Natalie's Contest ; Part Two!

This is the second part of the contest. The people stated below must now write a Senryu which matches with your poem. If you're unsure what I mean, please just ask.. and I'll try and explain a little more. You'll have one week to have them completed.

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Sherry Lynn: Vigorous Tears

Half-Demon (Noni©): Under The Skin

κяıѕτєи ღ: Stained Complexion

Lush.Fcuk-*: Armed With Courage

DreadingTime: Emerging Fears

Д βєąµ†ιƒµℓ £ιэ: Demolished Child

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If your name isn't there, please don't take it personally, I didn't choose how many I was going to because some titles weren't completed.

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I'll remind you all that there are NO PRIZES. Just simply 1st, 2nd and 3rd places. :] Have fun!

Fatherless

One deserter fled
Left abandoned; heart broken
My own father gone

--Sherry Lynn Richardson

Very nice, Sher. :]

C'mon everyone.. 6 days left.

The forgotten blades
Of all the fallen that night
Lay together now.

© Jenna Elphick
September 24, 2006

--I dunno how well this goes with it, but I havent done one of these in a longgg time lol.--

-Jenna.

Cmon people. I'm going to close this soooooon. :]

One more day, and then it's closed.

Nemisis till death
Touch thy lips; Bring out blood
Face me Sister dark

Bump

Lol.. Well, it looks like only three of you posted your poems. :]

The winners will be posted later tonight.

Not a problem babe

--Sher

Results are in. ;P Now you all should know that all three of you win. Yay! Lol..

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1st. Sherry Lynn

Sher-- Both of your poems were simply amazing. When I first read your "Vigerous Tears" I loved it. & Your Senryu really did tell the same tragic story but more simplistic. You're a great writer! Both pieces were very heartfelt & I could feel all the raw emotions you placed within them.

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2nd. Noni Wang©

Noni-- Your poems both captured the imagination side of my brain. ;P ..You use excellent word usuage to give your poetry that extra effect. They were both wonderfully written. You already know I think you could go far with your writing if you wanted to.

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3rd. Lush.Fcuk-*

Jenna-- You're someone I don't see their work being noticed alot. & I was pretty impressed when I read your first poem "Armed with Courage" ..I loved the title & I was surprised how well you wrote the peice. Even though I picked up on a few minor things that could have been fixed up, your work is still amazing. & I know if you keep writing you'll keep getting better & better! Your Senryu was also great.

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Congradulations to all three of you ladys. :] Your poetry was great! & I really enjoyed reading and trying to critque them for you. I hope to be able to read more. :]

Wow thank you so much and congrats to Jenna and Noni you both are terrific writers that everyone can learn and aspire from.

--Sher

Awe thanks, to the both of you. And congrats everyone else! =]]

-Jenna.

Thanks!