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Aline
18 years ago

I was thinking about havin a poetic verses chats, what do u think about continuing the verse i write now... and so on.

The wind whispered me a touch of hate, that closed all the heavenly gates...

- Name : Michael D Nalley
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Michael D Nalley
18 years ago

Feelings I've failed to understand

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Aline
18 years ago

and the tragedy is a song i sing

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

with the burning sensation in my soul

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

as i tumble through hells firey pits

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

and clash against the raging storms

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

with thunder in my hand and lightning in my eyes

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

my heart is no longer one of innocence

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

as my soul burns with a lust for revenge

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

the devil himself won't dare to see

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

for no one knows what a girl like me is capable of

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

my mind's no longer free

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

as the flames burn all my thoughts

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

my inner piece flees from my chest

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

for there is no sincerity for what i am about to do

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

just remember this is your gun

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

and it is not my temple that it is pointed at this time

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

and as you plead your silent words

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

and wish your hushed prayers

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

my eyes will glow with something new

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

as i put my finger upon the trigger

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

images of our past come flooding from my heart

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

as a tear softly lands on your quivering arms

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

trembling i place the gun upon my own instead

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

and i bite my lip; holding back my good-bye

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

sudenly i feel your hand upon my cheek

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

and your soft breath upon my neck

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

your hand devours mine over top this iron filled of bullets

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

and you brush your hand across my cheek and wipe away my tears

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

a gentle kiss whispers the words "i love you"

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

and my heart bleeds with the words, "how could you?"

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

the gun's now out of my quivering hand

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

and smashed to the ground as your fingers entwine with mine

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

but the smash was not of the ground, and you began to slip away

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

as i look back on memories and whisper to your corpse "you were nothing to me."

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

but with the saphire droplets slipping from my eyes

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

i turn to walk away, and fall to my knees

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

with my head upon where i used to listen to your heart beat

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HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
18 years ago

and i crumble to the depths of the devils calloused palms

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Mommy And Me
18 years ago

but then his face turned into your smile

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