READ ME :P

i would really appreciate some feedback on my poem, "The Hospital Part I: the lost day". this poem is about the first day when i woke up in hospital and was told there was a 40% chance that i would die from the virus thing i had/have and am still recovering from. this poem means a lot to me, and i know its long, but i would really like some people to tell me what they thought of it. the next parts in the series will be up by next week. thankyou in advance. oh and i will gladly read any poems you would like me to, i love reading other peoples work.
xnikkix

I read it and I loved it! You expressed your feelings, and your rhyming was perfect! I gave you a 5!

thanx kristin :)