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Are we alowd to reserve one of those places? ...Cause I'm writing one now. If we can't, that's alright.

-Gods' Will.-

The bombs of yesterday, pulsing in my ears,
the mechanical soldiers of today, going away for years.
Lives on the line, deaths all around,
slipping in and out of bombs, implanted in the ground.

Cities up in smoke, children fleeing from the empty streets,
warcrafts armed and ready, gathering in fleets.
With a gun slung over his arm, he wipes the sweat off of his brow,
lowers his head in misery, remembering his vow.

Fighting for his country, a man of honor,
tears falling down, encrusting to his armor.
He gets down on his knees, prays to the almighty lord,
and as he said "a'men", the skies roared.

Planes falling from every which way he turned,
pilots up in smoke, falling as they burned.
Lives are ending, hearts are slain,
and he remembered his words so vain.

He told his wife and kids he'd return again someday,
and now for his family, he did pray.
he sprints across the field, running for his life,
and at the bang, all he heard was the voice of his wife.

She told him she loved him, and she would see him again,
But the only place she saw him was the news on channel ten.
Her eyes shot open, her heart skipped a beat,
her husband had just died in defeat.

She took the kids to her sisters, told her to take care of them for a while,
kissed them all good-bye with but one last smile.
She went home and layed upon her bed,
took her husbands' gun, and put it to her head.

The tears rolled down, as her eyes shut tight,
and she knew in no time that everything would be alright.
For thy heavenly father, in all of his grace,
will rejoin the lovers, with a smile on his face.

And written in blood, was her good-bye,
to her children who could see her in the sky.
Heaven gained another angel today, one by the name of Jill,
and it all came together, with the help of Gods' will.

© Jenna Elphick
August 22, 2006.

dunno if this is what ur looking for or not, but i would really love to have some honest critcism =)

Alright, thanks hun! I should have it done soonish. It's night here, 6:26pm. So I'll make sure it's done before I get off later. Ily.2!!

OOOO!!!! I want a spot!!!!!!! i wnt a spot!!

yay!!! thx u!!!! ill post it 2morrow!! im tired..

Lol okay, thanks. =)

I'm done. =D

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Cryptic Confessions

Tarnished salt drops cascading,
Revealing cryptic confessions,
Four unsealed walls caving in,
Expressing few mendacity sins.

Father? Is it too late for saving?

Nerves pulsing through veins,
Heartbeat rapidly increasing,
Sweat dripping from foreheads,
Daunted by what's left unsaid.

Father? I'm afraid to tell you!

Secured lips swallowing pain,
Drifting words across to ears,
Stuttering truth through teeth,
Leaking disguises underneath.

Father? I can't say any more!

Anxiety bashing in her mind,
Forgetting to stop and breathe,
Clenching fists; holding tight,
Struggling to put up a fight.

Father? It's hurts me too much!

Outbursts of tears flooding,
Drowning insecurities away,
Liberating sad emotions free,
Confessing sins from insanity.

Father? Am I now forgiven?

August 24th 2006
Copyright (C) Natalie

is it 5 already.....ive been really busy with stuff....sooo i guess i cant submitt mine anymore.....

Silent Death...

Poison vial in my hands....
Thoughts flowed through my mind...
I thought...
This is my time...
I can't take it this life anymore...
Why did everyone turn against me..
Why did everyone that i love hates me now....
Now i will leave...
From this world...
This lifetime....
Screw love...
Who ever loved me.....
NONE!!
Who ever caught me....
NONE!!!
I uncorked the vial.....
and took a final look around me...
Now let me leave from this place....
And drank every single drop of poison....
I grow weak....
I can't breathe....
I know that I'll be leaving soon..
I lie on the floor..
Waiting..
Waiting for my life to pass me by...
My final thoughts are....
You were my friends, boyfriend and family..
why did you betray me.....
now my life is gone and i am falling to the depths of hell....
It was my Silent Death.....

*well if its too late just tell me....*