the perfect poem for your best friend who you have deeper feelin

  • *shae-natasha*
    18 years ago

    ok, hi everyone! im in love with my best friend and i cant seem to write a poem good enough to give him. i am just 13 and he is 12. but we are quite mature so dont post poems that are like 'i like you alot! will you be my boyfriend?' or whatever because thats not what im looking for! ok, thankyou guys so much for your help! i need it so much! my confronting rakaia is long overdue...!

  • *shae-natasha*
    18 years ago

    so do you gus have any ideas where i can find the perfect poem? or do you have the perfect poem? or have you written the perfect poem?

  • *shae-natasha*
    18 years ago

    i cant believe how much i love him!

  • *shae-natasha*
    18 years ago

    thanks again

  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    My poem "I Want..." Could be something similar to what you are looking for.

    Basically, any love poem..

    //T.L.//

  • Rhyme of rhythm
    18 years ago

    try to look at this

    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=721816

    geneross

  • *shae-natasha*
    18 years ago

    well Truest lies, that is a beautiful poem and i absolutely love it! well done! but im not sure if thats what i need cause remember hes only 12, and his vocabulary isnt as expanded as yours or mine...
    also, he dosnt understand poetry like ourselves do. we have a passion for it. actually maybe a poem isnt the right way to confront him? oh well, keep searching for poems cause confronting him in a poem is what i like, its what i am.
    and then theres the fact that im confronting him and i want the poem to say, like, how i've kept it in for so long and stuff. i dont know if he'll reject or accept me...
    anyways, thankyou for helping hunni!
    much appreciated...
    love from shae-natasha gilliland

    xoxo

  • *shae-natasha*
    18 years ago

    Mr Blue knight, that is a beutiful poem, just as Truest lies was but im sorry to say that that is also not what im looking for. but nice poem anyway. read my above comment and see if that gives you anymore ideas...
    thankyou for bothering to help.
    mwah!
    love from shae-natasha gilliland

    xoxo

  • Andy loves Jesus
    18 years ago

    Check out "Just wish you knew" Might be what your looking for.

  • *shae-natasha*
    18 years ago

    thnkyou andy! that poem is absolutely perfect! mwa!

  • Andy loves Jesus
    18 years ago

    No problem

  • ♥s|a|r|a|h♥
    18 years ago

    one of my poems called broken heart might help you...but im not sure