i need help!

  • Randomness
    18 years ago

    ok like i want to write a poem about on how like me and my boyfriend just broke up yet i still love him and I want to give the poem to him cause i think he will like it does anyone have any ideas on how i should start the poem?

  • Randomness
    18 years ago

    oh and he still likes me but his dad made him break up with me cause of my bfs grades

  • Kevin
    18 years ago

    Maybe you should write a poem to his Dad explaining how you feel about his son.

    or maybe you should kidnap him and explain it face to face with some blunt objects.

    Or maybe....

  • space
    18 years ago

    or maybe I'm scared of what ^ will say next. But I think you should start it with what you really want to say. See, if I tell you how I would start it i'll end up writing a whole poem. However I think i'll take that chance:

    How it is, is I still love you,
    But we simply cannot be.
    Dispite the fact the love is true,

    I dunno what to put after that. But thats probably how I would start it. I dunno, hope that helps.

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    18 years ago

    How it is, is i still love you,
    But we simply cannot be.
    Dispite the fact the love is true,
    And you gave me eyes to see.

    Living without you near,
    Is ripping my heart in two.
    Without your love i do fear,
    For what i am going through.

    duno just at the top of my head what ever you decide show him what you do and if he really loves you he will make the right choice if not then hes not worth it hunni really xxx alex xxx good luck xxx

  • Randomness
    18 years ago

    ok now we got back together on Friday and we already broke up on Monday again! last time we got together it was a Friday and when we broke up the first time it was a monday!! i hate Mondays!!! He says hes over me yet all his best friends say he isn't i dont know what to do!

  • Nick who Plays Pool
    18 years ago

    Here's and idea and don't take me as mean, but maybe you should try another approach. I ain't a girl, but I have a gf. Now as a boy the only reseasons i could think of that he did go out and broke up with you is his friends bet him too or he realized that you were going through to much and he didn't want you to go through anymore.If you told me what kind of person he is i can help you.

  • Randomness
    18 years ago

    he broke up with me the last time because he always got in trouble but now i can forget the poem and stuff he has a different girl yet i cant let go. Plus I wrote him a letter and it's better. but to me its to hard to be just friends and im moving away from everyone so now its even harder

  • JOHNNY SANDOVAL
    18 years ago

    I LOVE MY GIRLFRIEND I KNOW I DO I FEEL IT IN MY HEART AND I HAVE A LOT OF FEELINGS I JUST NEED TO FIND OUT TO PUT THEM IN WORDS. CAN YOU HELP ME.