Read/Comment on My Poems

I just added a few (5-6) poems. If you could read them and comment I would really appriciate it. Just post here and I will read yours too. Thanks.

wow, i'm pumped! i'm on my way. oh, you can read any poems. thanks in advanced:)

I am definatly going to read urs. Please vote and comment on mine if you can.

Can you read my poems? only the first couple of poems.. all the others are really old... I'm off to read yours!