Jenna's Dark Poetry Contest; Part Three.

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Congrats to the final five, you have made it this far. You have all made a very great impact on dark poetry in my mind. So, now you guys will have to write a lanturn. If you do not know what that is, ask me and I will present you with an example.

The final three, I will r/r/c on 5 poems of your choice and First place will also get a place on my favorites if not already there.

I will give you all until October 28 to get your poems in or at least let me know you have seen the results. From there, I will email all who have not noticed, and give them until November 1. Sorry for being so pushy about it, but we don't all like waiting around for results.

So get writing winners, and continue to amaze me with your words! =]]

Complete - 5/5

-Jenna.

Can you give me an example just in case?

Hahhahaa yeah Jess it should. I was lazy and I just copied and pasted some stuff and I forgot to change half of it lmao. -Blushes.-

-Jenna.

Noni, here is an example of one I wrote.

-Snow.-

------------Snow,
---------Flakes are,
--------Painting the,
---Autumn colored leaves,
-----------White.

© Jenna Elphick
October 6, 2006

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Lantern: A type of poetry in which when
it is centered, it resembles the Japanese
lantern. It has a strict syllable pattern of 1, 2, 3, 4, 1.
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-Jenna.

isn't AUTUMN COLORED LEAVES 5 syllablles? AU-TUMN COL-ORED LEAVES? lol. i'm not sure but yea.

----------A
-------rose to
-----give and kill
----me for you i
---------will

i hope that's ok ^ it's kinda confusing but what i was trying to say is that i will die for you. lol

Lol, yes I know that line was messed up. I've gotten a lot of people telling me to change it, I just keep forgetting.

-Jenna.

I see this post and that I made it and I will write one asap. I'm really busy this week and I leave on Wednesday and won't return until Sunday...So, I'll try.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

........Fire......
.....morphing...
...beyond hope...
.....devouring....
........Night.....

Blood Pool
By: TWisted Heart

-----------------Blood--------------------
---------------Crimson-------------------
------------Bleeding heart---------------
-----------Mixed with water--------------
-----------------Swirls--------------------

is devouring 4 or 3 syllables? srry i'm so DUMB! lol

I count it as three, but that's because that is the way I say it lmao. Might be different.

-Jenna.

ya changed ur name? lol. i'm kno more of you as LUSH.FCUK. was FCUK = meaning the bad word? and u delibaretly mispell it? lol. i've been curious since the day i saw ur name. lol.

Lol, yes it was. I'll be changing it back to that in a bit.

-Jenna.

A Beating Heart; Part 3 {Lanturne}

...........Hearts...........
.........Are Not...........
..........Simply...........
..Deep Beaneath The..
...........Breast............

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

I think that's all of them done now! =]] I will come back and judge this in a bit guys. Sorry, I just finished rebooting my computer and I was redownloading some CDs so I came on here to keep me busy but they're done now =] So I will finish setting it up and then judge!

-Jenna.

First - Noni.

I loved the image that I got when I read it. It blew me away how I could be left so speechless after such a short poem. You are one of those people that have the talent to write about anything and still leave people amazed. I love it. Since you are already on my favorites, I will just comment on 5 poems of yours. Just leave the titles in here.

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Second - Jess.

I loved this poem. It is not easy to write a lantern and keep it really dark, but you did it. I did notice one thing, in shrill - change it to two l's. Other than that, this lantern was perfectly written to what I had expected. Great job. Leave the titles of poems you want done below.

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Third - xo[SUICIDE]23[SEPTEMBER]ox .

I liked it, it was very imaginative. It created a picture in my mind and was very well written. Great job! Leave titles for poems below.

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Jeannie & Sheena - I will also comment on the poem that you entered. Your poems were very well written as well, this contest was a tough one to judge.

-Jenna.

well u can comment and vote on my poem any poem u want. i want to be surprised. lol. thank you so much!

Alrighty, I will write those down and get them done in a bit.

-Jenna.

Wow, thanks! I was a little surprised, I'm not use to writing short poems.

Obviously weve all seen the little mess thats like 6 pages long.
So im bumping the real pages up

just gonna ask when r u going to r/r/c our work.....srry i'm annoying

I will when I have time. I'm busy all weekend pretty much after this..

-Jenna.

ok, lol, sorry

It's fine.

-Jenna.

Okai, sorry guys. I got really busy with things, but I am free today and for a little bit tomorrow afternoon, so leave the titles you wanted and if you already did and I haven't commented on them, let me know. Sorry guys.

-Jenna.

any of my poem is ok, but i'd rather want the ones who hasn't been commented and/or the ones not voted, yet. thankz!