another verse chat shall we?

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    and my charred fingers and coal heart will whisper good-bye

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  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    and i shall join the devil upon his throne

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  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    and breathe in his ghastly existence forevermore.

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  • Randomness
    18 years ago

    I deserve this fiery ending

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  • ! CLAIREEE.
    18 years ago

    although this love in my heart, is weaker then the hatred i am sending.

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  • xJESSiiCAtm
    18 years ago

    Through the tears, fire and pain

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  • Jordan
    18 years ago

    Left, just a shell built by disdain

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  • Aline
    18 years ago

    overwhelmed with the agony and the charade

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  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    no longer am i only afraid

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  • Aline
    18 years ago

    but deserted in a place i cannot breathe

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  • amandaa
    18 years ago

    and the darkness of this pain encloses me

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  • Aline
    18 years ago

    i am speechless i am moveless i am a dead corpse on the floor

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  • amandaa
    18 years ago

    and the reason I collapsed; I couldn't hold on anymore.

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  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    please tell daddie i'm joining him once again

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  • ImagineTheImage
    18 years ago

    he's gone so my only friends are paper and a pen

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  • Kirsty palmer
    18 years ago

    writting down on paper, My hate for this world

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  • ImagineTheImage
    18 years ago

    indulged a knife in my girl

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  • ImagineTheImage
    18 years ago

    There's a line for your love, and I'll be glad to wait

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  • Randomness
    18 years ago

    for when i wait everything shall stop which makes my heart ache

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  • ImagineTheImage
    18 years ago

    including my heart will stop, I'llsleep forever, never wake

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  • MEGZ is wondering what to do about life
    18 years ago

    And I lay here with death in my eyes

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  • ImagineTheImage
    18 years ago

    finally closed with two of the softest fingers

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  • Seronum
    18 years ago

    My soul crosses over and my spirit still lingers

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  • Randomness
    18 years ago

    My spirit looks over my still body
    (is this going on forever?)

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  • John (Mr. Whuppy)
    18 years ago

    I think this poems got slightly shoddy

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  • Esther
    18 years ago

    this reply isn't to add to the poem but simply to say!! Hey person above me!! You ruined it!!! it might have gone off course but the whole point of it was to have fun!! if you thought that i didn't want to know! why couldn't you have
    a) not mentioned it or
    b) just continued it!!

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  • John (Mr. Whuppy)
    18 years ago

    sorry sorry sorry
    oops

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