something new i think you might like it

okay well i have done this but i don't know if it is for everyone

take a nursery rhime and turn it into your own poem you can make it evil and dark or bright and happy or comical whatever just try it

have fun with it and the contest will be over after 10 poems and the reward haven't been determined yet so go and have fun.

here are two examples of what i want

Baa baa black sheep
by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

Baa baa black sheep
with coal black wool
hides in the night
just wait, you'll see,
your lurking fate in darkness
out he'll come
acting innocent
"I'm lost here"
he'll say to you
"please help me
so the wolves don't take me away"
thinking he's hopeless without you
you give him consent
you'll tell him you wanted a sheep,
you love their wool
then you shout
KISS ME
KILL ME
and out his lights go
for he was an impostor
for you are the true
Baa Baa Black Sheep

Killing fables
by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

Jack and Jill
a pale of water
up the hill
Jill was cute
but Jack thought Mary was hotter
Jack fell down
broke his crown
just before he fell
Jill stabbed him
teach you to look at Mary,
think twice next time.
Jill cries after him
then silently walks away

this isnt nursey rhyme its fairytale i duno if its what you want but task a look anyway xxx alex xxx

Once upon a time,
Whilst i lay asleep,
An angel fell out of the sky,
And lay down next to me.

My prince charming,
Kissed myself awake,
Took me away for a while,
Gave my hurt heart a break.

When they got back,
He expressed his strong love,
They got married the next week,
Where momma released 2 doves.

They settled down in a house,
Where they had a precious child,
The child grew noble like his father,
their perfect life sailed.

Their family is no less than perfect,
With fun, joy, love and laughter,
And as you probably guessed,
they all lived happily ever after.

XXXXXXXxxxxxXXXXXX i didn't really like this just spare of the moment let me know what you think anyways xxx Alex xxx

that is what i'm looking for so yes this is fine

--I'm not sure if this was what you wanted, so if it's not, tell me and I'll with draw.

Feeling What They May

Now my children,
I'm going to tell you a tale,
Of pain and suffering,
Where everyone fails.
There are no hero's;
No knights to save the day,
There is no more light,
To show you the way.
I'll tell you of a tale,
Now filled with blood;
Once was sweet;
I'll tell you of love.

This story begins,
One grand day,
With a boy and a girl,
Feeling what they may.
I would tell you,
Of the feelings they repress,
But these things you can't explain,
NOr put them to the test.
They were given,
A love anew,
One little chance,
That they all ready blew.
Children in love,
An absurd little thing!
They shouldn't have done it,
For their hearts now sting.
Perhaps they should have,
Given up in the beginning,
For we all new,
There would be no winning.
But they went on,
Not heeding a care,
Not listening,
To what we shared.

They were told,
They could not be,
They were too young,
They could not see.
This love of theirs,
Will tear them apart,
Leave them there,
To pick up their hearts.
Bu alas,
Things soon failed,
And they hid their hearts,
Behind a broken viel.
Things didn't go right,
As they had told them before,
They weren't right together,
They were now sure.

So the boy and girl,
Lonely and lost,
Left each other,
A a most precious cost.
Letting themselves go,
To poison and blade,
They disappeared,
Going where they bade.
But they soon found;
I must say I fear,
They couldn't live in life or death,
Without the other near.
Their souls soon linked,
Together as they may,
Boy and girl,
Feeling what they may.

xDarkSuicidex

Hell's Star

The howling cries pierce your ears,
Your own screams have left you in tears,
With brittle bones you’re growing numb
Drowning in the misery of what you’ve become.

Twinkle Twinkle little scar,
The Devil has made you what you are.
Down below the world so awry,
Like the crimson tears you cry.
Twinkle Twinkle little scar,
The Devil has made you what you are.

Captive in your own marvelled deceit
Kept from the world you hunt to eat,
Tasting the darkness they try to hide
You’re the devils huntsman in disguise.

Twinkle Twinkle little scar,
The Devil has made you what you are.
Down below the world so awry,
Like the crimson tears you cry.
Twinkle Twinkle little scar,
The Devil has made you what you are.

sorry forgot to inform all

two poems per person
must be your's

okies thanx for letting mine be entered :):)

half way there come on guys and gals

Imma try this.. umm ill attempt it and post it when im done(ifg i like it) lol.

=]]

-Me-

never mind, i must get off the computer but i will try to write one tonight and enter it tomorrow. =]

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Muffin Man

Oh, do you know the muffin man?
The muffin man? The muffin man?
Oh, do you know the muffin man
Who lives on Drury Lane?
With his jelly rolls and beady eyes
His twisted smile and unforgiving lies
The muffin man beckons young children in
Leads them off merrily to the kitchen
He chops them up and when they're ground
He breads them and sells them by the pound
Oh, do you know the muffin man?
The muffin man? The muffin man?
Oh, he would love to serve you on a pan
He's mentally insane...

wait...is this a contest or just for fun? My poem is a failure so i am hoping this isn't a contest.

it is a contest and just for fun

oh well

~Baa Baa Black Sheep~

Baa baa black sheep deep within my soul,
clouded by the soot, emitted by the coal.
Hidden in the darkness, lies my hopeless fate,
yet a pheonix lights the way, to my final date.

It's fire is my passion, taking me away,
awaiting what I long for, final judgement day.
Ever since you left, I've been dying inside,
bottling up emotions, I wish I didn't hide.

I knew I didn't need you, even from the start,
yet I let you break, my already broken heart.
I'm still lost without you and your nefarious ways.
you've left me empty-handed, in a vicarious daze.

~Sean Dohr~

Hahahahahahahahaha...so lame.

this contest is going to end this Friday and results MAY be in by no later than tuesday

hmmm....is this thing over yet?

no it ends tomorrow

i'm going to give every one a comment and vote on each poem they sent me and 2 on any poem of my choice

Cool thankies. =]

yey!

That's pretty cool...
But who won?

xDarkSuicidex