should i delete it?

  • Nee
    20 years ago

    This way..this voice..this part..
    i love it..and i always did...
    the way you said my name...
    your voice..that glance...
    oh i can't forget it...
    the way you touched my hand..
    it was the first time i feel your love...
    Girls envy me about you...
    Guys wanna take me away from you..
    but the best thing we always do is how much you love me and i love you...
    you know how much i love you..how much i care...and how much I'll be hurt ed if you did anything to me..
    and So am I
    i feel your love...
    and i want you...
    i want that love forever...
    when we were to leave each other after a long talk...
    i always felt i want to cry...
    In going back home i always wonder how did we talk for an hour and didn't feel the time?..
    this is the reason why i wanna be with you forever..
    Cos an hour seems like one moment near you..
    my latest words are a wish..
    a wish I wish for it everyday..
    and i live with it everyday..
    Kiss me..do it..don't be afraid..
    Cos i wanna feel your lips..touching mine...
    and your eyes...holding mine..so close

    this is my new poem no one luved it so should i delete it or not?? i just want your opinion
    thx
    nina xxxx