[[ TITLE ]] Contest For FANTASY and MYTHICAL lOVERS

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    --CLOSED CLOSED FOR JUDGING----

    Rules
    -New
    -No cussing
    -Preferably rhyme...but not a must
    -Must be less than 30 lines
    -Somehow use these titles into a sinister or a fantasy/mythical way...some harder than others

    1. Forsworn Hunters
    2. Oracle of Dawn (DONE)
    3. Aphrodite's kiss (DONE)
    4. Midsummer magic (DONE)
    5. Beneath the Sands (Done)
    6. Forest Maiden (DONE)
    7. Underneath a cloak of white (DONE)
    8. Eye of Stone (Done)
    9. Chains of Death (DONE)
    10. Forsaken gates. (DONE)

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Can I please reserve Forest Maiden?

    -Jenna.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    May I have "Chains of Death"? Thank you. =]

    xDarkSuicidex

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    o0o can I reserve midsummer magic? thnx

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    well, I had some time and I finished it now! =]

    Midsummer Magic

    Lying on the grass
    Underneath the stars
    Wondering if she could reach them
    They can’t be that far

    She observes her surroundings
    And sees the normal things
    The moon and its brilliant light
    What the April showers bring

    She wishes she could just sleep there
    Surrounded by the mist and dew drops
    Nothing could break this feeling
    It’s like lying in the flower tops

    Her little fairy body
    Her sparkling jeweled wings
    Her small and dainty hands
    All decorated in pretty rings

    Sitting in the moonlight
    It catches in her eyes
    Wandering little dryads
    Glance up with surprise

    Who is this little fairy
    So new to this life
    Her voice so pure and simple
    As beautiful as a fife

    Smiling at the moon
    The fairy drifts on home
    She never feels afraid
    Even though she’s all alone

    Someday she’ll grow up
    And learn to appreciate everything
    But for right now she appreciates
    What the midsummer magic brings

    (c) CiaO!

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    Oracle of Dawn, for me please

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    The Oracle of Dawn- A Raven's Song
    By: Twisted Heart

    In deprivation, she walks alone
    With tattered wings upon her back
    She steps into her ashen home
    And lends her cry to their attack.

    With pure blood, still on her lips
    Angry shrieks become her call
    She gathers heathens with her kiss
    Watching as they begin to fall.

    Before the master at the gate
    She bows and dips her blackened wings
    She sinks her talons with hungered haste
    Into the flesh of what death brings.

    Then she soars into the distance
    As the dawn begins to quake
    Black night has put up resistance
    To the horizon's blood red fate.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Okay, well I am at school, and I am bored out of my freaking mind, so I will write it, and then type it out at home and have it up later. =]]

    -Jenna.

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    ok

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    -Edit-

    -Jenna.

  • Esther
    18 years ago

    can you reserve me the first title! thanks!

  • Esther
    18 years ago

    Fore sworn hunters!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Not my best..But putting it into a fantasy was harder to do than I thought. =S
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    The Chains of Death

    Gripping so tightly to steal your only breath,
    Holding on densely are the Chains of Death.
    Wanting to save the princess the knight cries out,
    Begging to be released, he shrieks and shouts.

    The princess' yells are heard from above,
    Screaming for her one and only true love.
    The bloodied chains pull tighter against the knight,
    Never letting go, enjoying the fight.

    The knight struggles one last time against the chains,
    He's losing faith and hope, but gaining shame.
    The knight takes his final struggling breath,
    For closing in tightly are the Chains of Death.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Okay

  • silhouette fairy
    18 years ago

    reserve Eye of Stone please......

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Great job Everyone.

    ONE MORE DAY FOR OLD RESERVED POEMS!!

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    bump

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Yeah, I'm taking out the reserves

  • silhouette fairy
    18 years ago

    Eyes of stone
    by Silhouette, of something unimaginable

    Far away in a land
    surrounded by water
    there is a woman
    cursed with the eyes of stone
    just one look,
    direct in the eyes
    you freeze, so you think
    never to be seen again
    turned to stone
    you're frozen to your end
    the land is lovely
    just beware
    don't go around
    looking for her,
    eyes of stone

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Soon Soon, one more week

  • BoulevardOfBrokenDreams
    18 years ago

    Forest Maiden is done too.

  • silhouette fairy
    18 years ago

    some one please do the other poem pplllleeeaaassseeee

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    The Contest Ends SATURDAY

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Noni--
    If you would allow, I would like to write Forest Maiden, as well. If you do not want two peoms by the same author in the contest, I will forfit 'The Chains of Death' (I didn't really like that poem, anyways.) Thanks.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Go Ahead

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    The Forest Maiden

    Bind us now, to what we withhold,
    Let us resound, shining of gold.
    Joyful partakers hear by stand
    Grasping for life within your hand.

    Such precious beliefs this object may breathe,
    Glimmering with fate soon, by this eve.
    Clutch firmly to what there lays,
    Alas, holding on too securely, it may fray.

    Be gentle now, hush, hear the darkness,
    As it sinks in deeply to your hand's eternal bliss.
    Uncalled to be, jealousy is agonized,
    Rejoicing joyously to what there abides.

    The want to hold on is too strong,
    But, to be created is where it belongs.
    Opening hands cold with trepidation,
    The Forest Maiden looks at her new creation.

    The burning sun will sing of her desire,
    Mimicking it by its dreaming fire.
    As it is released into the galaxy,
    The sun will giggle with gallant glee.

    But, once you see what did stray,
    You'll aloud curse the Forest Maid.
    For what she gave us was the world,
    And all the lies that unfurled;
    Hiding beneath pale veils so cold,
    You are bound to what you withhold.

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    Understanding: The Forest Maiden held, in her hands, the world. She then freed it, creating the earth and all, but also unleashing lies and all that the world is. The last two lines basically say you are respond for what you do.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    I already did Forest Maiden, whatever I'll take mine out then.

    -Jenna.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Lush--
    I am so sorry.. I didn't see it and apparently neither did Noni. I hope you forgive me.. I'll resign mine, instead. It was rightfully yours first. =]

    xDarkSuicidex

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    No, it's fine. Yours was better than mine and I have already taken mine out anyways.

    -Jenna.

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Oh I'm Sorry guys. You didn't have to get rid of your poem. I would have accepted both since it's my fault.

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Bump

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    1st PLACE: Makeshift
    Terza rimas' are hard because if there's too many fill words and no imagery, than the poem sounds bleak. But Your poem was beautiful.

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    2nd::Twisted Heart
    Dark and lovely job. Your choice of words weren't the best but you still pieced together nicely.
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    3rd:: Darksuicide & Bryan

    Both of you guys used great descriptions. Darksuicide's poem was mysterious, dark and strong. Bryan's poem was elegant and in a way romantic.

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    4th:: ConcealedinAddiction.

    I liked the story outline of your poem. You organized it well and I liked the repeating stanza. The ending was very powerful.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Same for me? I am going to guess The Forest Maiden for that was the best one of the two.. Anyways.. Thank you very much, Noni. A grand contest you held here.

    Congratulations to everyone else!

    xDarkSuicidex

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    congrats to everyone

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    ^Bryan, underneath the cloak of white