[a line from a song titled contest]

any one else? come on!!!

i like the poem..

i think wat u did to the title at the end was awesome! yep yep yep...it relates to me a LOT!

r Who can believe you / "Sugar" System of a Down

DING DING DING! we have a winner!!!! yep it's by system of a down! hell yea! great job! i'll comment urs and the others when this contest is done!

any one else?

when's this over hun?

oct. 31

gotcha!

ah-huh? lol

Obviously weve all seen the little mess thats like 6 pages long.
So im bumping the real pages up

wat happened any ways? did something happened that they posted a thread like 30 times?

Some douchebag spammed the board.
anyway, here's my entry

"Who Can Believe You"
or
"How to Be Unnecessarily Mean to A Shy Person"

When you don't even know yourself
How can you expect anyone else
To understand the words you speak
When you don't know what you mean

Who can believe you
When you can't bring yourself to
See through your arsenal of lies
You've dug your own grave now
For so long, you're so far down
Who can save you from your self-made demise

You led us down a weary path
Chasing after that which that you hide
The ending of this fairy tale
That has spun out of your control
The emptiness consuming you
Because it has your soul

Who can believe you
When you believed that you were wrong
When you own up to all your anger and your pride
But you make no effort to change
You just waste your life away
Who can believe you
If you keep it all inside

*btw, I may have to start listening to SOAD again, that song is the bollacks

1 more reserve and 1 reserved!

I want to reserve "And if you go, I wanna go with you" and the song belongs to System of a Down and it's called " Lonely day " =)

And if you go, I want to go with you

The sky is pouring cold raindrops -
Like a flow of tears that never stops,
Ravens and wind singing a strange duet
In praise of this moment we can never forget.

The trees are shedding their rusty leaves
And it seems as if all nature grieves
For what's about to come of you and me
If we stop fighting for our integrity.

We stare at each other without saying a thing
It seems words are worthless as we're waiting
For your train to come and take you away
From what seems to be our last day...

We hear a whistle from afar and see smoke,
This is the end - I am about to choke,
Struggling with myself to not let emotion flow,
But I can't help it; I don't want you to go

And as you take your bags I start to cry
My lips won't move - don't want to say goodbye,
So I grab your arm and ask you to stay
We can make things work out some way...

You don't know what to do, how to respond
For you feel too the strength of our bond,
So you hold my hand and look me in the eyes
Telling me that leaving would result in your demise

So I smile in bliss and show you my ticket
All crumpled up as I kept playing with it,
Because wherever you may go I want to go with you
For I love thee so much and I see you do too.

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Hope I'm not too late and also hope you like it =)

awesome contest! there were a lot of poems i really liked, but i have to judge it only 3....sorry ppl! but i really loved almost everyone's! well here are the three who i liked best. oh, by the way, there won't be any 2nd part here. lol. anyways, here are the winners!

[1] Ilinca Milosan
[2] The New Black
[3] Who Cares

tough decission guys, really! anyways congrats!!!! :D

omg 3rd! thnx!

Yaaay! First place O.o - I'm so happy ^^ It's my first contest XD I'm so glad you liked my poem =) Congrats to everyone else *hugs them*

congrats winners!

Congrats!

-Jenna.

good job you guys!

Don't want to be annoying, but I was just wondering when are you going to give us our "prizes"? Oh well, take your time, just don't forget =P

Take care!

well, umm, i'm going to do it maybe around this week! i won't forget i promise! or else ppl will hate me, lol. just, hang on tight, i promise i'll comment and vote on you guys! lol

bump

comments and votes done!!