Title Contest. :]

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    can i please reserve irrational angel? I will work on it later when i get home from the store.

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Can I please reserve Suicidal Tears?

    It's 3am here. So I should have it finished sometime tomorrow morning. :]

  • The Lonely Rose
    18 years ago

    can i hav Silent Death plz.....

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Can I reserve

    -Falling in Darkness

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    hmm i wanna try real meaning of shame, i'll do it in a bit, plz reserve.

  • ! CLAIREEE.
    18 years ago

    Can i please reserve Dissapearing dreams

    :D Thank You !!

  • ! CLAIREEE.
    18 years ago

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    Dissapearing Dreams...

    Eyes closed shut
    I'm not going to cry
    why's my life so messed up?
    im too scared to ask why...

    i Just keep on dreaming
    it's the only way out
    but i dont have a clue
    what i've been dreaming about

    I see your smile
    and i see your face
    where the rainbows sparkle
    Oh, what a place.

    Is this a sign
    that things will go right
    cause i cannot stand anymore,
    of my lifes sight.

    My dreams make me smile
    until they dissapear
    and i cannot seem to find them
    when they are no longer near

    Can you save me
    before i fade too
    or i'll stop dreaming your face
    and then, what would i do?

    You are my hope
    and joy aswell
    They've sent me an angel
    and i thank God you've fell

    Although i cant touch you
    you guide me away
    from those dissapearing dreams
    i dream everyday...

    ----------------------------
    By [Claire Louise !!]

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    I finally finished lol, now this is my first sonnet ever written, an Italian sonnet, so thats why it may suck lol. I will write more to get the hang of them though.

    -Irrational Angel.-

    Irrational angel, humming so sweet!
    Tickling ears with the words that make you weak;
    Shaking as her cold hand graces your cheek
    With soft riddles as the lovers lips meet.
    Quivering with ecstacy, hearts beat
    Hiding your smile, with feelings so meek
    mixed emotions, bound in a bloody sheaf
    Your life cloned to a pawn, and she knows the cheats.

    A face so beauteous - - a dress so white - -
    Breath coated in nicotine, she lightly breathes,
    Sweat dripping off of your temple it seems
    that reality hit you hard tonight.
    With your last breath, you lost all dignity.
    So goodnight my darling, may you rest in peace.

    © Jenna Elphick
    July 24, 2006

  • The Lonely Rose
    18 years ago

    Silent Death..

    Poison vial in my hands....
    Thoughts flowed through my mind...
    I thought...
    This is my time...
    I can't take it this life anymore...
    Why did everyone turn against me..
    Why did everyone that i love hates me now....
    Now i will leave...
    From this world...
    This lifetime....
    Screw love...
    Who ever loved me.....
    NONE!!
    Who ever caught me....
    NONE!!!
    I uncorked the vial.....
    and took a final look around me...
    Now let me leave from this place....
    And drank every single drop of poison....
    I grow weak....
    I can't breathe....
    I know that I'll be leaving soon..
    I lie on the floor..
    Waiting..
    Waiting for my life to pass me by...
    My final thoughts are....
    You were my friends, boyfriend and family..
    why did you betray me.....
    now my life is gone and i am falling to the depths of hell....
    It was my Silent Death.....

    *well wat do you think!!! i hope its good enough!!*

  • LovelyDivine
    18 years ago

    Could I reserve 7.Life's Greatest Fear???

    thanks,
    Brokenhearted

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    I'm gonna have to unreserve Suicidal Tears.. I've done half of it, but I havn't had a good day, and I can't write anymore. :] Sorry.

  • Sherry Lynn
    18 years ago

    Life With Him please

    --Sher

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    one question i reserved something but im busy gettin my party together im having all day 2morro so can i do it sunday nite PLEASE?!

  • Jeffrey
    18 years ago

    Suicidal Tears

    another pretty face crashes onto the scene
    promiscuously acquiring young boy adoration
    carries herself like a harlot at the age of thirteen
    because "I love you", returns momentary elation
    fooled everyone into thinking she was fine
    with an artificial aura of arrogance and independence
    inside there's a little girl begging for a chance to shine
    in someone's heart with genuine love in attendance

    the facade finally gave way that cloud-dulled day
    when I stumbled upon her hope's horrific finale
    trouble trusting the sorry sight my eyes portrayed
    so I traversed deeper down the wooded alley
    death washed your complexion in purple hues
    found no reason to leave a suicide note
    left to study the patterns woven in the bruise
    that wrapped around your rope-stained throat
    I struggle to imagine myself in your shoes
    balancing on the creaky branch of that tree
    heart racing while your mind reviews
    feeling like a whore deserving of death and
    everyone agrees

    I can still remember after all these years
    the raindrops rolling down your lifeless cheek
    the heavens helped you cry your suicidal tears
    now I only hope
    they help you find the love you seek

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    im sry i just have 2 unreserve meaning of shame..i just lost all inspiration. im down since my party and i cant even write anything. sorry i couldn't find the contest until today:(

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Maybe send a message to the people who still need to get them in? And take off the last one that isn't reserved yet?

  • Sherry Lynn
    18 years ago

    Life With Him

    Beaten; broken
    Screaming; Pleading
    Bloodied; Bruised

    Frightened; angered
    Confused; isolated
    Imprisoned; belittled

    This was life with him

    Liberated; mended
    Laughing; praying
    Tainted; scarred

    Brave; joyous
    Enlightened; united
    Unshackled; praised

    This is an attempt at life today.

    © Sherry Lynn Hull Richardson

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Jeeze, I completely forgot about it! I'll get it done soon.

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Falling in Darkness

    Smothering every existing thought
    Torturing dreams feeling distraught
    Walking the paths where demons tread
    Carrying only the unfeeling dread
    Reaching relms where death is life
    Where fallen angels work and thrive
    Falling in darkness, eternally
    Living a life of non-believing

    Paint your face freshly with paint
    Watching as venom begins to taint
    Releasing all mental restraint
    Leaving behind all rightous complaint
    Follow the footsteps of abandoned roads
    Turn from rivers where light flowed
    Touch and taste the darkness dew
    Find the strength to be renewed

    Into the darkness, outcast to light
    Into the darkness, let it begin tonight

  • Sherry Lynn
    18 years ago

    Where do we sit with this one? Just wondering...

    --Sher

  • Sherry Lynn
    18 years ago

    bump

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Bump...

    -Jenna.

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    Real Meaning of Shame
    By: Twisted Heart

    It was so easy to follow the crowd
    But they are all laughing loud at her now

    She wanted to fit with her peers, that was true,
    So she played along, when they made fun of you.

    She called you names, but you were once friends
    'Til she cracked a joke at your expense.

    Then her peers all laughed and pushed her away
    Saying they'd never have a friend who'd betray.

    Now she sits alone, she has herself to blame
    She finally learnt the true meaning of shame.
    **************************************

    Decided to write the last one, so all poems are done now. Hope this will spead this contest along.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Thank you! Lol. Not even my contest and I'm getting weirded out by lack of participants lol. =]

    -Jenna.

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    Actually, didn't realize until now, but there is one reserved that isn't written.

    Life's Greatest Fear- Broken Hearted.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Hm, I never noticed that either. Maybe they'll see it now?

    -Jenna.

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    Bump