-[.Form.Contest.]-

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    CLOSEDD! Results at bottom! =P
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    Okay, so this is a form contest. Basically, you have to use one of the following forms in a poem.
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    .Rules.

    `Must be new
    `Only one poem per person
    `Can contain cussing
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    .Prizes.

    `First Place - 4 R/R/C's
    `Second Place - 3 R/R/C's
    `Third Place - 2 R/R/C's
    `Fourth Place - 1 R/R/C

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    .Forms.

    `Haiku {DONE!}

    A Haiku is a poem with a syllable count of 5/7/5 with the focus on nature.

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    `Senryu {DONE!}

    A Senryu has the same structure as a Haiku, (A poem with a syllable count of 5/7/5) but instead of the focus being on nature, it is on human emotions. This is usually only one stanza, but it may have more.

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    `Sedoka {DONE!}

    A Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of
    two three-line stanzas with the following syllable
    counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7

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    `Tetractys {DONE!}

    A poem that is composed of 5 lines with a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10.

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    `Pleiades {DONE!}

    A Pleiades is a poem where only one word is allowed in the title, followed by a seven-line stanza. The first word in every line must begin with the same letter as the word in the title.

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    `Cinquain {DONE!}

    A Cinquain is a short, unrhymed poem that consists of 22 syllables distributed into 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 lines.

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    So, there can be two poems for each form. Get writing! =P

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    Thinking about you (Tetractys)
    By: Italian Stallion

    .............................In
    ........................The dark
    .........................I sit and
    ....................Start to cry just
    Thinking about you and the times we once had

    © Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    -She's Gone.- {Tetractys}

    ......................There
    ....................Are rain
    ..................Drops on all
    ................The rose petals
    ....Sitting in the vase in that empty room.

    © Jenna Elpick
    September 10, 2006.

    **Kay, so since these are so short lol, i couldn't explain the meaning. So i tried to in the title lol.**

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Great poems both of you! Loved them! =)

    Keep them coming people!

  • Oscar
    18 years ago

    Love (pleiades)

    Lost in your eyes,
    Living your lies.
    Longing for one little true lullaby.
    Lurking around
    Like my life is planned.
    Looking for someone to come hold my hand.
    Love, however comes not.

    i don't know if that's ok if not i can remove it

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    It's good Oscar, of course you don't have to remove it! =)

    Keep them coming!

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Alone {Cinquain}

    ..................Stained tears,
    ................From perfect eyes,
    .............Can never hide the truth,
    .....That she's simply crying for help,
    ........................Alone.

    11th September 2006
    Copyright (C) Natalie.

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    A Cinquain is a short, unrhymed poem that
    consists of 22 syllables distributed into 2, 4,
    6, 8, 2 lines.
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  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Our Sun (Sedoka)

    Blinding horizan
    Painting the sky with deep hues
    Portrait of reflection seas

    One day it shall fade
    As time stills within a life
    Merging like a Roman myth

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Are we allowed to reserve? If we are, I want Pleiades....
    I guess I'll try writing another one of those..To me they're very hard, though.

    I wish you would have had an Ottava Rima or Palindrome up here.. I tend to have picked those up quite easily. =]
    But I'll try, for you. =] Haha.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • crazyandsweet
    18 years ago

    ............Moonlight *haiku*

    .....Soft, beautiful, glow...
    Glaring down amongst us now...
    .....Such heavenly light!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Finally {Pleiades}

    Finally he saw their nightmares were his dreams,
    Fire setting through his veins so bright,
    Flowing feely against a midnight sky,
    Forgotten are his dreams, he'll steal a nightmare instead,
    For this is what the Sandman does.
    Finite lines keep him away from the world;
    Finally he'll take away your nightmares.
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    A Pleiades is a poem where only one word is allowed in the title, followed by a seven-line stanza. The first word in every line must begin with the same letter as the word in the title.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • Ye Seul
    18 years ago

    Two Hot Streams (Senryu)

    Burning eyes drop tears
    Quickly falling down my face
    Until the heat fades

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Wow, amazing work everyone!

    Still 3 spaces open! =P

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Aww, that was good!

    2 more! =P

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Anyone else? =P

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    Love Me (Cinquain)

    ....................Love Me
    ................That Is All I
    ........Ask From You My Dear Boy
    Please Be The One, The Only One
    .....................For Me

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Yay! =P

    Only 1 moree, come get it!

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    YAy!! One more!

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    ^ Lol, thanks Kevin

    C'mon people, no one can write just one poem? =P

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Lol, you were close! Senryu lol. And it was a very interesting one you wrote lol. And this contest is done now?

    -Jenna.

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Yayy! =P

    Okies, I'll start judging soon.. Just have a lot to do at the moment!

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Okayyy, here are the results! Just want to say that everyone did a great job and I enjoyed them all! =)

    *Drum Roll* [Lol..]

    4th Place - Joe with Thinking about you (Tetractys)!

    3rd Place - Natalie with Alone {Cinquain}!

    2nd Place - Ye Seul with Two Hot Streams (Senryu)!

    And finallyy!

    1st Place - Jess with Sun Shower [Haiku]!

    Great job everyone, and thanks to everyone who participated! Comments will be given out soon! =P

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    AW!!!

    Thanks Jessy!!!

    Congrats to everyone!! Awh!! Tehe. ;P

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Congrats everyone! =]

    -Jenna.