PhOeBz - ‘All about love, should i let go?’

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HEY, I need your help… I don’t know what to do... love can be soo confusing..so here’s the plan, you can pick a title and write a poem to it, hopefully it will help me… or make me feel a lil better anyway lol. I want it to be about love..sad, happy, lost love, I love you, desired love, new love, whatever I don’t mind as long as it is got to do about love. Thanks guyz. xoxo

1) WHEN IT’S GOOD (done)
2) TOUCH FROM YOUR LUST
3) WHEN SHE BELIEVES (done)
4) THRILL IS GONE
5) WISH YOU WELL (done)
6) LISTEN TO YOUR HEART (done)
7) LOVE WILL KEEP US A LIVE
8) SHE’S LEAVING TUESDAY (done)
9) RIVER OF DREAMS (done)
10) DON’T FORGET ABOUT US
11) FAR AWAY (done)
12) MOUTH FOR WAR
13) THIS LOVE (done as 'My one true love' lol))
14) IF IT’S LOVING THAT YOU WANT
15) WHAT SHOULD I DO?

RULEZ:
1) MUST be your own ORIGINAL work.
2) DOESN’T have to be a newly written poem.
3) HAS to be about LOVE.
4) You HAVE to use ONE of the titles above
5)reserve a title if u need more time

Thanks guys  go for it!! GOODLUCK!!

I will tell you what place you come; 1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th and runner up. Prize- dunno yet, a surprise lol

Damn, I wanted two of them lol. I liked both She's Leaving Tuesday and Touch From Your Lust, those are amazing titles. But, can I please reserve She's Leaving Tuesday? =] I will write it tomorrow probably because I am off to bed in a bit.

-Jenna.

please reserve LISTEN TO YOUR HEART for me! thanks! i'll get on it shortly

can i reserve "WHAT SHOULD I DO?" thanks!

lol i'm glad you like my titles bryan and jenna :D
kewl, thanks guyz i reserved them for yous!!! have fun. and thanks poetess, i loved it!!!!

When She Believes...If you please

When She Believes
By: Twisted Heart

The moon has dipped its crest into the ripples of the night
As shooting stars kick the dust from the celestial sky
In slumbered grace she walks alone against the gentle breeze
Chasing enchanted moonbeams in the serenity of dreams.
She stands in shadowed comfort of the love she found today
In sweet surrender she gave her heart a safe place to stay
To the arms of one who took her to another place and time
Lifting her from the broken life she prayed to leave behind.

Among the heavens she drifts along with the stars and moon
Letting the warmth caress her within its melodic tune
Into its depths she wanders with a trust so faithfully
It invades her hopes and dreams of what a love should be.
No doubt will drive her under she's protected by the night
Where they pledged undying love beneath the starlit sky
She feels the calm contentment of the swirling fantasy
Knowing it is all within the lie that she believes.

Just wrote this... am going to post it in my poems now, is that okay

Yeah thats fine Twisted Heart :) go for it hun!! your a good writter, good with words. thanks xoxox

yay I finished it...it's kinda bad though! lol sorry! i've kinda lost my creative touch for a little while...

LISTEN TO YOUR HEART

Listen to your heart, and follow it through
Do what it tells you; don’t think it’s untrue

Listen to your heart, and look around at everything
Don’t be afraid of today because of what tomorrow brings

Listen to your heart and one day you’ll see
That if you love him really, then it’s meant to be

hope it's okay for the contest! < 3
ciao

Wish you well, please...

Im in a problem too and I think Wish You Well would fit perfectly about the situation Im in.

Its not very good.. But it was how I was feeling...

Wish You Well

I wish you well my dear
That you’re happy with her
I was the perfection in your life
And you screwed it up
You thought that the mistake wouldn’t find me
And you thought the one night stand
Wouldn’t mean anything in the morning
Ended up being
With you for your entire life
At least let me believe
That you’re sorry
You lost me
Admit to me
Straight to my face that
You thought sleeping with her behind my back
Wouldn’t find its way to me
You tried, didn’t you, to ignore me
But had to face me
You told me straight to my face
That you were drunk
Went home and slept with her
Now is having your child
How can I ever forget you Jesse
For tearing me up
For letting me believe we would be together forever
I guess not
So good-bye my dear
And I hope you’re happy
And I wish you well

lol thanks Bryan.. i am guessing u were supposed to do ur poem to 'This Love', but it's ok i am letting u do it to 'My one true love' iit was a fine poem lol xoxo

i loved ur peice xxixlovexyouxx thanx. and i wish u well!! xoxo keep it up

-She's Leaving Tuesday.-

There's a dozen roses on the table,
With a card that was never read,
And in the blood draped on the pedals,
There's a story she never said.

The curtains in the bedroom are drawn,
Allowing the sun to shine through,
And in a bucket of ice on the side,
There's a bottle of champagne she never shared with you.

Her bags are packed and are waiting by the door,
As the taxi driver honks his horn out on the street,
She grabs her coat and shudders good-bye to your memories on the wall,
Finally shutting out all of your lies coated in deceit.

The hotel sign will glow with no vacancy for a night or two,
And in room twenty-one there sits a girl coughing in the nicotine haze,
Tears falling in remembrance of all the pain,
But her Greyhound bus bound to nowhere leaves this Tuesday.

© Jenna Elphick
September 24, 2006.

--Sorry it took me so long to write, I qwas busy all weekend, so I write it last night.--

-Jenna.

please unreserve what should i do.......

Is this contest done?

I think she forgot about it!

hey lol no i havent forgotten...i was waiting for a lil bit more to see if anyone else took interest in this comp, but seeing tho i havent had any more spots reserved and all poems that were reserved are donne i will officially colsed this come. xoxox i will judge them and tell u the places by the end of the week

Would you have it by Saturday? If not its totally fine with me. I just have homecoming dance on Saturday and I need to get all my friends over and get dressed and have makeup on and that before the dance starts. We all take teh longest time lol.

I was just wondering.. You dont have to do it before saturday but i was just wondering!

Awesome :) how fun!! i will get it done tonight for u lol xOxo

RIVER OF DREAMS – by poetess

Your poem was fab!! Fantastic effort :) nice describing, it went perfectly with the heading. oXox

WHEN SHE BELIEVES – by Twisted Heart

Love it!!!..the way u described everything was awesome!! You are so good with words and the poem in total was fab! You experimented well with the title. Thanku xOxo

LISTEN TO YOUR HEART – by ღ¤Čïåõ¤ღ

Short but soooo good!!! Matched the title perfectly and it was clear and well written. Thank you! The best thing is to believe your heart so I have discovered lol. Loved the poem :) xOxo

MY ONE TRUE LOVE – by Bryan

It was so sweet…although you change the heading lol it was still a gr8 poem and fitted well. My fave paragraph:
“My soul aches for you
when we are apart,
because when we are
you take my heart."
loved your poem!!! Thanks heaps :) oXox

WISH YOU WELL – by xxixlovexyouxx

I can tell it came from your soul…deep down inside you. I feel for you, I really do. Your poem was excellent!! And it fully matched the heading. Well done!! xOxo

SHE’S LEAVING TUESDAY – by Lush.Fcuk-*

Matches the heading and is written very well. Your poem was original and you are an unique writer! Love it!!! U describe every thing in such an intriguing way. Keep it up! xOxo

WHEN IT’S GOOD – by ConCealedInAddiction

U have potential :) it was nicely written, easy to read and tells the story of the heading well. Good use of rhyming words and I love what u said in it. :) oXox

FAR AWAY – by Mooie Ogen

Goes well with the heading, easy to read (which I love) and I really love paragraph 2 and 4. I loved the way you worded that. Keep up the great poems!!!!! oXox

1st ~ ConCealedInAddiction with WHEN IT’S GOOD
2nd ~ Mooie Ogen with FAR AWAY
3rd ~ Bryan with MY ONE TRUE LOVE
4th ~ Twisted Heart with WHEN SHE BELIEVES
Runner up ~ ღ¤Čïåõ¤ღ with LISTEN TO YOUR HEART

WHAAAAL lol that was a hard comp to judge!!!! The poems you come up with r such good stuff. Thanks heaps to all thos who entered and please feel free to enter any other comp I do…I would love you to be apart of them, cause yous are so talented.
Keep it up all u legendary poets!!!

love PhOeBz xOxo

Congrats winners!! =]]

-Jenna.

yay! runner up!! whoot whoot!! way to go winners!!

Great titles, enjoyed doing this contest. Congrats to all who took part in this and especially all the other winners. thanks

Great titles, enjoyed doing this contest. Congrats to all who took part in this and especially all the other winners. thanks

1st 8 votes
2nd 6 votes
3rd 5 votes
4th 4 votes
runner up 2 votes

many rthanks to all who entered xOxo

i have went through all ur poems and done ur votes!! xoxox