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~~~~~~~~~~~~~RESULTS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
1st: APoeticSoul 5/8
2nd: Lush
3rd: adrian
H/M: Madness
H/M: Mooie

Prizes:
1st 8 r/r/c
2nd 6 r/r/c
3rd 4 r/r/c
H/M 2 r/r/c

i'll try laterz but i g2g! leave me a spot!!!!

Kay, so; It's about a person you like who likes one of your good friends. And then you see him/her flirting with them?

Is that what you meant? Lol.

yeah ill give an example. lol lets say your hanging out w/ a bunch of friends, including the guy you like, and you see him ASK the other girl for their number and them flirting and stuff, even though they dun really know eachother....-.-......grr i h8 boys. haha sry anyway, yeah that typa stuff...get it?

I feel like I want to cry
as your name comes to my mind
I feel like we are growing apart
I feel like you hate me
Why do you ignore me?
You would rather talk to your friends then talk to me.
You would rather flirt Worth girls in front of me then talk to me.
I feel like I'm invisible to you like I don't even exist
I wish you would just notice me so I can tell you my real feelings
I feel like you don't care about me
I feel like I want to cry because you just don't want to be my Friend.

Oh alrighty. I'll write one. Reserve me a spot? You don't have to, it should be done by tonight or tomorrow morning.

yeah its fine. i didnt read it all because im busy but the part i read sounds great

just wrote it. It's about my friend(once again) taking someone i like right from under me.

"Shame on you, Shame on me"

I loved her then, I love her now.
She liked you then. I don’t know how.
I loved her then, I love her now.
You broke my heart, so take a bow.

Through time and pain, love has endured.
My efforts ignored, affections spurned.
Heart trampled, feelings scattered,
Once again my heart is shattered.

Once before I was caused this pain,
Watching as affection gained.
In the heart of she I loved,
Affection for my kin and blood.

Now again the hurt returns.
Again blood boils and fires burn.
You stole before, you steal again,
A new face she is, but old scars you rend.

My heart and feelings both were known.
Tossed aside like pebble or stone.
My heart and feelings both were known.
Usurper you are, stealer of thrones.

Twice now you have caused this pain.
I don’t know if I can forgive again.
Stealing my love, in front of my eyes,
Then trying to hide it with petty lies.

I see you kiss, I see you hug,
You look so cozy you look so snug.
Yet you knew my heart, I told you well.
Still you steal her and send me to hell.

Twice you have now cast me down,
Twice I have crawled back to ground.
Once I did accept this fate.
Twice is too much to smile and fake.

You sent me to hell, so I brought some back
I’ll give you the present, go on the attack,
You stole from me, you reap what you sow.
Ties have been broken, you are now a foe.

I loved her then, I love her now.
She liked you then. I don’t know how.
I loved her then, I love her now.
You broke my heart, so take a bow.

A Soft Heart Cruelly Broken

Soft heart beating heavily
Eyes can’t be drawn away
Plump lips begin to pucker
Seeing him, makes her day..

Wrapped around his finger
Cruelly stringing her along
His heart set on another girl
Can’t he see that this is wrong?

Sending letters of her love
Sweetly smiling when she can
Only to be slowly broken down
When from her kiss he ran..

All she wanted was his love
A single kiss or gentle glance
Instead he broke her heart
By taking away her only chance..
______________________________

Hope this is okay.. And don't worry sweetie.. I know what you're going through.. Keep your chin up!

Puppet

Dangling from the strings,
You break the limits down,
A shadow over my eyeless face,
As my emotions start to drown,

His hand over hers,
Caressed in dainty bliss,
I thought I saw him lean over,
Strings buckle as they kiss,

The sun is rising in my darkness,
As the dawn of torture begins,
She'd never know my solitude,
As thier faces morph to grins,

I'm cut from the strung up life,
Left to fall into depths of death,
I feel the unaquited love for you,
So this is the last of my breath,

Dawn is here and for me to stay,
I'm smiling just once more,
I realised I was always dead,
Just I never hit the floor.

not.so.tough.after.all (a lyric i made)
by adrian or adrianc1294

faking a laugh, faking a smile
trying to make my damn life worth while
it's making me weak, you're making me sick
please give me the words for the rest of this lyric

can you hear me crying, crying all day long?
can you hear me singing, singing this song?

we were meant to be, we had it all
but one day, you slipped your hands away, and on the ground i fall
didn't you hear me? your name i called
broken apart, shattered i lie, between us, a soundproof wall

i saw you flirt with her
she's everything you see in your cheating world
in front of me, you always did it
even your damn poses admit
why are you doing this to me?
what did i do wrong, that made our relationship break apart, so badly?

you seize me everyday
blaming me, is a game i don't want to play
but everyday you look at me, just like how you used to do
can you still feel the feeling the love i have for you?
i know you like her, even before you met me
but why treat me sh!tty?
is this my punishment, your revenge?
my life you'd avenge
full of misery and depression
we're over i already learned my lesson!

we were meant to be, we had it all
but one day, you slipped your hands away, and on the ground i fall
didn't you hear me? your name i called
broken apart, shattered i lie, between us, a soundproof wall

i saw you flirt with her
she's everything you see in your cheating world
in front of me, you always did it
even your damn friends admit
why are you doing this to me?
what did i do wrong, that made our relationship break apart, so badly?

fine you don't want to be my friend
that's alright, i want our relationship to freaking end
i don't want to hear your voice
i want to make my own choice
leave me alone, stop looking at me
what did i do wrong, that made our relationship break apart, so badly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*whispers* it's making me weak, you're making
-------------me sick, this is the end of my song,
-------------and my lyric-------------------*whispers*

ok:) that is 6 done 2 reserved...keep em comin

congratulations ~WHO CARES~ for winning the contest Lush.Fcuk made.....i think it was the battle thing (war) so yea :)

thanks:) but i havent really WON...there's a second part...its still open to the people chosen...

yep, i kno that......i was a contestant there too......but i'm not that good...he he he he...

oh ok:) well..thanks:)

Tuesday Afternoon
By: Twisted Heart

I put the lipstick upon the counter
As I stare at the one who stares back at me
A stranger to a friend I once knew
I've traded her for some male company. .

I'm patiently waiting in this motel room
For a man who says he loves me
But he cannot leave the wife and the kids
He says they're too weak and too needy.

She's been my best friend since we were just kids
I've looked through her eyes for such a long time
I do hate the way that I've acted on this
But the feelings for him are getting stronger inside.

It started as kicks, just a wee bit of fun
To him, it probably still is
But his arms, when they hold me, is pleasure
A feeling I'm finding so hard to resist.

I long for the time when we'll be together
I yearn for his touch, He'll be here soon
Just one day a week, we find time to spend
His wife's always busy, on this afternoon.

I hear, as he opens the door to our room
I give a last look at myself
I know I should hate the person I see
But she's living her own kind of hell.

Friend of a Friend
by †ђe мađŋєss τo youя мэtђođ

Fumble for my clothes in the dark
A familiar voice that breaks my heart
Turn on the light, I see his face
What is he doing here in your place?

He says you're in love
How could this be?
How dare he suggest
That you have feelings for me

Oh, bloody hell, it's true
You love me, you do
How could I know
What you never show

I guess I like you as a friend
And I will protect you 'til the end
Which is why I can't let this scene play out
I can't let him take you I won't lose you now

No, I'm not jealous
I can't envy him
In him are my
Worst features reflected

He won't make you happy
He just makes up lies
He'll use your body
And pollute your mind

He's not fond of you just your attention
And the praises that you give
Try challenging his jaded opinion
See how long he lets you live

He ruins everything by touch
He knows not how to love
I know his motives for his actions
They rival my fashion

But you've known me longer
You know things no one else knows
He may be much stronger
But you have the control

Decision time ticking down
NOW you must choose
I hate the thought of you with him
Because I love him too

okay that 9 done 1 reserved

COME ON!

Im sorry hunn, i am busy until Monday night, i have it done, i just have to type it out, so i shall do that when i am free on my own computer =)

Te Amo

ok:)

io amare tu
hehe go us

COME ON!!!!

please?!?!?!? come on guys im already stressed out, i need more ppl:( PLEASE?!

I have it in one of my notebooks lol, one of the like 15, i will look through them and find it and type it out. This is why i hate it when i re-organize my room!!! I always misplace everything i need. Grrr lol. =(

its ok:)

1 day. or 9 poems. better hurry lush b4 its 2 late....or maybe ill just extend the contest...depends on what happens tomorrow.

Yeah, i looked through a few of my notebooks, i will look through the rest right now and type it out. =D

I found it, but my Dads telling me to get off the comp, so i will finish typing it out tomorrow after school. So like at noon =)

With Her

I don't know how to explain it,
to tell you how I feel.
I have been hoping to see you,
to be able to talk to you,
but look who your sitting with,
flirting with, my
stomach turned, my heart
dropped, I couldn't tell
you how I feel now.
You played in the band with us
that night, but you didn't act
the same, my mind was
thinking that your going
out with her, so I had
lost my chance with you.
You called me up there to
talk with you, but hell you
still sat an inch from her,
How could I ever tell you
how I feel if you are always
With her!

Feelings of a year
by J. Lau

Cheated... of time,
Unsure... of events.
Sad... with reality,
Despaired... with fate.

Jealous... of him,
Confused... with reactions.
Worried... for her,
Happy... for them.

Pain... when comforting,
Lost... on answers.
Helpless... with situaiton,
Hopeful... of miracle.

Trapped... with feelings,
Overwhelmed... by logic.
Cornered... with emotions,
Wishful... of future.

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-Forgotten {Italian Sonnet}.-

Forgotten, under the stars late last night!
Alone in the park, where the children play;
And somewhere in between, she was led astray.
Tears stream down her porcelain face so white,
Luminated under the moons silver light.
The wind whispering secrets of your betray,
Such emotions of your love do you display,
For the one whose love once made you feel so right.

A heart so broken - - still beating on with time - -
From your deceitful acts, played out behind her,
With red lipstick, and a picture so sublime;
She rusts the memories of who you once were.
As your mistress gains your hearts devotion,
She dies like a movie star from your crime.

© Jenna Elphick
September 5, 2006.

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Italian Sonnets have 10-11 syllables per line and is composed of an octave (rhyming abbaabba), and a sestet (rhyming cdecde or cdcdcd) or in some variant form, with no closing couplet.

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**Sorry for the delay deary, i just found it again, and typed it out for ya. =) **

um..yeah ok. i guess i'll close the contest since its the 5th. ill judge right now but please bare w/ gettin prizes im on overload w/ school and life and what not.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~RESULTS~~~~~~~~~~~~~

1st: APoeticSoul
2nd: Lush
3rd: adrian
H/M: Madness
H/M: Mooie

Prizes:
1st 8 r/r/c
2nd 6 r/r/c
3rd 4 r/r/c
H/M 2 r/r/c

yay! i am happy =) thanks erika, good contest. grats everyone =D

Second? =D =D
I'm smiling hugely right now!
Thanks Darling!

wat do u guys want done?

We get to pick which poems?

Hmmm.

ummmmmmm, hrm 8.. thats alot lol. allright.

"Male stereotype"
"shame on you shame on me"
"glory of love"
"free me"
"all but nothing"
"numb"
"don't forget"
annnd "my armor and my sheild"

or if you don't like those any ones you want =D haha, i'm so jazzed that i got first. now off to homework. thanx =)