My poem

I wrote a poem called Her best friend and people said it was Bad and it really hurt my feelings and I would like some people that right poems opinion on it!!

~BEN~

At least have the balls to leave a comment, fella.

Um.... I will get to it.. I suppose.

I agree with Bob,he has such a way with words! I liked the poem,I don`t know much about literary correctness,but I know you can feel the pain come through and to me thats what really counts the most, the human emotion being shared and revealed to the rest of us in a way that makes us feel it with you!

Bump (Due to Spam)

Bob - You're the master!! What is good to some, may not be good for others... But simply saying that it is no good is both unfair and cruel. If you don't like something tell someone why. And if someone asks you why... Well, only RTVW know what I mean :)