Ten Word Challenge!

Journey.

Scornful Faces,
Time is ticking;
Chosen paths
are so misleading.

There's something different about this poem that I really like. This poem works well and shows that you have talent. It's well written and overall is a super poem, well done alyson =)

Imi
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"Love"
By: ~Flying High~

Broken Hearts, Bleeding eyes
Love is her only crime!

This poem shows potential and talent. It's a good poem, but I think it could do without the exclamation mark, which makes it seem funny, when it's actaully quite a serious poem. However thechoice of words is good and you express quite a lot with these ten words. I like that it's written in the 3rd person, because so much these days is 'I'.

Imi
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The Day You Left Me (Lanturne)

.............Tears,
...........Forming
.........In my eyes
.....The day you left
...............Me.

Another one Bryan! *rolls eyes* Well, it's a good poem and I like the way you've used a lanturne. I prefer this to your other entries, because it uses a set form and it works well. The vocabulary used is simple but overall a good poem.

Imi
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Life (Lanturne)
by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

----------Life
--------Helped
-----Start Our New
------Established
---------Love

The use of lanturnes isn't excactly original any more, but this works well as one. I like this poem and think it's super! I can't find any fault apart from the grammatical one that all the words start with a capital letter, even those which are not at the start of a line, but this doesn't really detract from the poem =)

Imi
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Outcast
By •ღ•τιŋy•ђєąяτ•ღ•

Out-
Lonely..
...Forgotten
Abandoned..
...Withdrawn
Rejected
...Secluded
-Cast

i dont know where or who it was by but i saw/read a poem like this beofre.. it was slightly different but it gave me this idea. =] hopw you like it

---They say
-"If" the world
----fell apart.
--It already has.

This is a brilliant poem which says a lot in few words. I like it a lot! It's clever and shows your talent as a writer for getting over a lot in only 10 words. Well done! A great poem.

Imi
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no this must not land on the second page.

No Second Page!! =P

Imogen...I changed my poem back a couple days ago

Title: Used

You
Opulently
Uncaring

User...
She
Embellishes
Desires

He
Erodes
Reputations

Has this ended???????????????????

"What he does"

Bleeding eyes, and torn
Hearts, suppressing her true thoughts!

~~Only In Dreams~~

-----Small Gifts-----
------Of Nature-----
------Hide away-----
--Only seen in dreams--

I tried its pretty hard!!! =D