*~*neVa_giVe_iN_*~*
18 years ago
hey this may be long but its worth it this poem |
*~*neVa_giVe_iN_*~*
18 years ago
Its not true yer so what ..... |
Normal is the Watchword
18 years ago
It didn't express any emotions but read more like a story barely standing on it's own. Sorry : ( |
Lovely Bones
18 years ago
It would have been better if it was written as a short story, and a little work on the grammar but it would good! I liked the story. If you wrote this, then it's good if you're just beginning to write. You need practise but you'll get there! |
*~*neVa_giVe_iN_*~*
18 years ago
i didnt write this i got it in an email i like it because it sends a message to people. |
Arcane Blondie
18 years ago
I like it too. Even though it may not be a true story I can't help knowing that someting like this has happened to a family sometime, somewhere...sad... |
Dre4meR
18 years ago
i don't like your answer to the story or whatever chancem...it's not because..."too stuck on looks rather than personality."...something like is the most idiot thing i have ever heard...if you really want to know...it's is what he has said and the way he said it...showing no feelings therefore hurting someone elses...my point is...or what can be learn is...think before you say something...words hurts more than you know... |