Dark Poetry Contest.

can i unreserve playground please

laura
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can i reserve ice cream man pleese?

can i reserve cellphone?

oh wait never mind, please unreserve it. i'll try A PLAY GROUND

it's really not that dark but well watever

A Playground
by adrian or adrianc1294

children's laughter echos in the play ground's surrounding
smiles, talking, sew saw swinging
in the day, everything in the play ground is fun
but in the night, what's it like? when the day is done?

sew saw starts to swing, but nobody's riding in it
unrecognized laughs echos, strange looking creatures, half human half devil, it's a split
creatures with bright red eyes
half human that doesn't dies

red spark everywhere
ashes what the wind blows, here and there
soft talking, you wouldn't understand
why are these creatures in our land?

pale colors they were
sharp teeth's they had, i swear
glowing red fire burning in their bodies
a scratchy face, a look you won't please

they are ghost
where did they come from? north or south coast?
they were the children who used to play in this playground
beaten up by bullies, yelling, people didn't care acting like if they don't hear any sound

they don't want revenge, like others want when they got beaten
they came back from the dead to play in their playground, wishing the people who were there feel guilt-en
they have fun, under the moon
but day will, hours later, come soon

they'll disappear just by a blink of an eye
day will come, children will be playing again, creatures, good bye

children's laughter echos in the play ground's surrounding
smiles, talking, sew saw swinging
in the day, everything in the play ground is fun
but in the night, you know what it's like, the creatures come back again, when the day is gone

Done. =) Only a few more to go.

I'll take : The Swimming Pool, please. Is it okay if I go ahead and post it? Didn't want to reserve it if I couldn't write one. So it's already done.

Lol yeah. =) I reserved it for you. Now there's only two more left.

The Swimming Pool
By: Twisted Heart

Among the misty water vapors
Comes the silent creature's wail
The children's laughter hides the terror
Of a gruesome yarn, He tells

With evil hands and eyes he watches
As the kiddies play with ease
Splashing sounds around him echo
As his lips smack with wicked greed.

He sees the one that he treasures
Above the others there at play
And He knows this one he'll capture
If he waits, He'll get his way.

She slowly moves within his grasp
And as he reaches out for her
He binds her mouth with his hands
So she can't scream a single word.

Into a darkened shed he drags her
The saddened pleas he will not hear
As the other children's laughter
Cover up her solemn tears.

When the deed is done, he leaves her
Crumpled there upon the floor
With one last look at what he's done
He silently shuts the dirty door.

Oh wow. That was really good ! I fricken absolutely loved it lol. =)

A lot of the reserved ones aren't coming in. =S

Yeah, anytime you can get it in is fine with me hun..have fun camping!

Haha scared me there...i was all =o acutally more like =0 ahaha. Be careful but have fun lol.

BUMP...

Lol nice job hunn. You went on a bumping spree lol
cute...

Lol awe, but camp is fun! =)

Okay, well no one else is reserving the last two, so i am going to cut them out, and there will only be thirteen. I will make them into poems of my own. =) And the reserved ones, can you please try and get them in asap? I just started school, and i need to get this judged before work and cheerleading start again. Thanks. =)

-Te Amo.

wait, i reserved DOZEN ROSES? oh well, i'll try to do it.

Im still thinking.....sorry its taking me so long......you can unreserve A beating heart.......if your getting tired of waiting :D

No It's fine, to the both of you! Lol. Whenever you can get it in is fine with me really, I keep checking in and out of the contests I have running, and I will judge this when all are done! Take your time. I keep busy with school and sports and work lol =P

-Jenna.xo

dozen roses (to kill)
by adrian or adrianc1294

number one and number two
midnight ebony roses, from me, to you
number three and number four
one touch of it, you fall hard on the floor
number five and number six
acid, poison, inside of it mixed
number seven and eight
this your last time to live, you're meeting your fate
number nine and number ten
evil spirits in the roses i sent
number eleven and number twelve
don't blame me, blame yourself!

Beth still needs to get hers done as well lol.

-Jenna.

Sorry it took so long... i couldn't get on the website. It's a bit wierd but o well...
His music lures children in,
One bye one, blured faces follow.
Not realising there’s a monster within,
His red eyes stare, heartless and hollow.

Promises of sugars and treats,
All lies, all just for show,
To hide the dangers soon they’ll meet.
The hell they should never know.

He mutters an anchient incantation,
That steals away there souls.
The stoney bodies left behind,
Are under his controll.

They live their lives as silent graves,
Bound emotionless by his spell.
He is the devil and they are his slaves,
Doomed to eternally burn in hell.

Echos of their tortured screams,
Can be heard beneath the melody,
That tempts unknowing victims in.
The ice ceam man’s on a killing spree.

It's fine. Thanks for getting it done! Now, just one more! =]

-Jenna.

Lol, as am I.

-Jenna.

What? =S Lol that was confusing. I don't know what you meant? Natalie from this site?

-Jenna.

Haha kay, what bout her? =S

-Jenna.

Oh, really? I have this screen name for mostly everything, so I dunno what you mean. I'm confused lol.

If you have a downvoter, and you know for sure who it is, maybe talk to them? Ask them why they are doing it? I've had down voters before, and it isn't fun at all, I never knew who mine was though.

-Jenna.

Hahaha what do you mean? She had

Lush.Fcuk-* in her msn name? lol

Yeah I don't like them either, it sucks. =[

-Jenna.

Hey Im sorry about not writing a poem.......go ahead and unreserve mine please

Awe, okay.

-Jenna.

Lol, okay.

-Jenna.

Thanks for doing it Darling. I will judge this when I get home from school. =]]

-Jenna.

A Beating Heart

A beating heart
slowly at first, its first beats bearly audible
then they become stronger with time
someday, you would never know they almost stopped
for the day is one that no one will forget, but aren't sure if they want to remember
trapped inside with no place to go
hunting for a way out with their eyes
they didn't know if they'd ever make it out alive
caught up in the horrible moment, they almost wish...
not that it matters now, they are free
their beating heart are the loudest we hear
for without them, many other lives might not be around
so their beating hearts ring out for all the world to know
that one day changed everything
but somehow, it could've been so much worse...

Awe, god curse it I wanted that one SO badly!!!!

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xDarkSuicidex

sorry! i was bored and no one did it...

bump

Lol, thanks for bumping this I had to find it lol. Well, I will try and get this done before cheerleading tonight because I have a few hours, but if not, it will be up by later tonight once I get home or tomorrow. Thanks for the patience. =]

-Jenna.

And I just read your comment DS, and if you want one, you could do one of the ones that Jess had already done, because she has done I think like 3 now lol. So I will count Ciao as one and I don't know, that's if it doesn't bother Jess too much.

-Jenna.

Am I aloud to still do it? I could..but it says 'closed...and I just saw this message. =[
I hope I can still write it...I can have it done soon!

xDarkSuicidex