[titled contest, just a single word]

hmm..real interesting!

one more reserved for EFFECT! and we're just waiting for the reserved ones

i'm soooo sorry!! ahh, i'll get on it today!! sorry Saint!!!!!!!

it's ok ciao bella. lol.

is it okay if the title is Driving Me Crazy ?

Driving Me Crazy
by ×ciaO bEllA×

The resonant of voices still ring around my head
Regretful phrases and hurtful words that each of you have said
Muttered spiteful words, as if to make everything okay
You wonder how you're gonna make it through another day
Broken-hearted promises, you swore to God you'd keep
You toss and turn all through the night, just trying to get some sleep
Somewhere deep down inside, you both know you still care
But you’re making it really tough and to both, it’s just not fair
Spiteful words can hurt you feelings, but silence can break you heart
You promised each other, so long ago, this would be a brand new start
How quickly you forget, the nice words you chose to speak
But now the lies, they just pour out, and out of your mouth, they leak
Falling from you lips are words that are best left unspoken
But as they hit the ground, all old promises are broken
Tears come flowing down as they slowly stain your cheeks
Wishing you could be as strong as this feeling of being so weak
You thought you put the past behind you, but it snuck back upon you
Now, sitting, here, dazed and confused, just trying to think of what to do
Things just keep getting worse and worse, until they finally break
And that’s just one more thing that I’m refusing to take
You’re driving me crazy with the bitterness of things
And now I’m so scared for what the future brings
What am I supposed to do, not let this affect me?
But how, after all this, are we still one big family?
The pain inside is nothing compared to the times that has happened before
You PROMISED me this would stop; I just can’t take it anymore
All of this, is it so worth it, in the end?
Couldn’t you ask for some of the love that I could lend?
This is so crazy; we were so perfect how we fit
Don’t tell me this is over, that you’re just gonna quit
Are you just gonna up-and-go; are you just gonna leave?
What about our family, this I can’t believe!
Help me to understand this; is this coming to an end?
I don’t want a path with so many bends
But now the storm is over, the water’s not so rough
Everything’s gonna be okay, life’s not that tough
Driving me crazy, driving me wild and mad
Angry, no longer my feelings, neither is sad
Feeling less frazzled, feeling almost fine
Just please promise me that this is the last time.

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Yay!! I finished. I was sooo busy!! I had written this for the contest and didn't have the time to type it up. It's a looong type *wipes invisible sweat off forehead* lol =) hope it's okay for this

< 3 CB

awesome poem! you always strike me in every poem you submit in my contest!!!!! this is great! it's ok if you changed the title. and it's awesome! lol. you always capture my feelings. lol. does that make sense? he he

3 reserves/d to go. 1 more title free!

it makes a lot of sense!! thanks a bundle.. I'm also glad you like Remember When too! < 3

Lies

Why are you saying this to me when you know its not true
You swore that you were going to be honest with me.
Piling up and hiding the truth from me.
I grow deeper and deeper into shadow.
Letting me go as he said he would keep me together forever..
Why are you letting me go...
Why are you making me drown in lies that you have told over and over...
I questions that I ask myself..
Is there another person in this?
Did he give away my heart to someone else..
How long has he been hiding...
Now you want to make me hide..
Hide away from you..
My fears that I have cried..
And all the lies that you have spoken to me....
How can I trust you once more with out you telling lies

*lol well srry if i added the s to it but hey...owell..but heres is my poem!! i just wrote it soo i hope you guys like it*

~*~ WHISPER~*~

Title : Tears Whisper {Double Etheree}
Etheree
The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables.
Double Etheree: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
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Tears
whisper
on my cheek
pink tainted trails
flood of stinging rain
walls built, broken by pain
arm in arm with black shadows
veil of sadness, clouds happiness
heart drowning, river of sadness flows
wanting to hear I'm sorry, just one time

love's, jagged edges tearing at my soul
heart beating, to a sad teardrop tune
waiting for words that never come
looking for truth in blank eyes
sleepless nights wondering
does your heart regret
letting me leave
as my eyes
whisper
tears

wow both of you guy's poem are great! keep it up ppl! lol

1 more to reserve and 1 reserved!

if someone dosn't reserve the title effect i would just judge all of the poems, is that ok?

but i do need to wait for the other one reserved

that should be okay saint.... that would be a hard title for me to write about... but then again, that's just me

hmm yea. i'll judge it tomorrow!

good luck everyone!!
=]

wait srry i can't judge it. i'll do it on FRIDAY..i promise! there's too much work! AHHHHHH!!

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it's friday dear!!! lol i can't wait to see who wins!! good luck everyone!! < 3 Ciaobellaboo!

that's really sweet! lol

congrats winners!

lol srry you didn't make it.....you've been 1st place from my 2 contest! lol! keep it up! congrats

WOW, thanks. Congrats to the other winners.

Happiness
Jeannie

Congrats to the winners!!|

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Congrats winners!

-Jenna.

wow third place!! yay!! lol wow first contset to have won!! lucky me!! yay!

congrats lol!

thxs!!! my first conest winning!! yay!!

broken fallen angel, can u give me your email address? i need to tell you something!

ummm...sure.....princess_hottie2b@yahoo.com
email me any time...tht goes 4 every1 else 2!

thankz! lol

np

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