bois,
Who will need you for their EGO,
Dig deep and you will find,
That these bois are the feeble.

Take your time with love
For if true it will never end,
Find a boi of wisdom girl,
One who shan't pretend.

Some bois treat girls like objects
Objects of desire,
Pick a boi of power, knowledge,
One who is not a liar.

For once you fall in love,
It will never leave your side.
But to be able to make your mistakes,
First you have to try.

So baby girl do your thing,
Let love guide your way.
But baby girl be careful,
That you arn't lead astray.

If you have read this please criticize and tell how to improve thnx xxxx Alex xxxx

The sadness of the truth

Beautiful boi why do you cry?
When your my world my heart my soul,
Is it because you have done wrong boi,
And now in my heart lies a hole.

Beautiful boi, yes you did hurt me,
With your evil twisted lies,
But beautiful boi how can i not forgive,
Someone with such beautiful eyes.

I feel like a candle beautiful boi,
And were both burning at each end,
soon or later well burn right out,
and then that will be our end.

But beautiful boi even tho your not trusted,
i cherish the ground in which you walk,
I love you with all my heart boi,
But I'm afraid I'm going to walk.

"Scared"
By: ~Flying High~

Trying to make sense of all these unvoiced, unneeded
Thoughts in my head, jumbled together so well.
Idle fingets wandering aimlessly through my hair.
LIke sewing something together without a neelde or thread.

Grasping at every given idea, thought, memory,
Racking my brain for a notion, a reason, a glimpse
Into how someone like you can love someone like me.
Tell me, how truthful can a love truely be?

Opening up my head and heart, opening up wide
Trusting anyone new is hard for me,
But trusting you comes oh so very naturally.
Holding ont you and me, and our memories.

Hopeing you too feel the same way ,but too
Timid to open up and let you in.
Closing up, sealing off these words that linger oh so
Very close to the tip of my tounge, yes oh so close.

I cant let them come out, not wanting to rush all of
This too much, unsure of yours and even my own feelings.
Somehow hoping youll figure it out and make the
First move, because for once in my life, I am scared.

Scared that what I feel isnt mutal, scared that
Your just messing around. and scared that Ill fall
Fall in a love that resembles the one that my parents had.
But most of all, Im scared of being in love with you.

Everyt time you call, my heart skips a beat Every time
Your near, all of my many problems seem to fade.
Feeling you close to me, and knowing that you care.
I am falling so fast, so far; So in love with the idea of being in love with you.

You are my all

The apple of my eye

The air I need to breath

The tear I need to cry

You are the blood

That pumps my viens

You are the beat in my heart

Without you I am nothing

A end without a start

You are the reason that I am

And the reason I'll always be

Without your love to keep me going

There would be no me

Please dont Go
by Mr_blueknight

While your walking close to me
And touch my skin so gently
I feel the coldness of your kiss and embrace
So cold that burn my skin and face

Your smile although yet so captivating
But not that bright like sun in the morning
Your trying to say all the good things
So tell me why your eyes were lying

Obviously I know that theres something wrong
And you dint want to hurt my feeling
So you keep the secret about your leaving
Thinking that I dint feel a great pain

You know that my life will surely end when you leave me
That your the only girl who can comfort me
Your my remedy who cure all this pain
So please dont go and please dont leave me here

This Beautiful Disaster

Tears would gently brush my cheeks
And take away my laughter

He was beautiful,
But my heart forbade
That beautiful disaster

As the days blanketed malice fears
My nights were filled with sorrow

He was beautiful,
But I often wondered,
If he'd be beautiful tomorrow.

And as the power overtook me
I knew then, everything I'd lose

He was beautiful,
And my soul challenged
If his beauty portrayed truth.

Alas the tears still brush my cheeks
And steal away my laughter

He's so beautiful,

But my heart forbids...
This beautiful disaster.

the past

the past is all so really to me
with memories that never seem to fade
as i lay here at night crying because of a lie that you told you can something is not right
I'm all grown up now
I'm not 10 any more
so why do i still feel like it was only yesterday
it has been 6 years since i left you
but sometimes it feels like only days
sometimes i feel like was all my fault
but now i no the truth even if you dont
i no you will never admit to it but in the end it was all your fault

linda

What would Happen

If i got hurt would you take care of me
if i died what would you do........
if i told you that i truly loved you what would you say back
if we were together would take care
of me
would you say that you love me everyday...till i died
even in death would you love me...
would you hate me if i say that i love you
i can't live without you
i truly love you and i want to be with you till the day i die and forever more

Stuck In The Past
by ♥ Jєѕѕу ♥

Stuck in the past, caught in a net
My broken heart has not given up yet
Yearning for you, crying at night
Trapped in the dark, fighting for light..

Emotions tied tight, impossible to retreat
My brain waiting for my heart to delete
Jumbled thoughts flow through my mind
A safe, peaceful place they must find..

Please God relieve me of this pain
And pour all these feelings down the drain
Free me from the past, untangle this net
For another man I have met..

October Rain

you don't know how you make me feel, standing here next to you. knowing that i love you, and hoping you love me too. the dark purple sky, with clouds all around. as the soft rain falls on us, and we listen to the sound.

i wish it would never end, this beautiful October rain, because when i'm with you, i can feel no pain. as we lay on the ground, staring up at a star. i think of all the good times, and how we've come so far.

had i only just known, it would be our last night. had i only just known, this would be your last sight. i never would have left, from that soft spot on the ground, where we lay every day, because that's where each other, we found.

but now i'm alone, you're simply a memory. forgotten by all, all of course except me. i kept you in my heart, still you're a shattered dream. i don't want to let go, but you're fading into steam.

i want to be with you, want to see you anew. so i found out a way, to be with you real soon. and as i pick up this gun, and hold it up to my brain. i'll never forget, that this is my last October Rain.

Oscar

YOU AND THE MOON
I don’t know how to begin;
This night seems to wash away all sin.

It’s a full moon night,
And the moon is bright;
My thoughts are flooded by this light-
So pure, so white

I look at the moon and now I smile,
After a long time I feel I’m alive.
The cool breeze brushes my face,
After a long time I’m out of the daze.

I just want to fall into the sky,
But not because you’ve told me goodbye;
Don’t get me wrong, I don’t want to die,
I just want to get near the moonlight.

I stare upwards at the moonlit sky,
And now I begin to fly;
I begin to sail higher,
The moonlight soothes my inner fire.

Though I hardly get closer,
That little is enough to inspire.

Not you and not even your kiss,
No sunset, no rainbow, is prettier than this.
Now I feel joy, and now I feel bliss!
You’re not there, but there is nothing I miss.

The sun’s never made the sky brighter,
Even angels cannot make it whiter.
About you I think not, I’m no liar-
I just want to keep going higher!

A cloud now covers the beautiful moon,
I’m in a trance, and I drift to a swoon.

But the breeze picks up and the darkness dies,
And once again I begin to fly;
I’m not thinking about you, this isn’t a lie,
Without you too, I’m so high.

But now my mind begins to worry,
The moon shall begin to wane in a hurry;
But I’m not scared of losing the moon,
I’m afraid of falling back into gloom.

For when the moon will set, the light shall end,
And my thoughts shall break free;
Into the world, gloom’s all I’ll send,
Because that’s all I’ll have with me.

Now let me take you into my soul,
Isn’t the moon so full and whole?
But if you want to know what is contrast,
Then just have a look at my broken heart.

The moon doesn’t always shine,
Yet it shall always be;
I cannot call you mine,
Still you shall stay in me.

I Will Love You Till....

By Tormented

Till the sun stops shining
Till the birds stop singing
Till the stars stop sparkling
Till the earth stops spinning
I will Love you

Till the time thorns don't hurt
Till the time flowers look ugly
Till the Time Mountains crumble
Till the Time this fire inside me dies
I will love you

Till the snow stops being white
Till the night stops being dark
Till the sky stops being blue
Till the winter becomes summer
I will love you

Till these feelings vanish
Till these thoughts disappear
Till the numbers end
I will love you

Till the angels kill
Till the devil cries
Till the hell dries
Till the judgment day
I will love you

Till no living thing lives
Till the time ends and beyond
Till the day I die
And Even after that
I WILL love you

Upon a lover's Ideal

Lame beauty withering slowly
Against the precious life form's arm.
A kiss planted so gently
Upon a lover's palm.

Sweet teardrops of the sunlight
Bathe them in a reclusive glow
A shadow falls intently
Upon a lover's plateau.

Alas! It seems pure nature
Has followed in appeal,
So calm, the world is living
Upon a lover's ideal.

Great Job everyone...

Great Work everyone. I will try my best to have the winners posted by the 16th.
Good Luck.

Good luck, everyone. =)

Good Luck All- Shoot, I Was gonna switch my poem.. lol. oh well.

xD

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Yeah good luck everybody!!

aah, I can barely wait... almost falling out of my chair here:P lmao

don't worry I'm pretty sure that I can have the winners posted on Monday after I get back from volleyball practice...I'll try not to keep you waiting too long...

thanx... I don't think I'll win, cause "A final prayer", I mean wow.. that poem blew me away...

Everyone has a fair chance...I'm not sure if I got to that one yet or if I even got to yours yet, but everyone at least gets a vote...

can't wait to see who wins good luck everyone

I'm sorry everyone but you might have to wait a few more days...I'm very sore from practice and I haven't gotten through all the poems yet...I will have the winners by the end of the week...

Thank You.