Nature Contest-By Tiny Heart

i hate fricken double posts.-'-.-'-.-'-.-'-.-'-.-'-.

DUNDUNDUN!

BUMP-O'DIDDLE

darn you evil bumps.. lol

Well. the contest shall soon be over, so this si your last chance poeple.

Can I do a poem of something about survival of the fittess in the nature or something like that?
~Ashley Paul

I have a poem called the winter fairies?
I also have a poem called the love of the wind.
Please let me know if they are exceptible.
I am going to post them now because the contest ends tomorrow. If they are not exceptible disreguard them and they will be erased.

Thank you
Letty

The Winter Fairies

Fall is at its end.
The breeze of the wind is no longer warm.
The trees have finally disrobed of their gown of orange.
The air is now crisp with tiny little sparkles.
Giving all a forewarning that winter is home.

The earth begins to sing now.
Their song is sweeter then candy.
It's the introduction to winters guardians.
They are called the winter fairies.

These fairies roam the land
During this blessed season to keep us happy and gay.
They sing the song that the earth begun,
On the beginning of winters day.

These fairies are beyond beautiful.
Their skin is as pure as snow.
They wear a cloth of pearly white
And their hair is silver and long.

Their voices are angelic.
Their smile is so radiant.
Their eyes are like mirrors
that you can see your true self in.

Their wings are covered in glitter.
Their wands light the night sky.
They surround you during your troubled times
And they comfort you when you cry.

Their purpose is only to keep our lives merry
To lift off the load of the burden we carry
I can wait until the day that winter arrives
So I can again see the winter fairies.

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The Love Of The Wind

I listen carefully when the wind blows as it whispers soft-spoken words of love.

The words strongly pull and tug at my aching heart until they gain my response.

The wind then lightly brushes its loving touch against my face. I momentarily become lost in its sweet caress as the heartache begins to fade.

It then loudly hums to create a song that I know was made for me alone.

I then melt in its arms because of the lyrics, of the song, until the heartache is completely gone.

"Survival of the fittest"
By: Ashley Paul

Around every tree
Danger is waiting
Around every bush
Predators anticipating

"Survival of the fittest"
This is how life is in the jungle
Leopard and Jaguars,
for food they will battle

The jungle is a harsh place!
The ones who take, live.
As mean as that may be.
The ones who die, give.

Their cannot be a right thing to do
if you will end up dead
Maybe in the city
but in the jungle, you must get fed!

"Survival of the fittest"
This is how life is in the jungle
Mice and frogs scream
when they are the food prize in a battle.

The jungle is an awful place
so hard to last one day
Running and screaming here
does not involve play

So if you think the animals have it easy
you have been mistaken.
Cause at the end of the day
the animals are either dead or badly achin'.

all the poems submitted above are accepted! and great if i may add.

im happy for a few new entries. =]]

Now this is Closed Offically!!!!!!

i will begin my assesment.. and prolly tomorrow post the results. =]

ok, i havent totally got the standings but i have who made the top 5!(in order of appearance)

xDarkSuicidex
♥.J.e.s.s.y.♥
ShadowDancer (Ruby)
Twisted Heart
Letty....

Congrats!!! and ill have the standings ASAP.
along with prizes. =]]

*all who didnt make it, it was tough!! do notthink that because you arent listen your poem wasnt great!!! All of them were, it was very hard..

Also, you will all(who didnt make it) recieve one comment and rate from me. =]]

x.x:Lauren

top five! wow thanks so much for holding a great contest

shadow dancer

No! its not over with.. i just gotta post eh actual list.. =[[

(dont mind whats below i ned to keep track of stuff)
xDSx- 5
Jessy-5
Kim- x
Biscuit- x
Makeshift-x
SherryLynn-x
Shadow Dancer-5
Fading/Red Rose- x
Twisted Heart- 5
Ashley Paul-x
Illuminati-x
Letty-5

(woot its so .-''-..-''-.flowy// lol

**if your names got an x next toit and i havent commented on u plz tell me!!!

congrats winners!

YEA!!! Top five. Congrats winners

Happiness
Jeannie

Yea!!!!!!!
I'm so happy.
I didn't think that my poems were good enough.
You have made me a very happy person.

Thank you
Letty

Hey I dont have any new comments so fyi imma go check again tho..and congrats to the top 5! :D
~Ashley Paul

Ok so ive reread and reread the poems in the top 5 and have some up with the order.
prizes
5th-2 rrcs,
4-3,
3-4,
2-5,
1st-7

5th-xDarkSuicidex- now xThe EcstacyOfSuicidex
4th-Twisted Heart
3rd-Shadow Dancer(Ruby)
2nd-♥ .J.e.s.s.y. ♥
**
1st- Letty...

Congrats and i will start with your RRC's ASAP. =].
But i prolly can't tonight,, cause i gotta go real soon.. stupid sister..nd tomorrow i've got atuff after school and a family dinner but i might get some in.. =]

x.x:Lauren

~~Ashley i did comment the poem you submitied. =] you were prolly just on when i did it hon, so it didnt turn yellow the next time you signed in. =]

3rd! if this was the olimpics id get a medal! well done letty, your poems were great!

Shadow dancer

COngrats, and a great contest!

Ok finished with Jessy's

On to Shadow Dancer!!

=]

yay thats me!!! cant wait

shadow dancer

Thank you so much for the compliment!
I am so happy this is the first contest that I have one. Yea!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol

Letty

ok shadow dancer im terribly sorry but i dont remembre if i got to you yet? do u know if i did. or if i finished?uck im so like idk.. out of it..

adn i still have twisted hearts and lettys right?

Yes you do! I am patiently waiting for your wonderful critique. lol

soy. ill get to you. ive just benn. idk. lately..
alot of things have been happoeneng, with my friends and family.. and stuff..

ill get on them asap...i swear

hey guys.. sorry its been taking me so long. probs ad such but ive done twisted ♥'s and ill do letty's tomorrow. thanks for participating all! your poems were awesome.!! Everyone!!

♥x.x:Lauren

YAY ALMOST DONT
only Letty's left!!