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i've been having dreams and they're kinda weird cuz it's about who i loved. anyways, i want to make a contest about dreams. well, i'll just pick at leat 2 person per catagory about their dream. like maybe 2 person for dark dreams, but you have to reserve it first! k? so well here it goes...

dark [dying, blood, etc.]

[1] D by OSCAR
[2] D by HEAVY HEARTS BLEED
[3] D by FADING ROSE

love [sweet with your bf or gf, etc.]

[1] D by BRYAN
[2] D by DHAVAL
[3] D by JESSY

sad [someone crying, or you cried in the dream, etc]

[1] D by THE NEW BLACK
[2] D by LUSH.FCUK
[3] D by BUBBLEWRAP

rules:
- cussings r ok
- your DREAM! not someone else's [but how will i know it's not yours...lol]
- new
- express your feelings about the dream
- give me details
- i like rhymings or at least an abab style
- poem/lyrics
- no more than 3 person per category, no EXCEPTIONS!

prizes are:
[1] 7 r/r/c
[2] 5 r/r/c
[3] 4 r/r/c

DEAD LINE: HALLOWEEN!!!!!!!!!

lol have fun!

sad please.

Can I reserve one on sad please?

-Jenna.

category: love

Its Christmas time and everyone’s merry
The ball seems to go on all night
They’re waiting for the Christmas fairy
The lamps are glowing sparkling bright

11 o clock on Christmas eve
I'm stranded at home and theyre calling
Captive in a valley of make-believe
I try to climb up but I'm just falling.

There is not a soul in sight
Streets all empty but for the snow
Not even couples on this holy night
Are kissing underneath the mistletoe

Every beggar is in the town hall
Wearing dresses which aren’t frayed
I cannot hear but the reindeers call
As I write my sad serenades

Friends and family all dressed up
Now dance to a tune so fine
One of my pals just called up
Asking me to join all in this merry time

But I don’t really feel so spirited
The trembling hope wont go away
ive waited long though patience is limited
but I think I’ll just wait another day

the night is cold but I feel colder
the night has lost its golden sheen
waiting more will only make me older
but I just cant let go the sight of the screen.

Waiting for that clanging sound
Which could just be your email
But could it just be another Judas
And not the holy grail?

And finally a sound is heard
Hope takes over my weary mind
But its just the bells at the party
Its midnight and they begin to dine

Two more hours pass by
They party on, its almost dawn
But hope has made my sleep fly
And left me alone and forlorn

They’re returning from the ball
And they’re making such a din
But I hear that sound after all
And I rush to my electric screen

The windows open up so fast
I see your name emerge
The joy I feel is deep and vast
Contentment clears out the dirge

Finally you had replied
I read every word a hundred times
I imagine you reading my email
As you correct my mysterious rhymes

No gifts underneath the Christmas tree
Just the tree and lonely me
But no gift could have ever compared
To the one I had received

No gift could’ve made me this happy
No box of toys topped with a red bow
No one could’ve ever cared less than me
If this Christmas was devoid of snow

But another sound begins to ring
I cant believe my ears,
i hope its just a deceitful lie
But the alarm clock reduces me to tears

But I’ll just get over it
Its happened so many times before
I'm almost so used to it
That I just slump back on the floor.

Every second of the dream I dreamed
Could’ve sworn that it was real
Words are too weak to express
The sadness that I feel.

by dhaval

hmm...does it HAVE to be about ur dream?
cuz i have a poem thats partially inside a dream

well i would most likely want to read about an actual dream, but i guess partially is ok.

i'm srry jess. there r already 2 ppl reserved for the category sad. the open one is the dark one tho.

reserve dark dreams please

Blissful Dreams [Love]

Upon the silky pillow, she delicately placed her head
Throughout her mind, thoughts flowed like small streams
Lying peacefully beneath blankets; feelings slowly spread
Floating lazily off into the distant galaxies of dreams..

An image of him silently drifted past; a happy face glowed
Soft kisses were placed on rosy lips; heart rates fluttered
Every night in her dreams, love for him would wildly explode
Slowly crowding into her head, emotions making it cluttered..

Sunshine gleams elegantly onto her face; she happily wakes
Golden hair falls over the pillow; pure skin beautifully gleams
Opening her eyes; a sweet smile from her collection he takes
For as she looks over, she's faced with the man of her dreams..

sorry jess. i guess i wrote the rules wrong. it as supposed to be 2 per category, but ok, i'll just do it 3 per category. lol. u can still join in jess.

i like both of the poems submitted. both of them are beautiful! awesome!

one more for reserve!

Hey, just letting you know, I changed my name, this is "Something Vague"

can i reserve the last dark one please

Wolves at Midnight

Mysterious maze, full of confusion
We are stunned by an illusion
Of how we got upon this wall
From way up here, everything looks so small

With a perfect circle, and twenty long chains
But only 19 wolves, that’s all the remains
Falling, to just out of their reach
Oh were we ever in a peach

An empty room, only 3 wooden chairs
There wasn’t even a flight of stairs
So there we sat, listening to the growls
And looking to the sky, there were some owls

Suddenly knocked over, I feel a sharp pain
Was there a way, for this wolf to refrain?
His claw sliced right through my chest
Then he cut into my breast

He smiled with crimson teeth
The other wolves, what were they beneath?
Kayla, she was not scared
And Jessica, just stood there and stared

There was no voice to scream for help
But suddenly I heard a yelp
My mother had saved me
Morning has set me free

-Terra

Am I still in this? I'm lost...

Btw its jess... different account!

jess ~

aw man i wrote a real good one and it was a sad poem, crap, all right hold on i'll write another one

there

Reflection

Here I lay and I still am awake
Trying to cover my latest mistake
That I loved her but her love was never encountered
Now I lie in my dreams and she’s still haunting me
Everywhere that I look she is all that I see
No matter how far I have wandered.

For I met her that day, and it all seemed so right
We were together the whole day and the whole night.
And the fire just seemed to keep burning.
She said she loved me and I said it too.
She said that this strange feeling was new.
And I never thought that I’d be crying.

I lay here in the dark just recalling it all.
Wondering what I did just to make it all fall.
And my sleep just seems so far away.
Walked all around looking at a happy photo
Now my life is just filled up with sorrow and woe.
And it seems things just never go my way.

I look in the mirror but don’t see myself
What did she do to me; I’m like the only sad elf.
And it hurts that she just wanted to move on.
The mirror tricks my mind, it makes me go insane.
My reflection is so dark as if I’m caught in rain
And I now feel like what I have done is real wrong.

My reflection shows me as I’m seen by the world
But it cannot show me that I feel like I’ve hurled
And I feel like I might drop and die.
Since she left me I’m dying.
Before her I was lying.
And now I am just asking why.

So it’s all over now, enough time has gone by
Now I’ll try to sleep on it, I’ll say my good bye
And now I will forget all that I’ve done.
So I now get her body and take it outside.
I dig up the hole it’s the end of the ride.
And now that she’s gone, I have won.

yes jess ur in this contest. and i like the poems! nice ppl! keep it up!

yep all of the reserves r taken!

Sucide,
Hey when ur goin to email me????didnt u say tht u had somethin to tell??

yea broken fallen angel, i'll email you right now!

the subject of the email says "hi it's september" change it wen u email me back. or don't put any subject. thankz

OMG!!! that is so SWEET and all! i feel like crying becuz it relates to me a lot! *sniffs* lol. give a me a tissue please....

well, well, well, what a coinscidence! all the done ones are the topic DARK and LOVE. all we need are the reserves by SAD.

Awe darn. Sorry, I forgot to add this to my list of contests to finish -blushes- I will add it right now and write it either today or tomorrow.

-Jenna.

sure take ur time. i'm a little busy myself too..

Kai, thanks so much.

-Jenna.

october 31! boo! lol

Goodbye, Mary Jane.

Porcelain tears are shattered along the dampened street,
As scarlet blood runs down her weakened throat,
Her hand is gripped tightly onto your goodbye note,
With ink smearing onto her ivory palms of deceit.

Crooked footsteps are imprinted into the wet sand,
Beneath an empty swing still rocking side to side,
And there's a bottle of vodka that she swallowed with her pride,
The day that he walked away and let go of her hand.

A bullet with your name is engraved into her tattered brain,
As the rain falls down and washes her memory away,
Her wretched heart stops beating from your betray,
With rusted tears - - we mourn to our friend Mary Jane.

© Jenna Elphick
October 20, 2006.

- - It didn't turn out like I expected it to, was more of a death poem, but that was the last dream I had about 2 days ago about crying. If I need to write a new one with more to do with crying I can, just let me know because I have another dream in mind. - -

-Jenna.

it's ok jess...

any one else who wants to join?

wow! i really like the poem! it has great discriptives and it is just wonderful! thankz for entering this! lol. well, if THE NEW BLACK doesn't do the poem up there ^ i'll erase her name and the reserve is free...

COME ON PPL!!!!!!

please ppl! lol.

yes please hurry, i want this contest to be judged!!!!

I was under the impression the deadline was Halloween. I can't get it before then. but I am working on it. but school comes first.
Look at Friday or Saturday. No later.

oh yeah she's right. sorry

yep, sorry. lol.

anyone else? it's me pain....

call me leisa ppl.

leisaxx