NEW CONTEST BY WHO CARES!!!!!!!

Closed:(

so like um im feeling that for this contest it should be about being nervous. cuz ive been so nervous about ABSOLUTELY nothing (well sorta) that i keep throwing up and getting rashes (yeah i kno creepy! haha) anyway, like u dun need to go into detailing about all that..but something involving nerves..so yeah:)

contest ends when i got 15 poems, or on October 1st

prizes:
1st 8 r/r/c
2nd 6 r/r/c
3rd 4 r/r/c
2 H/M 2 r/r/c
(lol same prizes i use for all my contests)

so good luck:)
reserved spots (2 days to do it guys)

hmm, can u resrve a spot pls. i'll try to make up a poem about that. i've been feeling like that too. but is nervous like scared? cuz i think wat i'm feeling is scared. anyways, pls reserve it! :)

Dream

I'm sorry that I failed you
I did not try hard enough
My mind told me
That I wasn't good enough
And I believed it
Simply because
I have never known any different
You were the first to tell me
That I could do anything
Absolutely anything that I wanted
And I wanted so much to do this
But then my mind failed
For you are the only one
Who believes in me
And when you're not there
Neither is my dream
So I forget
I become weak
Then when I wake up again
To the truth that you told me
It is forgotten
I am alone
And the dream slips away.

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Okay, the story behind this was when I was a few days away from my first martial arts exam and I was sure that I was going to fail....
I was very nervous, and extraordinarily scared that I would fail my teacher, who is also a very good friend, and to not make it... oh well, I felt horrible. I didn't throw up or anything, but I kept on getting cold and giddy and shivering, as well as I couldn't eat very much or concentrate..
Okay, well, that's it..

//T.L.//

ok good job. and ill reserve.

omg come on!

does no1 really care about me anymore *cries* my name is true..WHO CARES?! if u care...ull post a poem:D

ok:D YAY SOMEONE CARES:D any1 else care? lol im goin 2 bed so HOPEFULLY wen i get home 2morro from school i got somstuff

*sniffle*

does it have to be new?

I've just changed One of my older poems to suit this contest.. hope that's ok.. If not I'm sorry for wasting Your time.

Anxiety

My throat goes dry, I start to shake,
my stomach drops and starts to ache.
My heart is racing, my chest goes tight,
My nails, I begin to bite.
I feel sick, my visions blurred,
I try to speak, it comes out slurred.
The turning over of my belly,
my legs go weak, and feel like jelly.
The walls they seem to be closing in,
the lights are on but the rooms so dim.
I try so hard to stop the attack,
but nothing works, my mind goes blank.
Anxiety comes if I'm on my own,
watching T.V and all alone.
Even worse if I have to go out,
especially when, there's lots of folk about.
Whether there's good reason, or none to see,
I hate these nerves inside of me.

srry u can unreserve me

Like A Man So Mean

As i lay my fist on wall
my knees gets so weak
crashes down on floor
i barely could speak

light turns to darkness
voices captures my mind
every inch of body aches
just when i look behind

everytime that we make a fight
i feel my end coming so close
somehow it happens everyday
these fights have become a daily dose

sometimes i just wonder
if we all go through same?
if we are born to be blamed?
will these things ever change?

i guess, i make no sense
life is just meant to be so green
on the other side of the fence
and so i keep breathing like a man so mean

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Hi There!!
Hope this one fits in the contest, more than being nervous i think i am confused... :o))

Take Care

nervousness
by adrian or adrianc1294

my hands shaking with fear
eerie whispers, i could hear
nerves coming down from my spine
stuttering when i try to speak all the time

my head aching, i cry so loud
my tummy tumbling, growling, it shouts
my feet pinned down on the floor
i wanted to die, i couldn't take it anymore

so hungry, but i couldn't eat
spitting it out, it taste like sh-t
all night long, with out any food
is this my destiny, and how it should?

i can't breath, I'm suffocating
this swallowing and spitting, it's irritating
i can't live like this, I'll die with nervousness
inside it, a girl who want to be undressed

WHO CARES!!!!!!!!! i did it alredy!

u might have forgotten this contest!

im sorry! my pc has been broken for 2 weeks i just got it back a few hrs ago!!!!! i was hoping i'd have more stuff....but that's ok...im extending it until oct. 1st cuz theres only 5 entries..lol

Destiny

I can see now, what's happened to me.
I chose everyone's praise, over my ecstasy.
they all laughed at me, and i could do nothing.
for i was real timid, and as weak as a spring.

i would run home each day, afraid of the bus.
afraid of the torment, from those who are flawless.
and to put myself to sleep, i'd cry ever night.
and I'd lay there and cry, until there was no light.

i can't stand it anymore, the teasing, the pain.
i must make it stop, or no more will i be sain.
i had nothing for dinner, nor lunch the next day.
all i did was drink water, and wash pills my way.

and this i kept up, for a very long time.
hardly ate anything, soon was as thin as a mime.
but i always had headaches, and never could sleep
yet i'd still wash down pills, and i never did weep

i am so weak now, that i can hardly stand.
it's as if, over my body, i have lost command.
but i feel accepted now, so it doesn't matter.
i can remove the pain, with a pill and water.

and with a couple more pills, the day comes closer.
as my unkown destiny aproaches nearer.
and i go lay to rest, with the last pill i take.
for from this fatal sleep, i shall not awake.

more?

well seeing as only 6 people entered i guess everyone can win. how about everyone gets 4 r/r/c. sound good? let me know what you think:) if not..then i guess i could judge...but seeing as theres only 6 i dont see a point..

that's awesome! he he he!

do i tell you the 4 poems or r u going to do it random?

u can tell me if u want to.

I think it's a top idea lol we're all winners for entering.. sweet hehe

u can do it random! surprise me! lol

ok:)

maybe someone hexed you so you'd throw up and get rashes.. lol jk! what happened to your awesome titles? lol

well have fun!

lol idk i was all bleh that day and my title is boring. my new contest is: THE COW IN THE MEADOW SAYS "MOO" so enter it ppl!