TL's Title Contest

Great cannot wait to see the results

--Sher

Oh, I can not wait either! I am really excited about how this turns out. =]

xDarkSuicidex

o0o this is gonna be good!

Everyone wrote really good poems ... how will she ever choose

--Sherry Lynn

omigosh! it's the 26!

Bump..

i agree...

mmm... dunno but I hope that it is soon

--Sherry

I think that it is... =[

-Jenna.

Depends on how often she checks in as well. Doesn't seem to be too often no more...

-Jenna.

I doubt Truest Lies has forgotten.. That is unlike her to do so.. I am sure she will be back, just give her time, and keep bumping this up until then... Or I will, anyways. I loved this contest... I hope she returns soon.

xDarkSuicidex

same here!!!!

bump bump bump

I sent an email

Bump bump bump

--Sher

bump...:[

re-bump

um...bump?! what happened?!?

what does bump mean?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?

it means it wasn't up at the top of the page so I posted to get it back up again =]

ahhh bump!!! where is TL?

I agree! we miss you TL!!

can someone please judge this contest?

awwwww (sob, sniff, sigh) Hey, that's the first time that I have been missed! I'm so sorry about this, but life has been a bit confusing and my internet connection was taken away for a while, as well as quite a few other things that happened...
I am so surprised that you kept on bumping this. Wow, I really thought that you wouldn't bother at all...
so, my bad... and the results will be given...

//T.L.//

Ghosts Don't Cry by Wings of an Angel

A few small spelling and grammar erros, but there were some very beautiful lines, such as
"I am not meant for this world, God messed with my design."
The texture of the poem was honest and lyrical. It took more than a second to realize the depth
of the meaning at the end. To want to die simply to stop feeling, to stop crying.

Bitter Sweet Revenge {Double Ottava Rima} by xDarkSuicidex

The beautiful dark imagery haunted the poem throughout. Was especially caught by the lines
"stab beautiful lies with a bloodied syringe." But I was trapped by the poem in its entirety.

Ghosts Don’t Cry by ~*Who Cares?*~

Astonishingly truthful and beautiful, it reminded me so much of myself. My favorite lines were
"After a long day, coming home to fights,
Not getting a word in edgewise; lonely nights." Those words portray the sullen truth of many
people these days; people that don't even cry, because they have been told that are not even
worth their own tears... top scores for honesty, sadness and a soft, heartfelt passion that rang
through the whole poem.

Random Words, by Twisted Heart

I can only imagine that the random words mentioned here is talking about the elusive, and
sometimes deceitful "I love you." At first that seemed cliche, but the imagery made up for it,
telling the tale of a sad, abandoned lover, quietly reminiscing over a love long lost, a heart
broken and crying.

pocelain laughter by : ♥s|a|r|a|h♥

The flow and words just seemed to stop, suddenly, almost leaving one last echo to commemorate the
rhymes that had just second ago taken place, it took a moment, to realize that there was still a
dull ache forming where those words had hit home... at least they did for me. To me, they spoke of
a longing for someone, for something. A lost one, that you sincerely just need to hold again, only
once again.

Dungeon Music [Quatern] by Anna Shkuratoff

It made me think of a hot underground prison, the inmates beginning to play their heavy, sultry jazz,
to be received by the night air and passed along to people who sat in their beds, grasping the
prohibited sounds... that was just imagery... it also made me think of screams rising up in their
power to form music... all in all, a very interesting tale.

Eyes Without Tears, by Noni Wang©

There were many, many lines that clicked so utterly, they made this poem a true joy to read. I have
always loved sad poems, and this one especially was very beautiful.

-Smiles That Hurt.- by Lush.Fcuk-*

Simple, with an elegance and a melancholy that was difficult to decipher.
"Telling stories of lullabies and good-byes." caught the spirit of the poem, and ended with the
glorious "With eyes bloodshot red, and her face of snow;
She whispers back at me, that these smiles hurt." I liked the way the narrator seems almost baffled
at the beginning, with the exclamation mark, and then turns into dry sarcasm, ending ultimately
by revealing a tired, hurting ache concealed within the words.

Ten Things I Never Tell You by Sherry Lynn

I had imagined that this poem would have a more complex way of mentioning ten things, like "One;
I hate you, Two; I really do" or something like that, so it was a pleasant surprise that this poem
simply says it, and if it happens to add up to ten things, well, the most important thing was that
it was actually said. There was simple, honest beauty within this, and heartwrenching sadness that
it should come to this in a marriage.

~Remember my tears~ by FlirtingWithDeath

It managed to keep a steady rhyme all the way through. It made me think of a person after a breakup,
in a period of quiet anger, the words that go through your head before you start to cry.

The Emptiness of Things, by ღ*ciao bella*ღ

It made me think of a lot of things.. perhaps a betrayal, a lost love, a break-up. One person talking
to a selfish person, telling them to let go of material things, or perhaps that was simply metaphorical.
I think that everyone will have a different interpretation for this poem. The rhyming scheme was excellent
and steadfast, never once letting itself down.
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These are just my honest opinions. I must admit that I am severly baffled by this contest, as without me really asking you to, you all presented your best poetry.
Hehehe, well, at least you have gotten a good poem out of this contest, each and every one of you!

The ultimate winner, however, is Sherry Lynn, for her poem Ten Things I Never Tell You.

I must say that all the rest demonstrated many emotions, and much honesty, in your writings.
My sincerest apology for the delay, and if you are disappointed that I could only select one winner...
simply because all the work is as good as the other, and all the work is very good.
Keep writing, and I shall be commenting on your other poems in the future, as I have seen much talent here. :-D

//T.L.//

Wow, thanks for the kind words on that poem. And congrats Sherry!! =]]

bump

thanks for your honesty i really appreciate it! :]

Thanks for the comments
Congrats to Sherry

Happiness
Jeannie