[titled contest, just a single word]

CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED!!!

[1] TURN by TWISTED HEART
[2] EFFECT by HEAVY HEARTS BLEED
[3] LIES by BROKEN FALLEN ANGEL

congrats!!!!!! i'll comment them as soon as possible!

hello! 3 of my contest are a sucess! whoo-hoo, so now i wanna do another one. and well i'm kinda bored, so umm.....rules.

RULES:
1) new
2) don't care about cussins
3) hmm, have fun
4) oh yea! TITLED contest!

there's only one word i'm going to write for the titles and you can do anything with it. just like the object contest. so here goes. [reserve ppl!]

titles-

[1] BEAT -[D by Dark Suicide]
[2] EFFECT -[D by Heavy Hearts Bleed]
[3] TURN -[D by Twisted Heart]
[4] DANCE -[D by Lusk.Fcuk]
[5] LIFE -[R 4 Sherry Lynn]
[6] WHISPER -[D by Luanne]
[7] EMOTION -[D by Tiny Heart]
[8] CRAZY -[D by Ciao]
[9] LIE -[D by Broken Fallen Angel]
[10] CONTROL -[D by Poetess]

prize

[1] 5 r/r/c
[2] 3 r/r/c
[3] 2 r/r/c

crazy please!! lol i'll get it done soon!!

reserved lol

gracias!

i don't really kno spanish but i kno wat it meant

DE NADA lol XD

haha I'm not that great anyway...Dunca...German

Dunca? Lol, sweetie, it is 'Danke'.

damn sorry lol

wat's dunca?

or danke, w/e

Danke is German for 'Thank you'. =]

And by the way, Saint .. I will hopefully be entering this contest.. I just cannot decide which topic to choose.. (I am stuck between three!)

xDarkSuicidex

And Saint--
Are you still going to write a poem for -my- contest? (Make Me Cry)... We are just waiting for the reserves.

oh rite srry. i'll get on to it. lol. sorry

I wnt Lies!!!
I wnt lies!!!

Can I please reserve dance? =]

-Jenna.

done done! [lol]

May I reserve Beat? And can it be one that I wrote yesterday? Does the name -have- To be just 'Beat'... Or can it be Something like 'A Beating Heart'...For I just wrote one that would work. Thank you. =]

xDarkSuicidex

reserved!

i changed 2 titles.......lol

Can I reserve [6] WHISPER Please .......

Can I reserve LIFE please

thanks babe

--Sher

I hope the title is ok...
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A Beating Heart {Beat}

Thump, thump; throb throb;
Hold it close to your chest.
Pulsing, pulsing; dripping, dripping
Fall into a lasting rest.

Seeping through your hand,
A blood so deep, a blood so bland.
Squeeze tightly to what you possess,
Something so precious, something to bless.

Bleed, bleed, thrash, thrash;
Beating to the sound of the wind.
Whisper, whisper; Faster, faster;
Crying out to comfort him.

Breathe a soft tuft of breath,
Thinking of forbidding, thinking of death.
Upon a heart so cold and lone,
Triggering this heart, triggering this home.

Hush, hush; Closer, closer;
Caress the heart within your hand.
Attempt, attempt; Harder, harder;
Fall to your knees; don't try to stand.

xDarkSuicidex

yep yep, sure you can change it. you can change the title but the topic should be about it. :)

by the way, i love your poem! great job!

nice poem! keep it up!

up up and a way!!!!

Emotion

Filled up to the tip.
But thats the only part thats seen
Like an iceberg, underwater..

Her heart is filled up,
with emotions of every color.
But only the grays are shown.

The Love in her heart
Reds and pinks and never,
never shown to the world.

The Happiness inside,
Greens and Blues and hidden,
hidden from all view.

The hate towards all}
Purples and yellows and obscured,
obscured from the people around

Only the grays in her world
Only here meaningless emotions
ever seem to surface.
Just the same as..
The tip of the iceberb,
the only part shown.

... and now the ocean's melting.

Her true colors will soon show,.
Her emotions.. will surface..
like an iceberg floating,
floating to the surface.,
As tall as a glacier.
as wide as a mountain
All emotion will show.

ok, well i dont really like it. its got so many metaphors and similes. lol
** i just edidted it BTW**

I'm working on mine... please keep it reserved, I've been sooo busy! =)

sure sure!!!! it's ok. take all the time you want. except not more than a month! lol

it's fine TINYHEART! if you ever want to change the poem, you can , just ask me first tho. lol ok?

up up and away again!

wat does (sp?) mean? i have seen those signs and i'm damn confused! lol

think it means spelling.. they're not sure if the word is spelt correctly.. correct me if I'm wrong lol.. sorry am bored and responding to everything hehe

yeah, donna you're right. thanks saint, i'll try to get it done ASAP... homecoming, tests, everything!! lol ah!

lol. yep. it's ok!

bump and working on typing up mine

Turn
By: Twisted Heart

Turn
Back the hands of time I beg you
Give me the moments that we shared
Let me restore the memories
Of a love beyond compare.

Turn
To the clock that holds the hours
And whisk the time away
Give me just a few more moments
Of the love you swore would stay.

Turn
To the minutes that are fading
Let me hold a dying hope
That in the passing of a second
There's still some warmth to fight the cold.

Turn
Around and look at me
Do you see me tremble in the dark
And with the haunting of love remembered
Can you not feel a spark.

Turn
To the one who gave you love
It's me, who's heart you took to break
Into the embers of nonexistence
You threw that soul away.

Turn
Damn you, don't walk away
Leave me just a fleeting chance...

But he left me standing here
Without a second glance.

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Didn't reserve it because I didn't know if I could do it. Hope that's okay.

Hey!!! *Georgi*// Symmetrically Unique

i already did emotion.. =[

*-* i also just edited it a lil bit.

yep Georgi*// Symmetrically Unique, tiny heart did that title already. you can't jack someone else's title. if you want, try to reserve another one. but you can't do this. so the one i'm judging is tinyheart.

Ugh, gosh. This one took me like an hour to find lol. I couldn't remember the title of the contest. -Blushes.- Kay, I finished mine, I don't know if it fits, so let me know. It's a bit weird because it's written in Triple Tetractys form.

-Still.-

Still - -
She stands,
With her hands
Grasped onto mine.
The music starts as her feet dance to it,
With every clap her heart beats faster on,
As she looks out
Toward her
Mother,
In
The
Crowd of
People there
To watch her dance.
To the tune of a brand new song never
Heard before the night that she stood right there,
Dancing away
Her troubles.
Smiling,
Still.

© Jenna Elphick
October 7, 2006.

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Tetractys: is composed of 5 lines with a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10. You can make double Tetractys by a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1. or a triple by 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1,1,2,3,4,10. and so on...

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--Meaning being a little girl who let go of her troubles through art of dance, and metaphorically she was dead from all the pain she had been put through. So although the crowd was clapping, she felt invisible and was able to dance.--