Poetry War Between ♥JeSS♥ ~Squiggle Master~'s 2 Families!

Lmao.. This is awesome.. So we submitt 4 poems? 1 In Dark.. 1 In Nature.. 1 In Funny.. & 1 In Sad?

..I only have 3 of them. Haha.

Can I choose 2 Sad ones? Cause I've never written a funny one.. ever... Lmao. ;P

Aw!! Jessa!!! :[

*sniff sniff* ..I can't write one yet, I'm about to go and see Jay. ;P

Hmmmm.... I'll think about this at school, maybe make a poem for the one I'm lacking there. Nice idea Jess.

Thank you Shanky!!! I'll store that in my *do it the right way-informatoin* memmory.

On my profile I have

Shadow-Dark poem
Thoughts-Sad poem

I'll have to hunt down the last two AKA make them some time.

mmmok, am not a good writer ok?? this game i cannot play!! sorry!!

i don't have any sad, nature, dark,or funny ones... i'm such a drag on my family :(

Cool!!

Here's My Sad Poem

Hidden behind the lace of moonlight
Where faces are tainted in forbidding lost
I run around in circles over and over
Hoping to cover all my losing cost

They don't know how the rain sings my name
They don't know how the dark kisses my heart
All they see is a mirror, an obscene clone
With enough smiles to play her part

All I need, is some truth, some love from high up
Some strength to start up my engine again
To brace myself against the falling steps
Some hopeful omen to tell me when

Where can I hide my mourning confusion
Where scorching torches cannot embrace
The fact my soul is tearing piece by piece
And my smile dangling in a pitiful grace

They don't know the chains around my mind
They don't know how I wander alone at night
But the moonlight knows every step I take
Closer to the awakening dark delight

hows this for sad

i am sad
i am not glad

i am not mad
i am sad

Brian
King

Chaotic
by Natalie ღ

Hushed secrets cached beneath septic skin,
Anemic bones tormented from pain within,
Enhanced nerves tremble blood streams,
Tarnished tears gush upon open wounds,
Chaotic mindset awoke believable dreams.

Isolated visions engulfed muzzled thoughts,
Taped skeletal frames escaped triple knots,
Languished emotions controlled innocence,
Injected fears revealed unknown past scars,
Chaotic mindset hushed in complete silence.

Narcotic fumes consumed troubled airways,
Fainting portraits stood strong on displays,
Collapsed future stared fear into the eyes,
Regretful memories flashed beyond lights,
Chaotic mindset prayed for final goodbyes.

7th September 2006
Copyright (C) Natalie.

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Bleeding Mascara
by Natalie ღ

A Tear of pain fills up her most beautiful eyes,
Shimmering in the dark behind her own disguise.
Thoughts are racing as if there is no tomorrow,
Last minute plans to destroy all of her sorrow.
Bleeding mascara is all that she's now prone to,
After all of the things you had to put her through.

Her lips are shaking from the words that she can't say,
With smeared lipstick on her face that won't wash away.
Screeching voices that are deafening her weak ears,
Dragging her right along to her own pool of fears.
Bleeding mascara is all that she's now prone to,
After all of the things you had to put her through.

Empty bottles lay across her tiled bathroom floor,
As she stumbles down the hallway to find some more.
Trying to numb the pain of her exploded heart,
The very same heart that you tried to tear apart.
Bleeding mascara is all that she's now prone to,
After all of the things you had to put her through.

Tasting death as if it's an antidote drug that heals,
Anything to help her escape the pain that she feels.
Singing a sweet lullaby to send her off to sleep,
Now that the pain you have caused has sunken too deep.
Bleeding mascara is all that she's now prone to,
After all of the things you had to put her through.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

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Waves {Lanturne}
by Natalie ღ

----------Waves,
---------Crashing,
--------Upon shore,
-------Gently drifting,
------------Back.

7th September 2006
Copyright (c) Natalie.

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Lanturne: A type of poetry in which when
it is centered, it resembles the Japanese
lantern. It has a strict syllable pattern of 1, 2, 3, 4, 1.
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ThunderStorm (Dark Poem)
Knives surrounding my every thought
As the rain pounds against my solemn dreams
There's a thunderstorm inside my heart
Where blood flows freely down my streams
Shredding my dwindling soul apart
Ripping, tearing at the endless seams
Bringing shock to my system of motions
Paralyzing inner defiant emotions

Rivals between thunder and lightning
Echoing within a hollow, shallow mind
Lashing at each other till their ending
When one defeats the other side
Bringing another string of decaying
An uncivil rising and descending tide
A graveyard underneath the power
Where the shadows wait to devour

Darkness and light begins to gamble
For the right of death and forever pain
Testing to see who is the most able
Without being consumed till insane
Drenched in sweat, seen as pitiable
Neither side has lost or gain
All this lies within my very soul
This era inside of lost control

Bump

Just forget me Jess... I dare you!

I'll maybe start that nature poem tommaro...

Flaming heat twirling gleefully in the night
Igniting passion and lust entwined in fright
Raging across the land with wind by it's side
Erasing all life who dares not subside