I need help with some writeing

  • 6brokenhearts
    18 years ago

    I feel like my poems lately dont have as much feeling as they had a time ago. I want it to have more feeling I want people to get the hurt and that my heart is breakning with out saying it! How do I get my feelings to come out more?

  • BrokenREALiTy
    18 years ago

    Yu can`t just FORCE yher feelings to come outt . Lately my poems have been the same way ;; But that`s cuhs` all my heartbreak has passed on . But yu knoee ... Yu kan just put yherself in someone else`s shoes or just waiit . Take some time and just think about all the pain -- the feelings and words will start coming backk . Trust me (: That`s what I did for one of my poemms ;; &&it made ppl cry . >.<
    GOod luckk ` .
    ♥..__MiNDYY

  • Carrie
    18 years ago

    sometimes its hard to take all the thoughts in your head and put it on paper... just lay back and write things, not in poem form, but just writing things down. Then after you have written a bunch of things down put them in your form of poetry... whether its rhyming or just grouping alike things into one poem. its much easier if you just write down what you feel then put it into a poem... the results turn out alot better.

  • 6brokenhearts
    18 years ago

    thanks you guys :)