Jenna's contest.

Okay, so i thought of another one lol. Since summer is almost over, i thought it would be nice to write a poem about summer. Anything about summer, something that make you happy about summer, your favorite thing about summer, your favorite memory from this summer or any other summer, just anything ! I will close the contest after 15 poems, and there will be 3 winners.

So, it has to be new, original, and your own. =)

3 - 5 r/r/c
2 - 10 r/r/c
1 - favorites, 15 r/r/c

Hope people participate and have fun !

Summer Passion

Summer heat is in the air
While the one you love is near

You sneak a hug and a kiss
Wanting more is what you wish

Seeing that sparkle in her eye
Gives you the passion that reaches the sky

Needing the sweet embrace of her touch
Has you yearning for ecstasy so much

The smell of her extravagant scent
Keeps your mind going with hours well spent

Releasing the urges from deep within
Your bodies pull together and mend

As the room fills up with sweat and desire
It makes ya both think that the room is on fire

Continuing to pleasure each other in every way
With your bodies moving with a magical sway

Knowing the end is almost near
Your body begins to fill with fear

Not for the reason you are thinking
But for the reason that has me sinking

Summer is now over and done
Which sends you back home and thats not fun

Summertime is when we had our time together
That is when I realized the passion I have for you will last forever

Awe, that was cute =)

Summer's Last Goodbye
By: Twisted Heart

The distant dream of summer love
Has ended with a sad goodbye
An Autumn glow has now replaced
The light of a celestial sky.

Two young lovers who found each other
Upon the sand traps on the beach
Now hold hands and make a promise
The love they shared, they'd keep.

The moonbeams capture their silhouettes
As they share a final kiss
Together for one moment more
Surrendering to nocturnal's bliss.

Very good job my dear, you captured what i think is almost every teenagers summer romance. And you had very good wording, and excellent flow, i really enjoyed reading that. =)

i think it's more autumn that i wrote about lol....
well anyways, watever......lol XD

Summer becomes Autumn
by adrian or adrianc1294

tree leaves fall on the ground
goodbye summer, autumn will come around
green would turn into brown
playing with piles of leaves will make your frown upside down

it would be a little colder
a warm embrace you'll get from your lover
it would all be nice and cozy
and you'll see autumn's leaves falling sweetly

Lol totally fine. Good job. =)

do we really have to wait that long????? 15 poems? he he he there's 3 of us, WE WIN!!!! JK

so like lets say something happened last yr durin the summer that has really changed u...can u write about that. sry im no good at readin rules:P

Lol yeah, you shure can =)

Memories

I remember last summer, about you and I,
How we were together, and I felt so high.
Then my family came in and now you’re gone,
Though this was a year ago, I still think of you at dawn.

You and I always knew we’d one day be,
Then one day you asked to be with me.
That was the day, I could never forget,
Through all the pain, I will never regret…

The memories are here now, bursting in my mind,
You’ve been forever, but not left behind.
I still think of you after all of this, I can’t let go,
But no one knows, I don’t let these feelings show.

You and I would talk on the phone until 3,
After all that talking, we’d hang up so sleepy.
But we didn’t mind, we kept the love flame alive,
Then my family came in…and we couldn’t survive.

They took my phone and stalked you,
Never took their eyes from you, it’s true.
They tell me about it now, thinking I’ve let go,
But little go they know that my embers still glow.

You and I will always have our memories inside,
Though you’re gone now, no more will I cry.
You’ve run away because without me there’s no hope,
I’m sorry that they hurt you; I was your safety rope.

But now your god knows where, no ones really sure,
I hope you’re safe, because I know you’re insecure.
I’ll never forget last summer, how you took my heart away,
I miss you, I’m sorry; I’ll see you again someday…

~*Who Cares?*~
Hope this is alright...

Those we're both very good. And thank ma'dear lol. =)

Meaning, no summer?

Let There Be Love

All around me is love;
the sun in the sky,
casting an all-seeing eye
on the world,
accentuating the beauty of the flowers, the grass, the midsummer calm.

Bouncing on the water,
the sun crystallizes the river,
bringing love to life within it
and upon it.

A cool breeze wanders lazily around,
rippling the water,
rustling the trees;
everything loves and is loved in return.

You are my sun; all the beauty in me was created by you.

Laying side by side
with our fingers entwined,
we compliment each other perfectly. Blissfully.
Sculpting each other we become one,
and yet this is not
because we want each other but because
we were meant to be together
I was made for you, and you for me,
like the stars for the sky.

The whole world was made by,
and for love, but of all
the love that surrounds us,
there is nothing greater than my love for you and
I desire nothing more than your love for me.
For what is love if it is not mutual?
What do we live for if not for love?

I live for you. I share
every breath, every thought, every heartbeat
with you.
You are the cause of every smile, every laugh,
all the happiness inside me.

When I look into your eyes I see all
the stars in the universe twinkling back at me, and
your smile is the sun; so
comforting and warm, the centre of everything,
the most important and beautiful thing in the world.

this IS a summer poem, iv used love as a metaphor.....i just read it and realised you might think its just a love poem, but the love is meant to symbolise the summer...
i can withdraw if its not suitable or enter something else, just let me know! :)

Ooooh haha, i get it now. And biscuit, very good poem !

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Only 9 more lol.

I might make it down to ten if i have to.

this is gunna take 4EVER

Lol, yeah. Probably wasn't such a great idea, but meh.

it was a good idea, just ppl are lazy. im glad i wrote it b4 i got in my rut:| COME ON PPL! ill give u a cookie. i made them myself:) i burned my hands n everything 2 make them.

I'll do it, give me some time

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My Garden (Triolet)

Iris surrounded by swarming bees
Honey dripping pollen on the rise
Baby leaves dancing to light breeze
Iris surrounded by swarming bees
Chattering birds upon the trees
A new dash of blue, splatter in the skies
Iris surrounded by swarming bees
Honey dripping pollen on the rise
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A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines
repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines.

Kindred

Just listen to the night, feel the air
Cicadas, frogs, and owls in the dark trees
Moonlight above reflects off my skin
Dew clinging, bare feet, mosquito bites itching

The smell of newly cut grass surrounds
It’s the perfume of Summer herself
I breathe deeply for I know her visit is short
She comes slowly and then leaves quickly

Her visits occur but once a year
They are anticipated by all but the ice lovers
School children count down the days till her arrival
Summer brings light, peace, relaxed happiness

No homework when she visits, no snow shoveling
Cookouts and fresh fruit, tomatoes and green beans
Long days and warm nights, fireworks and leaves
Lemonade stands, bicycles, star gazing on blankets

If Summer could only stay more than three months
Our lives would be languorous, relaxed, sweet
But she slowly begins packing in September
Then departs like a spurned aunt, gone for a year.