Enigma writing?

Yo....someone told me my poems are confusing and for the most part they don't give a clear indication of what they're about. So, i'll post one in here and see if any of you guys, my fellow bards can tell me what i was thinking about. Ta .

WHOLENESS

To be breathing
for a reason to continue
to others looking
impressing the need upon to dazzle
show them them and
what the ask for wordless

to be parting
such a cage as others desire
burning as you walk the wire
let it go as it does flow
breadcrumbs to hidden pains
lines of truth you form again

Wow, that's more confusing that Jesus' parables.

I understood the first stanza as peer pressure, and a need to impress others, for others sake.

Second stanza: peer pressure is thrown out the window and the person becomes him/herself again, thus coming out of the cage as others desire. burning as you walk the wire, would be being criticized for daring to be different.
the thruth you form again, would be when one becomes him/herself again,and stop being someone others want you to be.

Well that is the best I can make of this poem. I can't wait for your interpretation.

Nice one Dave, it's about my mate who tends to cut herself because of the pressure she feels from other peoples expectations of her to succeed.

But yeah....bold effort.

bah, I like my interpretation better!!!

but..*sigh* .. we will have to settle for yours...

Nice poem, now I see what you mean. :)
I hope your friend is ok.