Jenna's Song Contest.

ok i'll write a lyric but i can't do it now. i'm REALLY REALLY busy. so, i'll do it i guess on friday! thankz

Kay, no problem. Thanks for letting me know.

-Jenna.

Bump!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bump bump bump darlin'

can i make it BEFORE HE CHEATED? if i can't just disqualify me...thankz

BEFORE HE CHEATED

before he cheated he was with me
even though we're not together, he's still my baby
so don't try to think you can just come to him like that
and replace the seat in his heart where i sat

you think you know me, but hell no you do not
don't say i'm being too protective with him, period and dot
i'm still with him, so don't try to get away with me
because you're supposed to know he's still my baby

before he cheated he liked me and loved me
and there wasn't anyone he promised would be his new sweetie
he swore it and it would last forever
and you won't ever replace me, that would be never

don't think he can be yours because i'm not looking at you guys
but hell no, i have spies all over and some little eyes
so you betcha get out of here!
all i know is that i'm still going to be his sweetie, angel, dear

i hope you like it....

Sorry this is late, I've been busy with school

Whiskey Lullaby*

Hush now sleep soundly
Under the influence
of alcoholic conversations
and anonymous sex
What are friends for?

Don't want to sleep
There are too many screams
But then this waking life
Has lost all meaning

I don't know when or why
I started to feel this way
I used to have so much
to look forward
But now I've lost everything

Disillusionment doesn't even begin to describe
The reasons I write this siphoned lullaby
Drunk on envy and regret
I don't care enough to be upset

Comfort in longing, but it's all cold
A bitter smile, a rotten soul
I walk into a car's bright lights
Screaming out the ramblings of
what became our lullaby

Hoarse voice scratches at the back of my throat
Shove my defeated hands inside my coat
And ball my -little fists- against the world
Curse softly at nobody and vow to
never let you be alone
We could've been friends

I know you talk about me 24/7
And follow my tracks at your discretion
I'm kind of flattered
to finally have your attention
Since you've only been the object of my affection
for the last 2 years
I guess that borders on obsession
This theme is sort of played out, huh?
But it's all that I've got
to keep me hanging on

But I don't want you shoes to be stained
By the bloody grass that I left behind
What doesn't kill us makes us wonder
So I demand no reply
Just pass another round
and listen to my song
About the last time we said good afternoon,
good evening, and goodnight
Spreading the gospel on a napkin for this whiskey lullaby
You'd never suspect that today was just
another failed attempt I didn't even try

I have edited the songs. Just so people know, if the other titles were to weird or whatever, there are new ones now!

-Jenna.

hmm...can i please try soldier in a box...and if i cannot complete it am i allowed to trade titles?

Yes you are =] . I was waiting for someone to try this one =]]] .

-Jenna.

lol i feel wanted :P:P:P

Lol, woot!

-Jenna.

I just changed one more title by the way!

-Jenna.

Okay, these last few titles aren't getting much response, so after this next reserve is done, I will probably end this!

-Jenna.

god...soldier in a box is hard...im gettin it but geez...i have 2 stanzas....thats not enuf and i cant think of any more =(

Hmm, that's not that bad of a lenght, maybe wrap it up with a tercet (3 lines) so that it has a strong ending?

-Jenna.

OMG! i barely found out that the song BEFORE HE CHEATS is by Carrie Underwood! AHH!!!! lol.

Lol, is that a bad thing? I love that song =]]]] I always sing it to my friends at school lol.

-Jenna.

kk i finally finished...god...lol...i dont like the second verse though...oh well its done...

Soldier in a Box

Fighting myself between these walls,
Trying to find a door,
Tearing my heart out,
Trying to end this war,

My head is filled with,
These thoughts that consume,
I cant escape,
This might as well be my tomb,

Looking for the key,
To unlock these locks,
I cant stay here,
Im like a soldier in a box

By: Disturbed One

whos the winners?

wait wait wait...the titles...the 5 not done..or howeer many i cant count...on the tope..including seize the day (BY AVENGED SEVENFOLD) [love] are they done? if not..then yay..and um...yeah..if they are then ok..and if it doesnt have to be newly written...i already have a poem 4 it..lol...because that is my absolute FAVORITE song..and band..let me know:)

Lol, okay I will reserve it for you. It is a pretty splendid song, me and my friend always sing it in info and I always get the part where he goes all passionate like =]]]]] Have you seen the music video? Lol, anywho, yeah..I'll reserve it for you lol.

-Jenna.

i watch the video like every 2 seconds! i love the song and video. i love everything. i love the band. lol i say love alot. acutally i decided ima write a new one because the one i have kinda sucks..heh heh ill start now:)

Hahah yeah the video is pretty radd. Haha kai. :D

-Jenna.

so....after shes done is it over???

Yeah, if it is in by tonight, I will probably have the ersults in later on. I have cheerleading and then I have to go to my uncles, so it won't be until later though. Or tomorrow morning. One or the other.

-Jenna.

im sry i lost the contest again..i promist ill have it done in like a half hr!

wow i totally went in the other direction from when i started lol i kept changing it..now its all...weird..o well:)

Seize the Day

Seize the day, live like it’s your last,
Don’t dwell on the hurt or the past.
Just let go of your sorrow and your pain,
Go sing and dance and run in the rain.

Lose your hate; just seize the day,
No need to be sad; be happy and gay!
Don’t think of memories that make you cry,
Pretend this is the last day before you die.

Seize the day; don’t regret what’s done,
Just live life now, and have TONS of fun.
Hug the world and smile and say,
“I love you all, let’s just seize the day!”

Have a good life, just let go of hurt,
Be nice to those who treat you like dirt.
You’re better then them for you can let go,
Seize the day and let it show.

aw done!! lol(thats all done in a stupid voice if ur wondering) lol

Kai,t hanks, I am judging another right now so I will do this one after. =]

-Jenna.

Alrighty, I will judge this one in a few minutes. I will have the results in in about an hour or two.

-Jenna.

I forgot to name prizes lol. Everyone will place in this contest...but there will be the order of placing. I will r/r/c on 10 poems of 1-5. 5 r/r/c on 6-10. And 3 r/r/c on 11.

-Jenna.

First - Whiskey Lullaby; By:Something Vague.

Wow. This one brought me to tears right away. As I read it I kept thinking to myself how well this would work as lyrics for a song by a band in the genre with The Used and My Chemical Romance. Those types of bands. This was very well written and it deserved first place.

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Second - Call Me When You're Sober; By: Bryce.

At first when I started reading this poem, I noticed the length. And to be honest with you, I don't really like lengthy poems, I get bored and lose focus. But with this one, I was captivated and I just had to keep reading more of it. It brought me to tears. It reminded me so much of my relationships with both of my parents, and some days I am very tempted to leave as did the boy in your poem. This was very close to first. Keep it up.

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Third - Behind Blue Eyes; By:Terra.

Hunnie, you know that I love your work. You always amaze me withyour imagery, and just the basic structure of your poetry. And this poem, although you stated you didn't like it, was my favorite of yours. I loved it. I could relate to the echoing through the floor part because that is exactly like my parents right now when my Dad comes around. I loved it and it made me cry. I love you.

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Fourth - Remember When; By:Ciao.

This poem was amazing. And I normally do not like reading love related poems, because once you read one - you've read them all. But this one was unique and it stood out for me. It reminded me of a relationship that most long to have and it also really reminded me of the song, which; in this case, was a good thing.

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Fifth - Moments Forever Faded; By:Twisted Heart.

I have never known anyone close to me to have Alzhemiers, but after reading this I felt that I did. I never would have thought of a poem like that if I was given that titel and you always amaze me. You have such a great imagination and always seem to be able to bring me to tears after reading you work. Keep it up Darling.

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Sixth - Walk A Little Straighter Daddy; By:ConCealed In Addiction.

This poem was very well written and I could relate to this one as well. It was the same aspect that the song was, but it was somehow so different. I loved it. I thought that it could have used a stronger ending because the rest of the poem was strong but the ending wasn't as strong. It was very good though, and it brought me to tears as well.

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Seventh - The Wonderful Place; By:Letty...

This poem, unlike the other ones that were entered, made me smile. And it was good because I didn't wanna sap up at every poem entered lol. I wouldn't have been able to think of an idea like that for this title, you have a pretty good imagination and this was nothing like the song and that was what made me love it just that much more. Keep it up.

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Eighth - Like Red On A Rose; By:Bryan.

I love the style of poetry that you used and they are always so frustrating to write, so I respect any poet that can. As I read this I could tell the affection that someone felt towards another and it made my heart melt. It was adorable. Keep it up.

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Ninth - Soldier In A Box; By: Disturbed One.

This one really reminded me of myself. I always feel trapped in my house like the four walls are caving in around me and my thoughts eat alive at me. And as I have already stated, I love poems that I can relate to. You wrote this one very well and it was a joy to read.

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Tenth - Seize The Day; By:Erika.

I hope I spelled your name right lol. Forgive me if I didn't. Anywho, I loved this poem. It was very inspirational and it made me think. This would be a great poem to read when you're feeling down, and as always, you amazed me with your imaginative talent. Keep it up.

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Eleventh - Before He Cheated; By:youre acting like a d-m- saint.

I loved this one, but to me, the ending stanza as a bit confusing from the rest of the poem. In the rest of it you talked about a new girl taking over and who you USED to be, and then near the end you talked about who you were GOING to be. But, overall, I loved it. It showed the emotions that someone goes through when the persno they love gets hurt like that. Keep it up.

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-Jenna.

You guys tell me which poems you want done and I will get them done as soon as I can.

-Jenna.

Jenna, You changed your name. Had to go into your bio to see who you were.

Any ones you want hun. If you could, could you do some of my funny ones. If not, okay. Don't care which.

Thanks,
Jeannie

Jenna, You changed your name. Had to go into your bio to see who you were.

Any ones you want hun. If you could, could you do some of my funny ones. If not, okay. Don't care which.

Thanks,
Jeannie

Haha yeah I know, tis my new nickname from my loves at school so I thought I'd honor them this way lmao :D . Yeah I will do your funny ones, I'll do them tomorrow. Hafta go to bed Mom's being a headcase lol.

-Jenna.

thanks for making me number 4!! yay! i apprectiate it a lot!! < 3 Ciao

Okay Tessa, I am done yours. Jeannie I will do yours in a minute. And ciao, which poems would you like done?

-Jenna.

No problemo. =]

-Jenna.

any not-so-honourable-mentions for 9th place? lol...

ooh btw no offense lol but i like lush fcuk better...i mean i understand where they get jay enna from but lush fcuk sounds awesome:P

hope i didnt lose my change for rrc's there but umm...do whichever ones u want