Only 10 (TITLE) Challenge

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~Results~
1. Twisted Heart - Scattered Ashes
2. Darksuicide-Whisper of Dead, Lush-FCUK-tainted champagne
3. Jessy- Bleeding tears, Jess- Lipstick on my mirror

Awards: Depends how good you are

1. Burning Secrets (TAKEN)
2. Whisper of the Dead (TAKEN)
3. Dead by my Hand (TAKEN)
4. Tainted Champaign (TAKEN)
5. Bleeding Tears (TAKEN)
6. That Angel was Me (TAKEN)
7. Lipstick on a Mirror (TAKEN)
8. Escaping innocence (TAKEN)
9. Deceited Mask (TAKEN)
10. Scattered Ashes (TAKEN)

5 DAYS FOR RESERVED POEMS

Can I please reserve "Lipstick on a Mirror"? Thanks!
~rhi

May I please reserve 'Whisper of the Dead'?

Thanks

xDarkSuicidex

can i please reserve 'escaping innocence'? thankx :) xoxo

Can i please reserve tainted champagne? =]

Can I reserve "Bleeding Tears" please? Thankss, I'm going to start on it now.. =)

Bleeding Tears [Villonet]

Tears slowly falling down her pale cheeks
Uncaringly blotching the once perfect face
Uncontrollable sobs clearly heard from afar
Its as if all the pain she has felt suddenly leaks..

Staring into the hearts of the stars, she speaks
Softly praying for a dear one, praying for love
Desperately trying to suppress her deep sobs
Tears slowly falling down her pale cheeks..

Since the death, it has only been two weeks
Closing painfully sore eyes, licking dry lips
Running a finger across his engraved name
Its as if all the pain she has felt suddenly leaks..

Tears slowly falling down her pale cheeks
Alone she sits in a cemetery painfully weeping
Its as if all the pain she has felt suddenly leaks..
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A Villonnet is a hybrid of the Villanelle and the Sonnet. It has the Iambic Pentameter of both,
but holds the four-stanza/line structure of the sonnet, while utilizing the two-line rhyme nature
of the villanelle. The final stanza replaces the sonnet couplet with a typical villanelle tercet

Scattered Ashes, If you please.

Scattered Ashes
By: Twisted Heart

Like gentle rain they meet the breeze
Drifting through the air's own breath
Tainted smell of burning leaves
On the cool ground they come to rest.
The embers of a smoldered fire
Takes hold the wind in sweet embrace
Collected souls who's own desire
To rise above the hot flame's fate.
Flickered then extinguished ghosts
No longer to renew their passion
The night gives life as their hosts
But they remain just scattered ashes.

wow i really loved all the titles............i want burning secrets and that angel was me, but i have to pick one................uhhhhh this is so hard to decide!!!!!!! hmmmmm.........burning secrets please!!!!!!!! thankz!

can i reserve That Angel was me..

The Whisper of the Dead

Do you hear it sigh deep within you head?
'Tis the distant, silent whisper of the dead.
Casting thoughts of being bitterly alone-
Clashing, breaking through paper skin and bone.
Telling stories filled with with malice, filled with dread
Dragging you to a place you'd rather not tread.
Waking you up, they'll take you from home,
As you hear the dead's distant, silent moan.

Out to the fields of the silent and the dead,
You'll find remorse dancing through your head.
A scream so loud it seeps within bone,
Screeching, telling you it is all alone.

Covering your ears you are filled with dread,
For they sing a quiet song as you tread.
Now, you wish to hear, instead, their silent moan,
Begging and pleading them to return you home;
For fading light whispers a prayer for the dead,
When you hear them sigh deep within your head.

xDarkSuicidex

I will do Deceited Mask if nobody else has

Deceited Mask

Looking in chaotic dismay...
Wondering how can I find my way?

One look makes me at ease,
Cause I know you are not just a disease...

You understand every inch of me,
Hence why I don't turn and flee...

Your eyes convinced me to stay sane,
And that is why I am not in any more pain...

How is it you and I are one in the same?
Yet I have no fortune, you have all the fame...

It is said you could be my twin,
But every time I look all I see is wind...

If you are my so called, "special half"
Why is it all I see is a deceited mask?

Escaping Innocence

I once was a girl,
A girl who never did anything wrong.
Had the perfect life, I was loved by so many.
Grew up in a caring family, we were all so close.
We moved around a lot, went to many schools.
Friends were hard to make, my sister became my best bud,
My parents were the greatest, they were my rock.
We started at a new school, settled down for once.
I met three beautiful girls, who became my life.
We were like sisters, best of friends.
Sharing every day together, sharing a special bond.
Nothing could come between us, inseparable we were,
Our friendship unbreakable.
I met a guy, who I thought was the one,
I love him so dearly, poured out my entire soul for him.
Everything was so perfect, our loving was magic,
But in the end, he broke my heart.
I was shattered, torn apart.
I bawled my eyes out, so many nights,
I tried to move on, forget about him.
But it was so hard, watching him with another girl,
I tried to play games, break them up.
My friends said he was not good enough for me,
That my love for him had to stop.
I took their advice, got on with my life.
But every time I was nearly over him, he kissed me,
Sucked me back in, so I though I had a change.
He kept hurting me, wrecking everything.
It was affecting my life, ruining my happiness.
I started fighting with my family, we became not as close.
I was upset, didn’t see the point of my life.
I started drinking, sneaking out to parties,
Steeling cars, driving with drunks.
My friends told me that I was stupid, that I had to stop.
They tried to mother me, they were just like my parents,
Telling me what to do, as if they knew it all.
I ended up pushing my family away, pushing my friends away, throwing our friendship down the drain.
It aggravated me to do it more, to be a naughty girl.
They thought they knew what was right, best for me,
But they didn’t have a clue, I hated them all.
I am aloud to have some fun, to drink if I want.
My friends made out like it was all so crazy, they were over reacting.
They said ther're not going to cover for me, for what I was doing was wrong.
They said all this hippy shit, that it doesn’t have to be like this,
You can have sensible fun, instead of crazy, stupid fun.
They told me the consequences, how I was ruining my life.
They said one day I will get caught, come crying back to them.
Inside I knew you they were right, but I couldn’t stop.
My innocence escaping, when was I going to stop?
I went out again, drinking and partying, more joy rides,
I decide that this was going to be my last time, last naughty thing,
And how right I was… I was caught, my parent found out about it all.
We argued, fought for hours,
The tears were pouring, streaming down our faces.
I had had enough, didn’t know what to do.
I ran out of the house, tried to hide from my life.
I called a friend, she made me do what was right.
I waited for a bit, then she called my parents,
They came and pick me up, took me home.
i laying in bed, compromising between thinking and breathing.
That night I cried myself to sleep, I was so scared, Afraid of my parents, afraid of my friends.
They must hate me so much, I feel so disloyal, I have let them all down.
Why did I do all this, why did i decide to wrecked my life…

**sorry that kind of ended up a bit like a story.. it about a close friend of mine and i just had to much to say. lol sorry guyz* phoebz :)

2 MORE DAYS FOR RESERVED POEMS!!!

Burning Secrets
by adrian or adrianc1294

control your feeling
I'd rather be dying
right now, right now

fire burning
lessons I'm learning
right now, right now

why do i feel this rage
I'm trapped in a cage
living in hell
trying to shout, trying to yell
burning secrets, about to explode
I'm trying to control it, trying to hold

whispers you'll hear
burning secrets, it's for real
dying, oh dear
this feeling, i try to deal

uncomfortable in my seat
thumping with fears, my heart skips a beat
shivering, you hear the eerie silence
asking,why didn't you give me a second chance!?!

why do i feel this rage
I'm trapped in a cage
living in hell
trying to shout, trying to yell
burning secrets, about to explode
I'm trying to control it, trying to hold

scared of my words
you can hear colliding 2 separate worlds
in misery i drown
smiles, became frown

hurtful burning secrets
we shouldn't have met
our feeling we let
share together as one
but together now we are all done

why do i feel this rage
I'm trapped in a cage
living in hell
trying to shout, trying to yell
burning secrets, about to explode
I'm trying to control it, trying to hold

whispers you'll hear
burning secrets, it's for real
dying, oh dear
this feeling, i try to deal

voice, voice
(my own choice, my own choice!)
kiss, kiss
(living in a hell of bliss, living in a hell of bliss!)
fake, fake
(our damn big mistake, just a big mistake!)

i can't take it anymore!!!!
it's too much!!!
burning secrets from both of us!!!
i hope we're both happy!!!

(burning secrets, burning secrets)

That Angel Was Me...

As i go into your dreams and see your face
I change your dreams to the most saddest to the happiest dreams that a person will ever have..
I may have saved your life..
From the most darkness of hell
no one has ever seen before..
I show my face only in your dreams hoping for you to see the light in this world..
Everyday i grow closer to you..
I feel these feeling that i have never felt before..
As i come down to Earth and finally meet you
I feel in deep love for you..
As you feel in love with me..
Not knowing where I'm from or where i came from..
all you talked about was a Angel in your dreams saving your life from the darkness of hell...
Hoping that you will find her one day..
Can't you see my love...
That Angel was me...

* its not my best but i hope you like it!*

im WIthering Decaying Roses...

um...what do you mean?

-Tainted Champagne.-

The clock strikes midnight, as he walks through the door,
Sets his briefcase down as he creeps across the floor.
The table is set with a bundle of roses in the middle,
And set upon the card was a tiny riddle:

"You fooled me once, and I let it slide,
You fooled me twice, and lost your pride.
Shame on you, shame on me,
For ever thinking, we could be."

He set the roses down beside the bucket of ice,
As she whispered in his ear to entice.
He turned to stare the devil in the eyes,
As through his mind, ran all of his lies.

A bloody dagger shoved through her heart,
As she slowly tore herself apart.
Blood dripped down through the seams,
As her cold hand trapped his silent screams.

A bullet with his name, bursting through his head,
As she bit her tongue from things she never said.
The night went on, as ice flowed through her veins,
Enlacing his body with tainted champagne.

© Jenna Elphick
September 13, 2006.

- - Sorry for the wait lol, I did get it done though! Lol. I've been busy and tonight I'm free until i start working on my module so I decided to catch up! =] - -

-Jenna.

Also, I don't know how much this corresponds with the title, it is probably a tad confusing. But, I can explain what I meant in it if you don't get it lol.

-Jenna.

ONE MORE!!! I get the judging done by Sunday

Results on top

Hehe, yayy! Thankss! =)

And yayy Jess! We got to share third place! =P

Why thank you, Noni. I wrote that on a bus on the way to a band competition... >.< Lol.

Thank you tons. =]

xDarkSuicidex

One person done

Yay! I feel special. =]]

-Jenna.