[a line from a song titled contest]

CLOSED RESULTS BOTTOM CLOSED RESULTS BOTTOM!!!

well, this is going to be another titled contest. but there's only going to be 10 titles. and it's about sad, dark, up beat or love (if you want) you guys know what my favorite genres are right? the titles are lines from songs that i like maybe some you'll recognize. well here are the rules and titles.

RULES
[1] new
[2] dark, sad, or maybe even love
[3] you can change the title but you must tell me first if you're going to
[4] it can be as long as you want
[5] cussing are ok
[6] if you have questions ask me
[7] have fun

titles
[1] everytime i look into your eyes [D by Who Cares]
[2] and if you go, i wanna go with you [D by Ilinca Milosan]
[3] who can believe you? [D by The New Black]
[4] hey mr. jack [D by Lush.Fcuk]
[5] closing the goddamn door [D by Poonam]
[6] isn't this exactly where you like me [D by Terra]
[7] my tears are turning into time [D by Bryan]
[8] so much for my happy ending [D by Ciao Bella]
[9] i've given up on everything [D by Broken Tessa]
[10] together, it doesn't feel right at all [R 4 Sarah]

there's a second part, but i need to think about it first
5 ppl will be in the second round.

extra credit
who ever reserves the title you can tell me the real song/title the line came from and i'll give you 5 comments! is that fair? hmm......lol..

get going peeps!

rewards 4 these ppl [5 comments and votes]

[1] Ciao Bella -done
[2] Bryan -done
[3] Sarah -done
[4] Poonam -done
[5] The New Black -done
[6] Ilinca Milosan -done

reserve so much for my happy ending... plz
Avril Lavigne So Much For My Happy Ending!! lol i win!!

reserve "isn't this exactly where you like me"
please. :)

-Terra

Please reserve "together, it doesn't feel right at all"

That line is from Avril Lavigne's song Together...I think =D

Well, I would reserve The Panic At The Disco Ones lol, but I got no ideas for them =| . So can I Please reserve Hey Mr. Jack?

-Jenna.

o0o i wrote it but i'm in school so i might have time to type it up when i get home idk yet... it's gonna be good! lol =)

wow a lot of ppl kno the songs. i'll write ur names on top and wen the contest is done, i'll comment your poems! k? [this contest not the 2nd part]

anyone else peeps?

can i reserve number 1 plz

Bump it up... ima try and do it tonight.. and if i dont get around to it... it will be done during chemistry. lol

bump!

omigosh!! Ahh! i'm in school and I keep forgetting my poem to type... I wrote it like 4 days ago!! sorry Saint!!

So Much For My Happy Ending [Damn Mistakes]
by ciaobellaboo!

So much for my happy ending
Damn mistakes are just too much
So much for this happy story
I’m just not on the side of good luck

Damn mistakes are just overpowering
Consuming me whole
Laughing at my life’s troubles
Eating away at my soul

So much for my happy ending
Missing you is the reason for my sorrow
I know that I screwed up majorly
I just hope that I’ll see you tomorrow

Damn mistakes keeping me awake
I toss and turn all through the night
Whispering “I Love You” to the ceiling
I hope to God I’m right

You are now so far away
I miss you quite terribly
You came into my life and then went away
I fell in love with you so suddenly

If I could hold onto you
Just for one more time
I’d whisper this secret I swore to keep
Maybe then we’d be fine

Damn secrets I’d swore to keep
And promised not to forget about
Are on the verge of leaking
Are getting ready to pour out

So much for my happy ending
Damn mistakes are just too much
So much for the ending to my story
I couldn’t even grasp you, let alone touch

[You’re so outta my reach]

*whispers* they don’t have to know,
you can be my secret
I promise to keep you

this is awesome!!!!!!! lol

thankya dahlin`

DAMN MISTAKES is a pretty name! i want to change it! lol.

bump

anyone else who wants to do poems?

i have it done. i just cant get it on right now.. dads gone and i wanna talk to mom about his bday tomorow. i'll type it up when i get back.

-Terra

Closing the Goddamn door.
By: Poonam

I miss you, i want you but
go cry now, because its over
Im through, no more nonsense
I've found my sense, now I'm
closing the goddamn door

you loved me, did you care
lusting for my body, never giving
a moment to do more than stare
didnt care about my heart, nor
yours neither, no matter now, we're
closing the goddamn door

holding that archway open so long
arms getting lazy from trying so hard
said you noticed, said you loved
in reality you watched that one there
she got your love, caught your smile
never closing her goddamn door

came to me at night, fire all alight
passion in your pants, coming to me
she got your love, i got your fuck, but
now i'm through, ive found a real love
one who will watch me, worship me as i
close your goddamn door.

ps- its from i write sin not tragidites: panic! at the disco.

Isn’t This Exactly Where You Like Me

Once again she stool within the stone
Sapphire tears stained her porcelain cheeks
Bruises took over, not only her skin
But clouded her heart as well

Tracing her tortured eyes, upon the
Great marble letters, December 17th 1979.
Tearing her soul to pieces, she screams
“Isn’t this exactly where you like me?”

Her family had fallen apart
Sense that tragic night,
Dear grandpa had sailed away,
Right through the pearly gates

Daddy didn’t see the bruises
Over taking her taunting skin
Had love for her mother
…Caused him to go blind

The crimson petals fell, towards the great stone
Jade leaves where to follow, taking her soul along
Her crystal tears fell, for she knew this isn’t
Exactly where he wanted her

-Terra

nice poems!

great poems everyone!

ok bryan!

When is the deadline for this contest? I am really busy lately and trying to juggle poems into my schedule.

-Jenna.

aeeomse poem! lol. the deadline= HALLOWEEN or before that day. lol

Kay, thanks. I'll try and get it done as soon as I can.

-Jenna.

Hey, Mr.Jack .

He lays awake as the clock ticks past midnight,
Looking at your memories enlaced upon his walls,
Under his breath, your good-bye he started to recite,
As he bows his head and to his knees he falls.

With blood shot eyes he looks upon his blurred past,
Tears stream down as he removes the golden band,
His fingers etch around the words on the cast,
As he slams his empty bottle down onto the night stand.

He awoke the next morning with a heavy head,
To his little girl tugging at his ring finger,
He layed there a minute or two in his bed,
As he reminded himself he was doing this for her.

The meeting began as he stood and said his name aloud,
All the blood rushing to his head; afraid to show his face - -
He stood up and looked ahead as he silently vowed,
That he would be sober when he left this place.

"My name is Peter, and my drinking has cost me my wife,
One time too many coming home to the whiskey on my breath,
She didn't like it much, said I was wasting my life
And that was the day I said good-bye to my beloved Beth.

Last night, as I looked upon myself I knew what I had to do,
And today, I stand in front of you planning to win her back,
So I bow my head, and say 'Hey, Mr.Jack - - this is for you!' "
And in raising his bottle, he said farewell to Mr.Jack.

He lowered his head and sat back down in his chair,
As his little girl looked up at him with a tear in her eye,
And in grabbing his hand she bowed her head in prayer,
Wiping her tears as she told Mr.Jack a long awaited good-bye.

© Jenna Elphick
October 16, 2006.

- - Meaning of Mr.Jack being the Whiskey brand; Jack Daniels. - -

-Jenna.

great poem! keep it up ppl!

when is this oveR?

HALLOWEEN or the day before that. lol

lol. yep me too!

BUMP!!!!

does any one else want to join?

reserve poeple! the dead line is on HALLOWEEN! known as OCTOBER 31!!!!!!!!

omg im sorry i couldnt remember what the title of this contest was n i didnt remember my title either ill start right now:)

Every time I look in your eyes

I see you there, walking away from me,
You said we’re over, it’s not meant to be.
Now I’m alone again, as many times before,
Nowhere left to turn, you closed the door.

Every time I look in your eyes,
My heart flutters, a great surprise.
I feel hope, but then I recall,
It was you that made me fall.

Nowhere left to go, I’m breaking down,
You took my heart; it’s nowhere to be found.
I thought you loved me, but another lie,
But I won’t hurt, and I will NOT cry.

I look in your eyes, and every time,
I feel more for you, but you’re not mine.
I’ll move on, though it’ll hurt me a lot,
Dignity is the only thing that I still got.

i changed my name!! (ciao bella)

awesome poem WHO CARES!!!! lol. and i kno u changed ur name ciao bella.

o okay lol =]

yea ppl! come on!!!!! lol.!