Contest ! ! woot !

I'll get it done as soon as My STACKS of homework is done...lol

aw hw *barfs* i h8 hw. i dun do the whole hw thing very often. hahaha im so bad:P anyway, yay 3 more *dances* im so tired.

Empty Chair

Speckles of light glisten from a chandelier
Winter holidays are finally here
But there's no smiles nor laughs of glee
Lost to the voices of solemn pleas
They remember clear that day of cheer
Where father would come home that year
Instead they find a letter of best regards
Knowing the truth will be hard
Sorry children, father ain't coming home
His proud spirit has finally flown
Hush my child, you won't cry alone
This was war, I should have known

Very good Noni, two more to go. I may have to contact the other winners, they might not be checking back in, i qill do that if no reply from them within the next few days. =)

ONE MORE!!!!!!!!!!! YAY

yay, just one more... can't wait...

Boop.

Beep...

Boop...

Lickity....

Lock...

Look around...

What do you got?

Oh I know....A contest with one more poem to be submitted...

I got. a tv full of law and order.
screen full of words.
and a tummy full of popcorn.

hahah oh yeah go me.

Very good, just beautiful Liz now, i will send her a message in a few minutes.

yay

Yay!

im bored.

lol, me too

LIZZY POO...come on:(

I say give her a limit, like 2 or 3 more days to submit it or she gets bumped out of the contest, just an idea...

Lol, i sent her a message, i don't know how often she checks them. But, i just started school, and i only have weekends free, and only nights, because I just started work as well. It is an over haul. I check in every day, whenever i can. So if she does not have it in by, lets say Sunday this week, so September 10, i will contact her, and then give her a limit. Sorry guys.

LMAO. What a great thread.

How so? ...

...yes how indeed. u kno wat im very sleepy. sry but how?

Yes..I'm very sleepy too.

Anybody?

anybody what?

Just trying to get this place active again. Waiting for results and that last person

*sigh* im so bored. i got a cell phone 2day i'm so happy:D. anyway, like...are we gunna wait FOREVER for LIZ?!?!?! cuz its been a long time

I say, just forget about her, it has been way long...we gave her enough time...I say lets get it started in here, and lets see the results....lol

Lol do ya now? I did say I would give her until Sunday, that's just until tomorrow. Lol, you guys can wait 5 more hours =P

lol...nah...I am paitent....I'll be up for another 5 hours anyways....lmfao

lol me 2:) i GUESSS i can wait *sigh* haha just sucks cuz im busy like 24/7 lately n i have no clue when ill have time to come on again. school takes a lot now. i was there 17 hrs yesterday im tired. haha

Lol, okay, well Liz has not gotten hers in, so I will edit the changes in a minute. I will just lower the amounts again or something.

-Jenna.xo

Okay, I have edited it. And I have also increased the comments to five as to previous when it was only one. I will judge the ones that I have in when I get home from school and after I finish talking to my boss about shifts. But I also have to judge my other one lol, so sorry for the delays guys, but I should have this done by at least 6:00 tonight. =]

-Jenna.xo

Awesome...can't wait...lol

Okay, well I liked them all, so this one was especially hard for me. But, however, here are the results.

First Place...Untitled; by Kevin Kerbz
Second Place...Empty Chair; by Noni
Third Place...Where Are You?; by ~*~Who Cares?~*~

Good job everyone! Now you three, will have to write a farewell haiku. =] And this contest is almost over!!! lol =]

-Jenna.

Congratulations you three to a job well done. :)

lol wait..farewell haiku? what?

Haiku is a Japanese style.
They consist of 3 lines.
Haiku has a strict syllable count of 5, 7, 5.
They are based on nature.

ok...
Final Goodbye

Lonely graves, leaves float,
Mossy names, the end is here,
Farewell soldier, dead.

wow that was bad
i hate haikus.
and i knew what a haiku is i mean what do we gotta write about..is that right?

Massacres engraved
Flowers wither, flowers die
Honoring soldiers

Yeah its fine, good job both of you, just one more. =]

-Jenna.