mixed up lyrics for me!

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED

    WINNERS!!!!!

    [1] CIAO! [here's to my ending on loving you]
    [2] SOLE! [Thank You]
    [3] ITALLIAN STALLION [i want to know why]

    CONGRATS everyone!

    hey ppl! well i'm starting again a new contest! i love doing contest! anyways, i really, really want to do this contest becuz it's a topic of how i'm feeling rite now. well, you know the procedure, the rules are below this!

    rules:
    1) LYRICS/and POEM
    2) new OR old
    3) about having mixed up feelings like, your sad, but you're happy. oh, and it's like, you like someone, but you hate them (nonsense, but you'll get what i'm tlking about!)
    4) i don't care about cussing
    6) EXPRESS YOUR FEELINGS!

    this is really about you kno, you love this exguy/exgirl, but you're really mad at them, but when the times comes and they'll look at you, you feel like in heaven and then not be mad. you know MOOD SWINGS! if you don't get it, feel free to ask.

    if you don't have any titles you have in mind or any idea...heres what can help hopefully (please reserve it)

    *i'm in a mood swing, can't you see?
    *i hate you, and i love you!
    *suffering confusing mood
    *fickle minded
    *never mind my answer
    *change it

    XD thankz!

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    OMG!! I so wanna do this!! I've already started writing the lyrics though last night.. So I hope I can just use those. :]

    I can't finish it until tomorrow though.. cause I gotta go out today.

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    I Want to Know Why (Song)
    By: Italian Stallion

    Verse 1:
    I want to know why
    Why this feeling won't subside
    Why my heart keeps pointing to you
    I just want to know why

    Verse 2:
    Why I did love you
    When you where a jerk
    Why I still feel for you
    When I know it's long gone

    Chorus:
    I may never know
    The answer has yet to come
    For I am still searching
    For why I love you so

    Verse 3:
    Until then I may never know
    Why I feel this way
    Why I still love
    You after all you've done and said

    Repeat Verse 2:
    Why I did love you
    When you where a jerk
    Why I still feel for you
    When I know it's long gone

    Chorus:
    I may never know
    The answer has yet to come
    For I am still searching
    For why I love you so

    © Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    I think I did this right... :)

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    yes u can post an old one. i changed the rule..

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    wow is this really that challenging?

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    anybody else?

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    haha, I guess I am the only one...I guess I win....lol j/k

  • Oscar
    18 years ago

    My Guardian Angel

    I stand here protected, as one guarded child.
    I sit alone safely, where nothing is wild.
    Never been in danger, never in harm's way.
    and all of life's challenges, waited at bay.

    i have always been happy, for I've never felt pain.
    my angel stands by me through sun snow and rain.
    she is always smiling. and a smile she receives.
    she tricks enemies away, or is it me she deceives?

    I have always been guarded, and so never in fear.
    and I stay locked up always, year after year.
    have not seen a human, for she said they are bad
    and even though i am healthy, i remain sad.

    have i been missing out, is there much more to life,
    could i someday have children and maybe a wife?
    I must see it for myself, no longer can i wait.
    i must be fragile, for fear is a human trait.

    i wanted the experience, yet she locked me in.
    i tried to run away, but she will always win.
    I'm stuck here forever, i cry through the night.
    and for the first time ever, i am feeling fright.

    so long's gone by now, i still am stuck here.
    i now cry every night, for real life is so near.
    but here i shall stay, until my final breath.
    so is she My Guardian Angel, or my Angel of Death.

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    hmm kool

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    anyone else? ok, i'll change the rules and u can EITHER write LYRICS or POEM, is that better?

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    18 years ago

    ok well apparently mypoem fits perfectly in this contest.. so im entering it(i was told i should enter by someone who read my poem and knew this contest,.)

    Umm well i hope you like it...

    By My Side
    by •ღ•τιŋy•ђєąяτ•ღ•

    I want to be,
    next to you.
    I miss you when,
    you're far away.
    being with you,
    makes my day.

    I need you to be near,
    when you're here,
    I have no fear.
    but when you leave,
    when you're gone,
    I'm forgotten.
    abandoned.
    left out,
    in the cold.

    I cry,
    I die,
    Inside,
    it kills me.
    I can't survive,
    without you.
    I can't deny,
    I need you..

    I need you to,
    be by my side,
    for me to hide,
    sheltered behind.
    this burning desire,
    like gasoline,
    on fire
    ecstasy-
    only higher,
    but then I learn...
    you're a liar

    a cheat
    a sneak
    a crook
    like, a coded book..

    a story consisting,
    of torn pages.
    and forgotten,
    lies.
    i forgot to read,
    between the
    broken lines.

    now I see,
    how you're a fake.
    it's like finally,
    I've begun to wake.
    from a clouded dream,
    an incubus
    of screams.
    a nightmare,
    of lies,
    atleast,
    that's what it seems.

    now everything,
    is back,
    to the way
    it used to be.
    nothing is right,
    there is no more light,
    the world is
    covered,
    smoldered in night.
    the eyes of the people,
    are shadowed,
    in fright.

    I can't look you
    in the eyes.
    can't face,
    your demonic lies.
    I can never,
    bear the sight.
    because of you,
    I will never
    be alright.
    your lies show the fact,
    that you never feel contrite.
    this spark of hatre
    is what,
    you ignite.

    your lies,
    they kill me,
    burn me inside.
    make me feel,
    a desperate
    need to hide.
    can't you tell?
    that it's you
    I despise?

    please leave me.
    just forget me.
    I desperately need,
    for you to regret me.

    just find,
    someone else.
    to torment.
    to torture.
    to curse.

    and to make their lives
    miserably worse

    please find,
    another girl,
    to kill,
    with your lies.
    because no more tears,
    will fall
    from these eyes.
    these cheeks,
    shall be dry.
    I will never again cry...

    But I want,
    you to know,
    that I still
    need you...
    by my side.

    x.x:Lauren

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    great job!!!!! :)

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    Here's To My Ending On Loving You [ Lyrics ]

    Here's to the tears you knew I'd cry
    Here's to the heartless said goodbye
    Here's to the heart you knew you'd break
    Here's to the love I knew you faked

    There was a time when I knew that it just wouldn't last
    There were times when I knew that this would pass
    There were the moments when I knew that we were through
    Here's to my ending on loving you

    Here's to lies I knew you told
    Here's to the time that just got old
    Here's to memories, watch them burn
    Here's to the lessons I'd thought you'd learn

    There was a time that I thought that you cared
    There was I time I thought you'd always be there
    There were times when I thought that this could be
    But now all the burden's been shoved off of me

    Here's to the nights that I sat up and cried
    Here's to the reasons that I asked you why
    Here's the life you thought you'd break
    Here's to the memories that are just too fake

    There was a time that I loved you yet
    There was a time I was willing to forget
    There was a time that I'd fight just for you
    But not after all the crap that you put me through

    Here's to boy that made me strong
    Betcha didn't see that all along
    Hard to see me still standing tall
    Hope that it was worth all in all

    hope this was okay...
    ¤Ciao¤

    *edited*

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW

    OMFG!!!!!! that was f***ing awesome!!!!!

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    thank you! =]

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    it's so damn kool!

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    18 years ago

    that is a wicked cool song, you should record yourself(or someone else) playing and singing it., and put it on you tube or w/e and give hte link. i'd love to hear it put to music.

    =]]

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    if no one will, i'll do it! :P

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    I liked the song, but it was to repeditive...

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    i'm working on it now... thanks for the support guys!!! < 3

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    ur welcome!

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    bump

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    any one else?

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    I have lyrics... but I do not think it is what you are looking for.. Sorry. =[ I would really have liked to enter this contest.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    bump

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    thank you ciao

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    welcome! :]

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    bump

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    I edited my poem.. hope it's okay

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    sure it's fine

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    bump

  • Sole
    18 years ago

    Thankyou
    -----------------

    You're awesome my friend
    Funny and kind
    You kpt all those secrets
    And proved I was blind

    You showed me the world
    Through your twisted eyes
    Told me you cared
    And told me your lies

    You craved my smile
    My innocence, my laugh
    Then smashed my feelings
    You're moving too fast

    I'm in debt to you, friend
    For being so cruel
    For breaking my heart
    And calling me fool.

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    when is this over?! I would love to know. :]

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    hello?!? i know you're there!!! lol

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    oh, umm, how many r there?

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    there r 6 so umm.....at least 2 more. but if no one really joins, i'll close it. :)

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    kk =) thanks!!

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    lol welcome

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    hmm...i'm kinda tired of watin'. you think i should judge it already, Ciao?

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    I say you should judge it, it's been a while now...