Angel of Secrets poetry contest=)

It only hurts when I breathe is from a song..

-Jenna.

yeah, I got it from a song

lol awesome cuz thats song is where i got the idea for the poem lol....by shania twain right?

I don't remember who sings it, but cool;)

Yeah it is by Shania Twain, it's a good song =]

-Jenna.

yeah:P

I will take Forgotten Hero please!
~Ashley Paul

Ok I did this kind of fast and its format is just random. But I tried..here it is:

Forgotten Hero
By: Ashley Paul

Before my little girl grew up
about two years ago
We were as close as can be
She called me her hero
But later on that year
she met the one for her
and thats when I felt the fear.
She was all grown up now
It happened so fast.
I remember her first breath
but now thats the past
As I sat in my chair
next to my little girl
I pondered to myself
"How in the world?"
"Baby girl", I said
"Do you love him so?"
"With all my heart", she replied
"..he's my hero"
And thats when I cried,
thinking back when she was younger
I used to be the greatest
Until she got his number
Now I am just sitting here
next to this big old tree
Wondering when he will take my girl and go
Because everything is clear to me
I'm her Forgotten hero.

Cool:)

So now its only "The Only Alliance" left, and three Reserves

c'mon

I am a little busy at the time :S

Hmm, the holy alliance is done already. It's up there.

-Jenna.

Broken mirror is done as well, but not by Terra =S .

And It Only Hurts When I breathe is up there too.

-Jenna.

Just Heart Of Stone now...after looking through them all. That's the only one I didn't see.

-Jenna.

u forgot to put DONE with the other titles........lol

o0o when is this over?!

bryan I agree with ya! lol (same person) (( Ciao))

sorry, I've been sick for å while now, so I haven't got to do anything with this...

I took away the reserving of Heart of Stone, because it has been reserved for such a long time, I think the reserver forgot about it.. so It is open for anyone!

If you want someone to do it, I can. I have another one in here, so if not allowed 2, that's fine. Was just saying I would if you need someone to lol.

-Jenna.

Heart of stone

I have a Heart of stone
so strong and protected
try to hurt me
but you'll be the one who's affected

I have a heart of stone
so you can't break my heart
I have a heart of stone
that you can't tear apart

I have a heart of stone
and I'm as lucky as can be
I have a heart of stone
I dare you to try to hurt me

(i felt bad cause no one was writing this one... i'm sorry that it was done so fast but i just wanted to help)

thank you! FINALLY! :P

whoot whoot! lol

1st Lush.Fcuk-* with Queen of Hearts
2nd Noni Wang© with Sacred Place
3rd Ashley Paul with Forgotten Hero
HM - I wanna L your V--// with Golden Key

The Prizes :)
1st: 10 comments and votes.
2nd: 5 comments and votes.
3rd: 3 comments and votes.
HM: 1 comment and vote.

So, here is the result, you all did a good job!

Wow thank you! I didn't liek that poem at all but I am glad that you did. =]]]
Congrats other winners!

-Jenna.

Wow, Thanks

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