Awful contest, don't read this! Trust me you'll regret it!

This compition is over! Finished, Finito! So those who entered please tell me which of your poems you want me to do, those who won a prize, please tell me which of your poems you want doing!

P.s. To all others who want to do this compition then go to #2 it is exactly the same as this one!

And can it be old?

OK I really want to know if it can be old *gives puppy dog eyes* pwease *sniffles*

wow! awesome contest!
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The Tale Of A Werewolf

Light turns to shadows
As day turns to night
My presence is unknown
I must stay out of sight

I grow steadily weary
The time is drawing near
Slowly I am filled with dread
I start to shake with fear

I stumble to a room
Lock myself in tight
There's no way I can escape
There'll be no killings tonight

Suddenly the changes start
In agony I scream
This is way too much to bear
I wish this were a dream

The pain finally stops
I slowly rise to my feet
Power surges through my body
I'm a beast that knows no defeat

I race around the room
Frantically searching for a way out
Frustration grows inside me
Until I want to shout

A howl comes from my throat
I hurl myself at the door
I will not be trapped
I never have been before

The door splinters on impact
Joyously I howl
I jump through an open window
To begin my midnight prowl

I race through the woods
The full moon leading the way
The thirst for blood surges
I must find my prey

A smell drifts through the air
Unmistakably fresh
I run in that direction
Towards the scent of human flesh

Mad with desire
I fly through the night
I come to a camp
Killing everyone in sight

In the morning I awaken
In my human form once again
I realize I'm in the woods
And my head begins to swim

I take in my surroundings
Gasping at the sight
The ground is covered with blood
I shudder as I remember the night

Sorrow fills my body
Tears fall down my face
Knowing that I must leave
I vanish without a trace

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The Night That I Died

As I look down at the world,
From high up above,
I watch certain people,
The ones that I loved.

They're consumed with grief,
Thousands of tears are cried,
I've watched on in silence,
Since the night that I died.

I look back on the wreck,
And the feelings of terror,
Of when the drunk driver hit my car,
And when I knew that death was near.

I remember the pain,
And the rage that built inside me,
I was just a teenager,
Too young to die so tragically.

I fought to hold on,
Still I slipped away,
The other driver was fine,
And still living till this day.

The memory refreshed,
I turn away from the sight,
No longer being able to watch my family,
I fade into the night.

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Broken

Your words slice through me
sharp as a knife
my blissful happiness is gone
because of this strife
each day is the same
you break me, then put me back together
i'll go in my room to hide
when i come out, you act like you don't remember
you don't see how hurt i am
even though it's so clear
and no matter how many times i cry
you don't see a single tear
you don't understand how much pain you cause me
you'll never understand my sorrow
you don't know how many times i pray
that it'll be better tomorrow
but it'll never be better
for when i think there's finally peace
it's all torn away
it comes to a cease
i end up broken
just like before
all the suffering i've gone through
i'll go through once more
i wish you'd stop this yelling
it makes me feel like such a failure
you don't realize what you're doing
my life is becoming my nightmare
my memories are haunting me
i'm restless every night
i cannot fall asleep
all i can do is cry
the next day you come up to me
you put me together again
then you say you're sorry
and you think you've been forgiven
but there's something different now
something is not right
for a piece of me is missing
one that's beyond your sight
i feel like all my true happiness is gone
i'm in this deep depression
but nobody will ever know this
for i'm lying and pretending
i'll never show how i really feel
unless you're someone i trust
you'll never see a single tear shed
in public my pain turns to dust
but no matter what i lead you to believe
inside i am crying silently
for i know if things keep going this way
my nightmare will become my reality

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hope these are ok...i feel that they are my best poems. thanks for reading! ^.^

kool! if there r limited spots, please reserve one for me!

Sure the poem can be old or new so long as it is your own work! And okay a deadline? Friday!

All poems have to be in by Friday! whic should ive evry-one time for a) me to read them
B) for any-one who wants to create one specially to do so!

There isn't limited spots, just only up to three per person!

“Daughter of a freak” -dark

Her hair so awful, her skin so pale,
She always wondered, where did she fail?
Born by a freak, raised as a slave,
No one to guide her, to tell her how to behave.
Years of working, years so dark,
She has never seen light, it has left its mark.
Shut in a room, just going out to clean,
It's the most horrifying thing they'd ever seen.
A key to lock her bedroom door,
Nothing on the walls, nothing on the floor.
No pillow, no bed, no good memories to hold,
No warmth, no love, nothing but cold.
Her mother locked the door, threw away the key,
The girl keeps asking herself "Whats so wrong with me"
Sitting in her room, hearing her mother go out,
She tries to scream, she tries to shout.
Her mother left her behind, in this room to die,
Now she's sitting there, trying not to cry.
She lays down, on the cold hard ground,
Trying to pray, hearing no sound.
Laying there for a couple of days,
in darkness and sadness, down she layes.
She will never raise again, never see the light,
She finally gives up, she will no longer fight.
Her eyes cry of sorrow, her eyes cry of tears,
Suddenly she sees something, an angel appears.
"Come with me, darling, come to the light,
"We will love you, you don't have to fight"
The angel smiles and reaches out her hand,
Where did this come from, she doesn't understand.
The girl reaches out her hand, suddenly starts to soar,
"Don't worry little darling, they won't hurt you anymore"
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“The long lost dream” –about life

"I can not save the world" she says,
and looks at the sunset view,
She sits and thinks of wonder woman,
She wants to be her too.

At the age of only ten,
she knows what she'll become,
"If I can not touch everyone,
I will try to touch some."

She has decided years ago,
A writer is what she'll be.
She will not follow the rest of the crowd,
She won't be trapped, but free.

Five years later the dream came back,
"I almost let it fade,"
Now she thinks back to that night,
when the dream of her life was made.

She starts to tell people,
about her long lost dream,
She is so exited,
Out she wants to scream.

But people underestimate her,
"A writer? Please, come on"
Her courage took a turn,
Her fate was nearly gone.

She can't believe they even dared,
To think she couldnt win,
A tear fell down her burning eyes,
She burned deep within.

She decides in that moment,
She will never quit,
"I'm not going to save the world,
I'm going to change it!"
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“Three women, three men” –dark

This awful man, so full of hate,
You as his wife is your fate.
He sits on his butt, and he always yell,
He wasn't even let in to hell.
He controls you, and he always shout,
You can't do anything, you can't go out.
You lost all your friends, all your hope,
If this was you, would you turn to the rope?

He hits and punches, abuses and smiles,
You can't even let him hear your cries.
He always yells "Get me a beer"
"I love you" is something you'll never hear.
"I care" is out of the question, gone,
He makes you do things, like moe the lawn.
Then he gets angry, you didn't make dinner,
This man full of sh*t, this awful sinner.
You lived with him, you were his wife,
If this happened, would you turn to the knife?

This dreadful man, without a job,
He dresses awfully, just like a slob.
You have to go to bed with him, every night,
And every night you have to fight.
He wants you, he needs you, in a sexual way,
He hurts and he rapes, every day.
Love is something he doesn't give,
You really feel like you don't want to live.
He's eyes are so cold, it makes you shiver,
If this was you, would to turn to the river?

Best Friends For Life.

Best friends for life, that's You and I.
Eternally blessed, every day that goes by.
Sobbing through sad times, laughing through fun.
Trusting each other, since our friendship begun.

Fondest memories of years gone by,
Reassuringly knowing, our friendship won't die.
In times of trouble, there's me and You,
Each challenge arisen, we've made it through.
Nights full of laughter, outweigh the tears,
Doubting each other, NEVER, in seven years.
Stronger and stronger, our friendship grows,

For You my friend, my love overflows.
Opposites attract, but we're two of a kind,
Respect of the highest form, we ever could find.

Lucky and grateful, for the day that we met,
It's a friendship so special, for lifetime it's set.
Forever and always, right up 'til the end,
Everlasting love and respect, for my best ever friend.

Remember My Tears
by ♥ .J.є.ѕ.ѕ.у. ♥

{...Remember My Tears...}

Elegantly falling over smooth cheeks
Destroying perfectly polished makeup
Sparkling lightly like scattered diamonds
Cutting deep canyons into soft pale skin..

{...Remember My Tears...}

Falling relentlessly like sapphire waterfalls
Smudging dark blood around saddened eyes
Carefully outlining their emerald coloring
Releasing all pain from within in salty drops..

{...Remember My Tears...}

Glowing delicately under the pale moon
Leaving black streams to flow across my face
Slowly washing away the dirt from my life
Remember my tears, because you created them..

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Eternally Trapped
by ♥ .J.є.ѕ.ѕ.у. ♥

Slowly creeping in, taking over innocent souls
Suffocating in never ending pain, silently dying
Endlessly stabbing soft hearts, unhealed holes
Internally debating if I should just stop trying..

Falling in deeper, eternally trapped in the dark
Reaching up for a hand, but left struggling all alone
Choices unwisely made, to deaths door I embark
Heading steadily through steel gates of the unknown..

Bony fingers followed by ebony wings grasp me
Pulling me away from love, from those who care
No longer fighting or having the strength to disagree
The connection between life and death slowly tears..

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Flying Across The Dance Floor
by ♥ .J.є.ѕ.ѕ.у. ♥

He grabs my hand, pulling me towards him
My heart is pounding and my cheeks are glowing
We cling to each other and move as one
Flying across the dance floor we seem to be flowing..

Feeling his hot breath on my face makes me shiver
My waist shaking to the rhythm, my hands in his
Twirling and spinning, our eyes are connected
A scene of lust and hunger it surely is..

Our bodies start to rub, becoming a part of the music
His face moves closer and kisses my tender lips
I desperately try to get closer, wanting so much more
But the dance suddenly ends, leaving his hands on my hips..

ok my first one

My Guardian Angel

I stand here protected, as one guarded child.
I sit alone safely, where nothing is wild.
Never been in danger, never in harm's way.
and all of life's challenges, waited at bay.

i have always been happy, for I've never felt pain.
my angel stands by me through sun snow and rain.
she is always smiling. and a smile she receives.
she tricks enemies away, or is it me she deceives?

I have always been guarded, and so never in fear.
and I stay locked up always, year after year.
have not seen a human, for she said they are bad
and even though i am healthy, i remain sad.

have i been missing out, is there much more to life,
could i someday have children and maybe a wife?
I must see it for myself, no longer can i wait.
i must be fragile, for fear is a human trait.

i wanted the experience, yet she locked me in.
i tried to run away, but she will always win.
I'm stuck here forever, i cry through the night.
and for the first time ever, i am feeling fright.

so long's gone by now, i still am stuck here.
i now cry every night, for real life is so near.
but here i shall stay, until my final breath.
so is she My Guardian Angel, or my Angel of Death.

Oscar

next one

Bloodless

I stay in the darkness, where i belong.
away from the human's where everything's wrong.
i used to be human, or so i thought.
but despite all my disguises, it all was for naught.

one cannot run from oneself, i am my own enemy.
i can't change who i am, i am what you see.
a creature made only of flesh and bone.
there is nothing more, than this which is shone.

if i deny the truth, only pain will i find.
if i lie to myself, i only kill my mind.
i cut you, you bleed, cut me, there's nothing.
i am but a vessel, a non circled ring.

i do not exist, nor should i be with breath.
i live with no purpose. a life without death.
no heart to be broken, no mind to expand.
but still i can feel it, like a wandering sand.

will i fade away, turn into a memory.
what else am i good for, at least a story.
shall i be remembered, shall i finally walk free?
shall i finally laugh happily? shall i finally be?

last one, (about life)

I Miss Daddy, A Tale of a Six Year Old

Why did my daddy go away, he shouldn't have had to.
He told me he'd return again, he told me in a year or so.
my mommy tells me he went to fight, but i said daddy's too good to fight.
She said in a place called Iraq, he may have to fight in daytime and night.

I kept watching the news,and Iraq was there a lot.
How could my daddy be fighting in a TV I asked.
Mommy said that daddy, was the man in green.
so i kept searching for him, looking on the screen.

one day at a friends house, his mom was looking at the TV.
she said it was a movie of war, and that i couldn't see.
but when i walked away, i saw a man in green.
i yelled that's my daddy, that's my daddy, but he suddenly got blown to smithereens.

i screamed with all my might, and i started to cry.
my daddy's dead, my dadddy's dead, but please tell me why.
why was he in a place like that, where he could be in harm's way
he said that he'd come back for me, he'd said he'd come another day.

i kept on crying and my friends mom took me to my house.
i kept ignoring all her words, and i was now as quiet as a mouse.
we walked up to my front door, and past the cans of tin.
and then inside my father was waiting. i ran and hugged him, now we're a family again.

Oscar

Satan's Lair
By: Twisted Heart
Dark Poem

Torn winds blow against the gate
As shadows fall upon the ground
Whispered souls among the ruins
Bare false witness to the sounds.
Creeping through the misty night
Under trees with barren limbs
Comes the tattered angels song
A mournful cry that's trapped within.
Behold the seekers who have come
To lay upon the marble tombs
Flowers that have lost their scent
With scattered petals that's met their doom.
Hear not the victors of the night
Who walk upon the empty graves
That settles in the dense fog's bed
And humbly welcomes it's cold embrace.
For this, the night, that holds you captive
Inside the haunted ruins of death
Forever to beseech the master
Who's burned you with his acid breath.
Against the night, you want to hide
Among the plots you try to flee
But you are his, to do his bidding
Trapped in his clutches for eternity.

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Transient
By: Twisted Heart
Poem about Life

With tainted memories, inside her mind
She walks upon the ashen streets
Twisted words in anger's time
She gives her feet the will to flee.

Harsh words now entrap her flight
And leaves her there to grieve
As heartbreak consumes her sight
And drives her soul to insanity.

Just words that held her heart intact
But now have lost their way
Among the lies that now impact
Her sanity's decay.

She raises fists up to the moon
Condemning it for her fate
Now harnessed hopes that twist and bind
And lingers there to wait.

She was a soul once loved by him
Her heart was open wide
But now the bonds that were her stem
Got lost somewhere inside.

No anchor found to steady her
Upon the sea of life
So she's sent to drift among
The other souls that's lost tonight.

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Friend in My Pocket
By: Twisted Heart
Friendship Poem

I have a friend who's in my pocket
She's such a help to me
Whenever I am feeling down
She picks me up, you see.
She's never one to argue
And when I want to scream
She listens to my every word
And completes the scheme of things.
She always gives my good advice
When I care to listen
She makes me see realty
When I start a wishin'.
When times seem so hard for me
I know just what to do
I pull her from my pocket
In her face, I just look through.
You see, she is a mirror
The one looking back at me
Is just my own reflection
Of who I want to be.

Thou God cast and bend me hard
Adorn me with unbreaking will
Set me aside to test my strength
Watch my footprints in plain thrill

My Coat of Arms symbol honor and pride
Bounding every task amongst my soul
Unable to break from pain-staking time
I struggle in humility to gain control

Pressure bearing upon my shoulders
As tremors and flashes fall unto my brain
Every"quiting" notion haunts my pale dreams
Blurring every answer in unwanting pain

My strength and pride yields agony
Allowing torture to inscribe on me
Showing discomforts of losing my skills
Forcing the truth so I may agree

I've tried to call it quits and that it's over
But disappointment interlopes in every way
So Still I tread this descending path
Staring as my bleak breaking soul decay

God-My Savior

When everything goes wrong
You're the only thing right
When the darkness consumes me
You are the shining light

When the world's full of hate
You're the only one with love
When I have fallen down
I look for your guidance above

When times of trouble come to me
You're there with a helping hand
When I'm confused and puzzled
You help me to understand

When I get down on myself
You help to pick me up
When I'm down on my luck
You lend me your cup

With whispered words of wisdom
And a lending hand of two
You guide us along
And keep our faith true

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A Good Night's Prayer

Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray, dear friend, you will not weep
For when I die before I wake
My own life I had to take
So with these pills that I will swallow
To the hands of God that I will follow
Up into the heavens, smiling above
A place to find true compassion and love
For Earth is shuch a saddening place
And you can no longer look people in the face
So with this goodbye, I hope you will see
That I have died most peacefully
So lay my bones down to rest
I'm sorry to say I've failed the test
Remember me, now that I'm dead
And as I lay tucked into my bed
Hold me close and don't forget
That I'm in your heart, do not fret
Smile upwards and pretend
I'm right there next to you, my friend

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Searching For A New Chance At Life

I know of a boy who has been through hell
Everyone pushed him down with no one to catch him when he fell

But he stayed strong and he stayed tough
He knew one day life wouldn`t be this rough

So he confided in a few and put on an act
No one saw the look when he would turn his back

His big blue eyes hid his pain deep inside
You would never know that he went home and cried

The tears would slip silently, with no one to hear
For sometimes his life was something he feared

But somewhere in him, his stregth lies
One day that hardness will be gone from his eyes

He thinks that I am completely crazy
But his story's the thing that saved me

His life was one no one should have to endure
But, God knows, that his soul is
so pure

Living his life with little direction or plan
Just passsing the days, hoping to appease his old man

Hoping for something to heal his heart
To help ease the memories right from the start

If you look real hard, you can still see the scars
He hopes to grow up, and move away very far

No one can realize his pain within
No one can feel the pain in him

I'd like to get to know him, I'd like to try
To learn about his life, so that he doesn't have to cry

I could be his friend, be his ear in all things
And help him get through today, to see what tomorrow brings

If only friends is all I'll ever be
Then, somehow, that's okay with me

With him, he seems so smart and strong
I can't believe this is happening all along

It hit me so hard I can barely see
This wonderful boy looking back at me

I'm afraid to tell him how I feel; afraid he won't feel the same
I always feel like a loser, playing just some stupid game

His kind words touched my heart, and his wisdom touched my mind
He's the type of boy in life that I could never find

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You said the max was three so here ya go! lol =] hope everything's sufficient!
CiaO

Are there any-more? Because the deadline is tmoz, but i can extend it!

These are a few of my favorite poems I've written. They go from oldest to the newest. I hope you enjoy them. =] ((Sorry, ones kind of long...))
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The Dreamer

It seems to the dreamer, the dreamer shall never wake up. Always lost in the darkness of depths and nothingness. If the dreamer where to shout, no one would hear him, and if he were to cry, no one would be there to comfort. What should the dreamer do in his world of make believe? Make up a new ending? But can one dreamer really do that?

And if you tell this dreamer to dance would he dance or stick his tongue out at you? If you told him to believe would he believe? If you told him to love, could our dear dreamer love? The dreamer is out subconscious. Can we tell our subconscious to dance? To believe? Or more importantly, to love? Can the dreamer be independent without the person?

If you tell the dreamer to scream, he just may scream. But what if he no longer can? No longer wants to or thinks (perhaps knows) no one can hear. What then, will our screaming dreamer do?
We are the dreamers of reality. No matter how much one screams, they will never be heard. I now dare this dreamer to be heard. Scream loud, I dare you. Cry your heart out dreamer. Just see how many really care as much as they say. I dare you dreamer.
I. F**king. Dare. You.

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I Am

A shattered cough,
Lost breath,
Broken skin,
I am Death.

A single look,
A glance above,
A glimmering eye,
I am Love.

A touch that lied,
Broken Trust,
Lost Love,
I am Lust.

Wondering alone,
Lost Fate,
Never Love,
I am Hate.

A gracious smile,
A golden key,
A gate of Trust,
I am Destiny.

Unbroken lies,
Not left in dust,
An open arch,
I am Trust.

A broken smile,
I do defy,
What is truth?
I am a Lie.

A happy time,
Everyone's strife,
You'll never forget,
That I am Life.
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The Window

I gaze out the window,
Looking across the lands,
Wishing you were here with me,
To take my hand.

Folding my empty hands in my lap,
I see my reflection in the window,
Breathing for you alone,
I know my heart can grow.

Sighing a depth of sorrow,
Knowing it is the sea,
That separates us, but I still want,
You to share a life with me.

When my gentle thoughts,
Dance through my head,
I know a thousand miles,
Is not far to tread.

Walking by love holding me high,
Knowing you are not to far away,
I reach out for your hand,
Daring you to stray.

For a love so great,
Easily, is never found,
And I know we are lucky,
For this love will always be around.

xDarkSuicidex

Darryl (part one)

My only biological uncle
from my mothers side.
her only real brother
and a mate to most other people.

You had cancer once before
but you were strong.
you pulled through..
but this time it's different

this time you wont pull through
the doctors are trying to help
to help you live for a little longer
but not much can be done.

They're going to make you comfortable
but you wont be in hospital
all wired up, clinical and rushed
you wont know what's going on

You'll be drugged up
you wont know who you are
you wont know what day it is
you wont know who we are

The next time i see you
you'll be in your death bed
Darryl, i will miss you
Why do you have to go?
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Darryl (part two)

Lying in hospital
wired tap so many machines
your talking's only lucid
we know it's not long now

waiting for the call
jumping every time the phone rings
we're all scared of what's going to happen
going to school and everything else gets harder every time

just waiting, anticipating, worried.
staying around the phone
wishing we knew when you next text will come
waiting for the phone call, to tell us you're gone

we know what's going to happen
all we can do is hope you're not in pain,not alone and didn't live in vain
not letting any one forget you
never forget your name

when the call comes
we will grieve
Darryl we will miss you
you're in our hearts forever
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All alone in the world
just lost another
left to her own devices

not knowing what to do
not knowing where to go
people telling her what to say
she gets trampled underfoot

the family is depressed
falling apart breaking
she has to pull through this

pull through this, alone
save her family, alone
look down on this page, alone
stop the tears flowing, alone

to grieve for her lost ones
to save her family
leaves you with no one

no one to turn to
no one to trust
no one to live for
no one. no one

just one little girl
small and alone
confused and lost

confused about life
lost her family
confused, why did the leave her
lost, with no one

one lost confused girl
alone in the world
with on one to turn to
everything on her shoulders
who just wants to scream
just wants some one to talk to
instead of staring down on this
a tear stained page.

^^ that's more of a vent than a poem.

one more day, then i am judging, all poems must be in by Friday, i will decide the winners on Friday! P.s. Does any-one think i should extend the deadline, or hold another competition like this.

hold another one, but i don't think you should extend it any more.

Yey! I am so glad, if there is anymore can you please enter them before midnight on the 22nd of September ! (tmoz) then i will read them and give the results on Saturday!

Fall From Grace (dark)

Overtones of guilt
Flicker in her anguished eyes
Teetering on the precipice of ruin
Everything she's worked for
Slowly, irrevocably, slipping away

Haunting dreams of reality
Torment her restless, saddened soul
And the light of her heart is extinguished
Frantically clawing for a way out
Desperatly seeking a solution
Yet finding nothing

Tortured visions of her undeniable future
Amble ruthelessly along the horizon
Forcing wave upon wave of bleak despair
To crash over her trembling lonesome form

Vacant eyes stare through the darkness
As firey tears trace molten paths of regret down her lonely face
And as she closes her forlorn eyes to the world
She knows she can never hide from the inconsolable misery within herself
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Dominatrix (Explicit)

Silver gleams against solid oak
A lashing meant for two
Your hands are bound, no words are spoke
But you'll scream before I'm through

Chained upon a bed of silk
Nothing left for you but to look
Skin so soft as pale as milk
Your lips barely shook

My slow strip tease before your eyes
But unable to touch
Leaves you breathless with surprise
And a desire for oh so much

I press against you, caress your hair
Trail my fingers down your core
Softest kisses placed with care
Leaving you stretching for more

Unable to hide your excitement now
I bring out your favorite play toy
Yearning so desperately demanding how
As my whip feeds your unbridled joy

A lash here and a stroke of my hand
Leaves you quivering and unable to think
I tease and excite you in every way I can
Until finally to your pleading I sink

With your scream of pleasure, I submit
Fulfilling your every desire
Thrusting with your moving hips
I fill our bodies with fire

Until the time when all stands still
And ecstasy is on our door
Released beyond, you've had your fill
And perhaps tomorrow I'll give you more
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A Shadow of Life (Life)

Sifting shadows bathe the forest floor
In a swathe of darkness
Hiding the disaster of a preoccupied god
From his blind subjects
The veils of night make the faithful tremble
Afraid to set foot on such a forsaken path
Paranoid, taught to fear and hate such a journey
Through the fading light

Such a common misconception heightened by blind faith,
The shadows dance through the leaves to death's music
And the wise know that such is not the path to eternal darkness
But rather the journey which will lead to the beauty of life,
For only in the darkness can one see the stars
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All poems must be in by Tonight, Midnight!

I think it has ended! Yey!! People I haven't decided the winner yet, but if you entered can you please put a poem that you want me to r.r.c. and I will do so!

P.s. I am holding another compition, I think i might make this competiton a weekly event! Who think this is a rubbish idea?

rubbish? no no no, its perfect;) I can't wait to se who wins!

It was hard to be the judge in this compition as all of the poems were amazing, so I have decided that the following poems got third prize :-
God my savior,
Have a great life bitch,
I am,
Whispered Secrets,
Daughter of a freak.

All these poems were amzing and so were every-one elses!

Second prize and first prize however was slightly harder, but the poem that I thought deseved second prize was The Tale Of A Werewolf!

First prize though has to go to this poem as it was so beautifully written:-

My Guardian Angel

I stand here protected, as one guarded child.
I sit alone safely, where nothing is wild.
Never been in danger, never in harm's way.
and all of life's challenges, waited at bay.

i have always been happy, for I've never felt pain.
my angel stands by me through sun snow and rain.
she is always smiling. and a smile she receives.
she tricks enemies away, or is it me she deceives?

I have always been guarded, and so never in fear.
and I stay locked up always, year after year.
have not seen a human, for she said they are bad
and even though i am healthy, i remain sad.

have i been missing out, is there much more to life,
could i someday have children and maybe a wife?
I must see it for myself, no longer can i wait.
i must be fragile, for fear is a human trait.

i wanted the experience, yet she locked me in.
i tried to run away, but she will always win.
I'm stuck here forever, i cry through the night.
and for the first time ever, i am feeling fright.

so long's gone by now, i still am stuck here.
i now cry every night, for real life is so near.
but here i shall stay, until my final breath.
so is she My Guardian Angel, or my Angel of Death.

By Oscar!

Well done!!

yay i won!!! how many poems can i put up?

congrats to everyone else.

wow I won 3rd place for God- My Savior!! awesome! ummm... if you could read my poem Dead of a heartbreak! thnx!

10 poems for first,
5 poems for second,
3 poems for third,
1 poem for being a runner up (i.e. you did not win first, second or third)!

Awee.. Thank you. "I Am" is one of my favorite poems...So, thank you. It means a lot.

Since I got 3rd, Please do:
The Bells Chime
My Confession
And
The Window

Thanks =]

xDarkSuicidex

ok thanx, can you do,

I Miss Daddy, a Tale of a six year old.
MyGuardian Angel
Funky Monkey
Bloodless
Imaginary
To Be Free
The Old Beggar
October Rain
My Immortal Life
and
A Blanket.

thanx!!!

sure but will you mind if i do them in the morning only i have to go get a shower and then i am really tired so i will probably be sleeping!

no prob;)

sure, thanx

any of mine..

yep, i am sorry that it is taking a while but my comp keeps crashing!!! errrr!