*shae-natasha*
18 years ago
ok, hi everyone! im in love with my best friend and i cant seem to write a poem good enough to give him. i am just 13 and he is 12. but we are quite mature so dont post poems that are like 'i like you alot! will you be my boyfriend?' or whatever because thats not what im looking for! ok, thankyou guys so much for your help! i need it so much! my confronting rakaia is long overdue...! |
*shae-natasha*
18 years ago
so do you gus have any ideas where i can find the perfect poem? or do you have the perfect poem? or have you written the perfect poem? |
*shae-natasha*
18 years ago
i cant believe how much i love him! |
*shae-natasha*
18 years ago
thanks again |
Truest Lies
18 years ago
My poem "I Want..." Could be something similar to what you are looking for. |
Rhyme of rhythm
18 years ago
try to look at this |
*shae-natasha*
18 years ago
well Truest lies, that is a beautiful poem and i absolutely love it! well done! but im not sure if thats what i need cause remember hes only 12, and his vocabulary isnt as expanded as yours or mine... |
*shae-natasha*
18 years ago
Mr Blue knight, that is a beutiful poem, just as Truest lies was but im sorry to say that that is also not what im looking for. but nice poem anyway. read my above comment and see if that gives you anymore ideas... |
Andy loves Jesus
18 years ago
Check out "Just wish you knew" Might be what your looking for. |
*shae-natasha*
18 years ago
thnkyou andy! that poem is absolutely perfect! mwa! |
Andy loves Jesus
18 years ago
No problem |
♥s|a|r|a|h♥
18 years ago
one of my poems called broken heart might help you...but im not sure |