Best contest with no reward!

  • Drew Gold
    18 years ago

    Instead of promising rewards and not following through, I decided I'd do this.

    Gimme anything. And make me proud!

  • Jordan
    18 years ago

    Cocaine Angel
    By: Jordan

    Take her
    Away

    Lead her
    Astray

    Make her soar
    Above the clouds

    Take pain
    Away

    Lead pain
    Astray

    Darken it within your
    Loveless shrouds

    Enter
    Her soul -
    Bloodstream
    Make her whole
    Lovely dream
    A reality
    Enter

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Missing From The Picture
    by ♥ Jєѕѕу ♥

    Staring softly at the family picture
    Glittery tears form in tender eyes
    Slowly running down pale cheeks
    On that dark night she silently cries..

    The brother she once loved is gone
    His gentle smile no longer glows
    Now lying peacefully underground
    Clutching but a single ruby rose..

    Absent from this sparkly picture
    The love left so empty, so alone
    A jigsaw puzzle missing a piece
    A king without a golden throne..

    Their connection of love was broken
    Locked up hastily and hidden was the key
    Over the years it has slowly repaired itself
    And brother and sister they will always be..

  • Tiny Reader
    18 years ago

    Pathetic Wish of a Writer

    How pathetic is it
    That I sit with emotion?
    And instead of facing
    My firing pain
    I write it down
    And wish it away.

    My excuses are plenty
    I reason with myself
    That I need to express
    My anger in
    A healthy way
    But is this so?

    I hide away writing
    Through my damned lack of esteem
    Too afraid to conquer
    My tiring,
    Withering,
    Wishes.

    So writers lock away,
    Just for a while
    What's keeping you hidden
    Making you frown
    Don't write for acceptance
    For forgiveness and pity
    Speak for these things
    You seek in your dreams.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    Heart burning, tears pouring out fast,
    The darkness around is controlling, vast.
    Emptiness inside, no point to survive,
    I've lost the only thing keeping me alive.

    The darkness is here because you're gone,
    Although I know you'll be back before long.
    Sitting here thinking of how we once were
    Yet our lives have been messed up, stirred.

    I miss you, aching to see your lips again,
    Hearing you say my name as a friend.
    Feeling your touch, though it's been a while,
    I'm madly in love with you; I fell for your smile.

    I hope someday we can have what we once did,
    But it disintegrated like being put in acid.
    The emptiness was once filled up,
    But now you're traveling around Europe.

    I just hope we can fill the void,
    I'm sorry for what I did; I know you're annoyed.
    I'll hide my feelings if you talk to me again,
    Because I miss you AJ. You were my friend.

    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • Drew Gold
    18 years ago

    Screw convention. Humbly here is a poem of mine just to show my style and what I may be looking for. That's not to say I'm not open to all kinda of poetry, just that I personally like abstract, solid and succinct writing [it's what I strive for but always fall short and land in my couch of recycled emotion ;)]

    You tiptoe through my dreams
    stampeding as I wake

    a rush of wind then rises
    freezing solid, it does stay

    a block within my center
    that perfect yesterday

    a static pulse of thought
    this waiting satellite

    stopped along its orbit
    spreads out into a web

    catches dreams, devours
    your every signal sent

    a lingering transmission:
    silence chewing silence

    ~ will not be counted in the results.
    Show me diversity

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    I Am

    A shattered cough,
    Lost breath,
    Broken skin,
    I am Death.

    A single look,
    A glance above,
    A glimmering eye,
    I am Love.

    A touch that lied,
    Broken Trust,
    Lost Love,
    I am Lust.

    Wondering alone,
    Lost Fate,
    Never Love,
    I am Hate.

    A gracious smile,
    A golden key,
    A gate of Trust,
    I am Destiny.

    Unbroken lies,
    Not left in dust,
    An open arch,
    I am Trust.

    A broken smile,
    I do defy,
    What is truth?
    I am a Lie.

    A happy time,
    Everyone's strife,
    You'll never forget,
    That I am Life

    xDarkSuicidex

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    18 years ago

    By My Side
    by ([-untitled-])

    I want to be,
    next to you.
    I miss you when,
    you're far away.
    being with you,
    makes my day.

    I need you to be near,
    when you're here,
    I have no fear.
    but when you leave,
    when you're gone,
    I'm forgotten.
    abandoned.
    left out,
    in the cold.

    I cry,
    I die,
    Inside,
    it kills me.
    I can't survive,
    without you.
    I can't deny,
    I need you..

    I need you to,
    be by my side,
    for me to hide,
    sheltered behind.
    this burning desire,
    like gasoline,
    on fire
    ecstasy-
    only higher,
    but then I learn...
    you're a liar

    a cheat
    a sneak
    a crook
    like, a coded book..

    a story consisting,
    of torn pages.
    and forgotten,
    lies.
    i forgot to read,
    between the
    broken lines.

    now I see,
    how you're a fake.
    it's like finally,
    I've begun to wake.
    from a clouded dream,
    an incubus
    of screams.
    a nightmare,
    of lies,
    atleast,
    that's what it seems.

    now everything,
    is back,
    to the way
    it used to be.
    nothing is right,
    there is no more light,
    the world is
    covered,
    smoldered in night.
    the eyes of the people,
    are shadowed,
    in fright.

    I can't look you
    in the eyes.
    can't face,
    your demonic lies.
    I can never,
    bear the sight.
    because of you,
    I will never
    be alright.
    your lies show the fact,
    that you never feel contrite.
    this spark of hatre
    is what,
    you ignite.

    your lies,
    they kill me,
    burn me inside.
    make me feel,
    a desperate
    need to hide.
    can't you tell?
    that it's you
    I despise?

    please leave me.
    just forget me.
    I desperately need,
    for you to regret me.

    just find,
    someone else.
    to torment.
    to torture.
    to curse.

    and to make their lives
    miserably worse

    please find,
    another girl,
    to kill,
    with your lies.
    because no more tears,
    will fall
    from these eyes.
    these cheeks,
    shall be dry.
    I will never again cry...

    But I want,
    you to know,
    that I still
    need you...
    by my side.

  • -The-Undying-
    18 years ago

    Teenage Anthem

    When you wake up early,
    And your already fukin late for work.
    Your bound to get a promotion surely.
    Your a far better than some supid store clerk.
    When you go to grab your weed,
    And you realized you have none and your going beserk.
    When all your friends are addicted to speed,
    And your the only one that doesn't feel like a jerk.

    Then this is your TEENAGE ANTHEM!
    Tear the power from your mindless leaders!
    But don't forget to not to bite the hand of your feaders!
    Anhilate the power.
    Pull out the ak-47 and watch there bitch ass skower.
    If you like stayin up all night and sleeping all day,
    If you have spent your whole life lookin for the perfect lay.
    Then this is your TEENAGE ANTHEM!

    Break from your last plea, take my hand to guide you.
    Take whats free, even if you are a jew.
    Crooked smiles agree, that we should all stop sniffing glue.
    Hidden in the shadows like a banshee, we still deny that we screw.

    Push your fingers one more time into my mind.
    Take them out and see what you will find.
    My army of heretic youths will rob you and leave you blind.
    And if your sick of listening to old people and being kind.

    Then this is your TEENAGE ANTHEM!
    Tear the power from your mindless leaders!
    But don't forget to not to bite the hand of your feaders!
    Anhilate the power.
    Pull out the ak-47 and watch there bitch ass skower.
    If you like stayin up all night and sleeping all day,
    If you have spent your whole life lookin for the perfect lay.
    Then this is your TEENAGE ANTHEM!

  • nobody truly knows me
    18 years ago

    Changes From Day To Night

    Sunshine,
    Joy spreads throughout the land.
    Hope once more is mine,
    I can again understand.

    Little children come out to play,
    As the sun is shining bright.
    People everywhere embrace the day,
    Happiness is everywhere in sight.

    And then, behold!
    The sun does set.
    Heat turns to cold,
    Evil is about to be met.

    Night,
    Everything fades to black.
    Gone is the sense of right,
    Safety we now lack.

    People hover in fear,
    Dread settles in.
    Wishes to disappear,
    Are thought of again and again.

    Then a single ray of light,
    Promises the beginning of day.
    It penetrates the night,
    Driving fear away.

    We again are free to hope,
    Again are free to play.
    No longer will we mope,
    Until the end of day.

    For when it comes night,
    The fear starts again.
    And only till it's light,
    Will the fear finally end.

  • silhouette fairy
    18 years ago

    Killing fables
    by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

    Jack and Jill
    a pale of water
    up the hill
    Jill was cute
    but Jack thought Mary was hotter
    Jack fell down
    broke his crown
    just before he fell
    Jill stabbed him
    teach you to look at Mary,
    think twice next time.
    Jill cries after him
    then silently walks away

  • The Lonely Rose
    18 years ago

    I Never Stopped Loving You

    Why did you leave me after all we had...
    Why did you push me away...
    Did you want me with you at all...
    Why did leave me for another woman after i gave you everything..
    Why did you get married to her when i told you how i felt....
    Why did you forget about me...
    I turned a teacher....
    And i saw your kids everyday...
    I was their favorite teacher....
    I wish they were ours....
    our kids...
    Do you really love her??
    Did you feel anything for me??
    In my soul i am dead hoping to come back to life to see you once more.....
    But now you notice me..
    at Back to school night...
    You started to talk to me more..
    I loved it...
    But your wife made you move...
    I can't see your beautiful kids anymore...
    nor you..
    But why do you say that you truly loved me when I lay dying in your arms..
    I couldn't handle it anymore....
    You just not With me in my soul...
    Why are you holding me saying that you care with all your heart..
    But all i can say to you is that....
    before i am gone from this world..
    *whispers* i never stopped loving you....

  • None
    18 years ago

    Lonely Sleeper

    With the glow of his soul waning at each moment's breath, he stood alone in front his mirror and muttered aloud,

    "I am but a man. How can she, but a woman, wound me so deeply? I must be in love!"

    And, with that said, he dragged his body, now cumbersome with feelings of morose and anguish, to his bed. Solitary and confined by the walls of his mind, he lived; solitary and confined by the walls of his room, he slept.

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Daunted by Truth

    Languishing memories wandering,
    With many distant solitude thoughts,
    Painted pictures freezing over time,
    Compelling lips to tie double knots.

    Should I speak of truth?

    No, I can't.

    Carnage words forsaking emotions,
    Immersing dilemmas beyond sight,
    Daunted by truth in need of repairing,
    Battling a constant contagious fight.

    Should I just give up?

    No, I can't.

    Baffling days seem to be hopeless,
    Mistakes carve into walls built around,
    Scorching all pure, innocent beauty,
    Framed portraits stay left on the ground.

    Should I show my pain?

    No, I can't.

    Distracted faces turn and walk away,
    Ashamed from unworthy familiar lies,
    Rivalry's between false and honesty,
    Go unheard along with tears she cries.

    ......I think I'm afraid of telling the truth.

    Copyright (C) Natalie.

  • Drew Gold
    18 years ago

    1st place Illuminati - Watching you
    Very nice writing, so emotive and light and poetic.

    2nd place Bob Schank
    what i believe this poem is lacking in imagery more than makes up for it in the wisdom of the message.

    "follow the inner peace
    of the deceased"
    -- my favorite line of any on this page.

    3rd place Natalie
    for me he flow was a bit stumbly at times and syntax is a bit weird in a few places, but other than that I liked the imagery and truth of this piece.