* am i pritty enuff now *

  • *~*neVa_giVe_iN_*~*
    18 years ago

    hey this may be long but its worth it this poem
    mean so much 2 me what do u think ??

    Girl: I really like you. And I... I think I'm falling in love with you.
    Boy: Ok...
    Girl: What do you mean "ok"?
    Boy: I don't like you like that...
    Girl: Why not?
    Boy: I can't tell you... maybe another time...
    From then on, the girl kept asking the boy "Why not?" whenever she saw him, and he kept answering the same answer of "I'll tell you later." Finally the girl got fed up.
    Girl: I'm tired of this! Tell me why you don't like me!
    Boy: Do you really wanna know why?
    Girl: Yes!
    Boy: It's because you're ugly as fuck! What's the point of going out with someone when they're not pretty?!
    Girl: But... I...
    Boy: Just shut up and leave me alone!
    The boy leaves and the girl is sitting there alone, crying her heart out. Then her cell phone rings.
    Girl: Hello?
    Mom: Sweetheart? I want you to go home, ok? I'll be home from work in a few hours.
    Girl: Alright Mom.
    Mom: I love you.
    Girl: I love you too, Mom.
    Mom: Bye Bye.
    Girl: Bye
    The girl heads home and once she got there, she went in the bathroom and looked at herself in the mirror.
    Girl: I'm not pretty enough...
    She set to work, knowing fully well what she was going to do. 2 hours later, her Mom came home and heard the bath water running. She went upstairs to find the hallway flooded so she knocked on the door.
    Mom: Honey? Are you alright?
    She opened the door and was shocked at the site. The bath was overflowing onto the floor, and the water was tinted red. She walked over to see what was inside and screamed. There, her little girl was lying with cuts all over her face and wrists. Her Mom backed away and was going to run to call the police when something caught her eye. On the mirror, am I pretty enough now?

  • *~*neVa_giVe_iN_*~*
    18 years ago

    Its not true yer so what .....
    it means sumfin 2 me

  • Normal is the Watchword
    18 years ago

    It didn't express any emotions but read more like a story barely standing on it's own. Sorry : (

  • Lovely Bones
    18 years ago

    It would have been better if it was written as a short story, and a little work on the grammar but it would good! I liked the story. If you wrote this, then it's good if you're just beginning to write. You need practise but you'll get there!

  • *~*neVa_giVe_iN_*~*
    18 years ago

    i didnt write this i got it in an email i like it because it sends a message to people.

    I do write poems and there really good

  • Arcane Blondie
    18 years ago

    I like it too. Even though it may not be a true story I can't help knowing that someting like this has happened to a family sometime, somewhere...sad...

  • Hind
    18 years ago

    love it...also read ittt..=/

  • Dre4meR
    18 years ago

    i don't like your answer to the story or whatever chancem...it's not because..."too stuck on looks rather than personality."...something like is the most idiot thing i have ever heard...if you really want to know...it's is what he has said and the way he said it...showing no feelings therefore hurting someone elses...my point is...or what can be learn is...think before you say something...words hurts more than you know...