Wings of an Angel CONTEST 3

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    So I'm opening my third contest. Hope you like it.

    I want you to write a poem, about how you would want youre life to be if you could decide. Rich, famous, family, dogs, its your choice.

    Rules are the following:
    Your work.
    New or old.
    Must be to the topic.
    No profanity.

    Prizes will again be a surprise.
    You can still add poems

    Enjoy, have fun, and blow me away with your talent:)

  • AGirlWorthFightingFor
    18 years ago

    The World Is My Control Room
    by †ђe мađŋєss τo youя мэtђođ

    You have only so much control
    If it can happen, it will go WRONG
    You never make a sound
    but in my head
    you come in loud & clear
    The radio plays another song
    for broken hearts
    & tired swans

    Assemble is destructive
    in the torture chamber suite
    This couldn’t be more unexpected
    Fly on the seat of your pants
    & other media clichés
    Friends helping friends
    What it’s all supposed to be about
    Play it back
    Some confusion & doubt
    We’ll keep going until
    the tape runs out

    Throw it up
    in the spotlight
    Cut it loose
    I’m moving on
    I start to feel it on my own
    & make the city feel like home

    The silence rings so LOUD
    in tune with the sorrow I found

    Record to edit
    everything
    you said to me
    Play it back again
    Repeat

    Stop Rewind
    I think I’ve come undone
    Breaking my intentions
    I keep losing track

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    Quite good people;)

    Keep it coming!

  • Truest Lies
    18 years ago

    I would be thin,
    And I would be pretty,
    Sansational girl,
    Punky and hippy.

    I would be fearless,
    And I would have friends,
    People who cared,
    People who shared.

    There would be sunshine,
    And there would be rain,
    Colors so bright,
    It's almost insane.

    I am all that,
    And even more,
    Though I am not perfect,
    Neither am I poor.

    If I could change the world,
    I would change your pain.
    No animal would ever suffer,
    Nor experience hunger.

    I can be thin,
    In my own way am I pretty,
    Sensation perhaps not,
    Though punky and hippy..
    Why should I care,
    What the mirror says,
    That I can change,
    So easily.
    But the dogs on the street,
    Those beautiful,
    Abandoned pets,
    That's what I would change.

    If I could change anything,
    In the entire world,
    Well then I would wipe the pain,
    Out of their eyes.

    //T.L.//

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    come on people, it can't possibly be that hard!

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    -The Life For Me?-

    Livin' it up out on Hollywood Boulevard
    Soaking up the sun, while maids clean the yard.
    Obnoxious sunglasses, short black skirts
    Tip-top belly rings and little white shirts.

    No tan lines and red lip stick
    Pink eye-shadow coated nice and thick.
    High heeled boots and oversized earrings
    Skimpy little bikinis held on tight by little strings.

    Bleach blond hair, and baby blue eyes
    Perfect from head to thighs.
    A supermodel pasted in every magazine
    A role model to every single teen.

    Guys on the prowl, drool with every glimpse
    All my girls stand their ground, throwing off the wimps.
    Photogenic w****s, smiling so sweet
    All so skinny, 'cause we never do eat.

    Tonight is on me, drinks all around
    My feet firmly implanted on the ground.
    Dancing and grooving to every single beat
    If only that was the life for me.

    © Jenna Elphick
    August 29, 2006

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    simple but out of the ordinary
    by adrian or adrianc1294

    a little rich is what i want
    to buy a house for my parents and mine
    have a brand new car
    while I'll ride it all the time

    my perfect girl, I'll loved forever
    be wed in a simple but formal wedding
    have babies, we'll spend all the time with
    and every night a lullaby I'll sing

    give my other relatives money to share
    half of it for my brother
    we'll live simple but out of the ordinary
    out of the ordinary that we don't have to suffer

    I'll build my own recording studio
    meet some actors, singers, but i won't be bossy
    record songs and print my name in magazines or speed dialed by famous stars
    go to Grammy awards with my wife wearing a dress so beautifully

    my dream of being rich, and sort of famous
    is all i want and find my perfect girl
    but right now I'll be stuck here, sweating my way to live
    it's my fantasy dream; world

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    ok since not to many have who posted, I will put out the deadline.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    So it ends tomorrow instead?

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    well, since only five poems have been entered, I think I will wait until monday. So people get a little more time!

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    So, September 4 instead?

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    yes, I hope that is allright!

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    If I Was You
    By: Twisted Heart

    If I could choose what I could be
    I think I'd like to be the key
    That opens up your tiny heart
    And watch it as it falls apart.

    Or maybe I'd just be your friend
    Who'd laugh at jokes and pretend
    Then I'd aim them back at you
    Like you did me when we were through.

    Or maybe I would like to follow
    The path you've taken, though it's hollow
    Then maybe I could find a way
    To accept the awful games you played.

    You lied, you cheated, without a care
    While I sat off, away somewhere
    And as my life fell in dismay
    You laughed at me and walked away.

    If only I was you right now
    I'm sure I'd forget me somehow
    But wishing doesn't work, you see
    So I'm just stuck here being me.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Yeah it's fine, i'd like to read more in here, it's a good idea and these are very creative poems lol. Now there's 6. =)

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    I wish some more would post, I meen, it can possibly be THAT hard?!

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Haha it wasnt, it was fun actually =)

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    Bump...
    Bump...
    Bump...

    So maybe others will post.

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    aww! thats so cute TL!

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    If...

    If I could be someone
    Other than me
    Would I be happy?

    If I had super powers
    Would that be enough
    To change the world?

    If I was ~more~
    Pretty, thin, normal
    Would it make a difference?

    If I cried less and smiled more
    Wore less, became a wh***
    Would they stop teasing?

    If I killed myself
    Right now
    Would anyone care?

    If I became perfect
    And left my soul behind
    Would my dreams come true?

    If, and gladly...

    If I were another person
    Besides myself
    I would not be happy

    I don't need superpowers
    My actions already
    Can change the world

    I am not pretty, thin or normal
    I am beautiful, chubby and unique
    It doesn't matter what I look like

    If I cried less and smiled more
    Wore less clothes, became a wh***
    I would be ignoring my heart

    If I killed myself
    Right now
    Everyone would care

    If I traded my soul to be perfect
    It would be impossible
    For my dreams to come true

    I'm thankful...
    I like myself for who I am, and don't want to change
    If I had a chance to change a thing, I wouldn't.
    I like myself for who I am

    So I'd only wonder
    If...

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    last shot people, judging tomorrow evening!

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    ok, this might take a while to judge, kinda busy at the moments, but I will try to get it done by this week..

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    No rush, take your time. =D

  • The Angel of Secrets
    18 years ago

    thank you:)