Jenna's Winter Contest. =]]

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    ***CLOSED***CLOSED***CLOSED***WINNERS AT BOTTOM***

    Winter is approaching. YAY! So, I want to start a new contest. Write a new poem, or enter an older one of yours, about winter. It can do with anything that involves winter. Anything at all! It can be any style or any topic, nature and special event is probably the easiest though lol. I will take the first twelve or close it after October 21.

    There will be 3 winners, and I will comment on one poem of your choice to anyone that enters, and the winners will each get 5 r/r/c and first place a spot on my favorite list if not already there lol. =]]

    I have added two honorable mentions as well and they will each get 3 r/r/c on poems of their choice.

    -Jenna.

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    Complete - Twisted Heart ; ♥JeSS♥ ~Squiggle Master~ ; Noni Wang© ; Natalie ღ ; FlirtingWithDeath ; poetess ; Red-Rose ; Bryan ; xDarkSuicidex ; Logan L ; Enslavement of Beauty

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  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Winter just finished for me though.. It's spring now. ;P

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    First Snow
    by Twisted Heart

    Upon the crest of autumn leaves
    As cold rains wet the earth
    Comes the heart of winter's song
    To bring forth the first snow's birth.

    The swirling winds of time have come
    Increasing autumn's haste
    Into the past with other seasons
    Within our minds encased.

    Now comes the chill of winter's kiss
    As the white cape falls with grace
    Upon the hues of autumns reign
    A coat of whitewash, now is placed.

    It covers dirty grounds with hope
    And cleanses with its touch
    It sparks a bit of innocence
    With it's artistic brush.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Yes Bryan, you can reserve lol. Well, you guys are two of the best writers! Write one damnit! Lol. Just kidding lol.

    -Jenna.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    And Twisted Heart, I just read yours. Very well done! I like it.

    -Jenna.

  • Tine
    18 years ago

    I'd like to reserve myself a spot. can I ?

    x

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    There is one poem I am not sure if it qualifies...Would you mind going to it and seeing if it fits? If it doesn't, I will try to write one...and I think I could. I just may, even if it fits. ^.^. Depends on time.. It is called 'The Bells Chime' (It has reference and takes place in winter..)

    Thanks

    xDarkSuicidex

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Reserved. And Dark, I have read that one before, and yes it fits. =]

    -Jenna.

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Winter (Acrostic)

    Wide pastures sprinkled in milky crystals
    Indefinite beauty beyond minds of mortals
    Naked enjoyment spun in threads of snow
    Thriving sunlight casting a golden glow
    Eternal silence beckons to winter's call
    Romantic dreams under a pearl white fall

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Snow Flakes {Lanturne}

    ............Snow,
    .........Flakes fall,
    ........From above,
    .....Gently touching,
    ...........Ground.

    6th October 2006
    Copyright (C) Natalie

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    Lanturne: A type of poetry in which when
    it is centered, it resembles the Japanese
    lantern. It has a strict syllable pattern of 1, 2, 3, 4, 1.
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  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Yay! Thanks guys. It's cause you love me lol.

    -Jenna.

  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    Jenna... i might write one tonight.. but i thought i would say.. we might not have snow till after xmas this year :( ... and snow we get will disapear quick :(

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Of corse we love youuuuuuuuuuu! ..Who couldn't? Taha!

    I ♥ everyone, though. ;P

  • FlirtingWithDeath
    18 years ago

    ~Winter Nights Kiss~

    The trees have been striped
    No leaves to keep them warm
    The bitter winds brings chill
    To the bones.

    Not snow but ice
    Gleams on the streets
    All living things
    Curl up to their knees.
    Try to keep warm
    These hours will be deadly
    These winter nights
    Are not very friendly.

    Your tears will freeze
    Your breath will be short
    No winter’s breeze
    Will come with ease.

    Bear with it
    Keep your head down low
    For winter nights kiss
    Is something you will never miss.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Terra, the snow will NOT dissappear quick. I will make it stay. -glares.- Yeah, but I'm special Nata lol.

    -Jenna.

  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    lmao your so cute... and reserve me a god damb spot lady god! haha... ima so gunna write a winter type poem

    PS- damb write you are special... what other scissors can not sut through paper? lol :P

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Lmao, fine, I will reserve you a spot if I must lol. Oh I can cut through paper alright.

    -Jenna.

  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    i dont see no holes.. burn marks... rips.. tears... or even crumples as a matter of fact. :D im still perfect

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    I'll getchya.

    -Jenna.

  • blueknight
    18 years ago

    can I post my poem

    Unfrozen Blood-spattered Tears

    if I can then ill post here now here you can tell me if not so ill just erase it here

    Thanks

    here it is.........
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    Unfrozen Blood-spattered Tears

    While the snows starts to fall on the ground
    You leave me, without saying a word of goodbye
    Then tears flow down like a torrent on my face
    Running from my eye and liquefy my pelt

    Now I'm walking but don't know where to go
    You leave me on the first day of snow
    When I'm prepared to tell you that I love you so
    You ruined my wings and let me crawl

    So I pledge to my self not to think of you
    That this is the very last time I bestow these tears
    Where I put all the harsh sorrow you gave
    While singing a cry goodbye my dear

    On that wintry hour of darkness my heart beat so loud
    It breaks my cadaver want to freak out and die
    It is so profound, the reasons why I cant stand-alone
    Subsequently, I grasp a dagger to end this miserable life

    My days will never be that contented again
    Because my heart tranquil shouting your name
    And when the sharp edge taps on my veins
    On that wintry night, unfrozen bloody tears collapse

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Ily Jenna!

    Haha. This is turning into a love fest. ;P

  • blueknight
    18 years ago

    is that counted???

  • Leslie
    18 years ago

    can i post a poem? or are you happy with your ten reserved people

  • Twisted Heart
    18 years ago

    Hey Jenna,
    If you have the ability to keep it from melting, does that mean you can make it snow? If you can, send a little down here to Oklahoma. We haven't had a good snow in a long time. At least not one that lasted more than a day or two. Would greatly appriciate it. My kids haven't built a snowman in 5 years.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Haha Ily both as well!!!! YAY!!! Lol. And Blue, it should have a little more to do with winter. Maybe try writing a Haiku, it is shorter and easy to write. =] . And Twisted, I'll totally try =] I'm excited to build a snowman!!!! =]]]

    -Jenna.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Argh! I decided to write a new poem for this contest.. So, give me a few days.. I am a bit busy.. But, I promise to have one. Please reserve, thanks.

    xDarkSuicidex

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Okie. =]

    -Jenna.

  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    My flopy poem

    Twisting Wind [Mirrored Refrain]

    Looking towards the horizon
    Glancing to and fro
    There you will see the wind
    Twisting up the snow

    Listening to carolling
    You’ll become intertwined
    Twisting up the snow
    There you will see the wind

    Stepping through the frost
    Your skin becomes aglow
    There you will see the wind
    Twisting up the snow

    People making snowmen
    Others pushing their friend
    Twisting up the snow
    There you will see the wind

    Looking towards the horizon
    Glancing to and fro
    There you will see the wind
    Twisting up the snow

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Thanks Darling.

    -Jenna.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Haha awe, you know what you should do if you're sick?

    -Jenna.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Lmao, yeah that too. But, for a drink, that really helps and is friggin delicious; I got this recipe from the lovely Terra for Honey Lemon Tea. And you just boil water, pour it into a coffee cup, add 2 teaspoons of honey, and two of lemon juice. It's fricken amazing. I still drink it even when I'm not sick. But she doesn't know that I cheat like that so shhh lol.

    -Jenna.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Haha yay! I know man, I am such a rebel. I always tell people like that and they never friggin believe me lol. Hahaha awe, that's cute! You have myspace? You should add Jenna!

    -Jenna.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Hahaha ur too cute. Kai, I will next tiem I sign on! =]]

    -Jenna.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Lmao, is his name pronounced Ky? If so, I know one too!!!! Hahaha, well, it's my contest, so I pwn lol.

    -Jenna.

  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    QUOTE ---

    Lmao, yeah that too. But, for a drink, that really helps and is friggin delicious; I got this recipe from the lovely Terra for Honey Lemon Tea. And you just boil water, pour it into a coffee cup, add 2 teaspoons of honey, and two of lemon juice. It's fricken amazing. I still drink it even when I'm not sick. But she doesn't know that I cheat like that so shhh lol.

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    haha jenna i love you :D ... dont worry,.. i cheet to :P

    -- Terra

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Haha yeah man Ky! Lol. Kay have fun doll.

    -Jenna.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Terra, you didn't read that -shifty eyes.-

    -Jenna.

  • Mommy And Me
    18 years ago

    hah.. i didnt?? .. i mean.. your right i didnt :D... -shiftierier eyes-
    -terra

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    :0 No one outshifts Jenna!!

    -Jenna.

  • blueknight
    18 years ago

    lols jenna I cant write that poem lols i dont know why if i write a nature poem its end on love one lols

    Geneross