~~~Technique Contest~~~

...........There
..........Was So
.......Much Hate They
...Thought They Were In
.......... Love

xDarkSuicidex

Winter's Dream

--------------Winds
-------------Swaying
---------Ice-capped trees
-------As pearl Snowflakes
--------------Dance

When I Cry (Lanturne)

........When
.........I Cry
.....In the dark
....I think of you
.........gone

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

Disappearing (Lanturne)

.......Since
.....You left
...I feel strange
.Like I'm not here
.......Ghost

Stained {Lanturne}

-------------------Tears,
----------------Streaming,
----------------Constantly,
----------Down my cold cheeks,
------------------Stained.

--------love
------is what
-----i had
-----before
--------Gone

this is my first time writting a poem like this idk if its goos at all

................Gone
..............Is The
.............Love I Had
...........When I Was With
.................You

Sorry. I have never written a Lanturne before, and I invented it just then. Feel free to not include it in the final judging. :-)

//T.L.//

This is my first time trying this style"

.....Numb....
....enough....
...to feel no....
Pain graze my skin..
.....Dead...

anturne poems have a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,1

*shouts with happiness*
Wow, my heart jumped into my throat when I saw that I had won second place! And I can't even figure out why, hahah. I'm sorry, it was a very lopsided lanturne, but as I said, my first attempt. :-)
If you have the time I would appreciate any comments you could have on "How Do You Want To Die."

Thank you!

//T.L.//

Congrats to all the winners. :)

thanks Itallian.

//T.L.//

I'm confused...

I got 4 comments from you...and I didn't win.. Did I miss something?

But thanks for the comments..

xDarkSuicidex