Something Good.

  • BeautifulxMess
    18 years ago

    Well I need to start getting some favorites so if you think I should put you in my favorites give me a poem that is good enough to convinces me!

  • ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ
    18 years ago

    Here she lies (Epitaph)
    by ღ»Lσιѕ«ღ

    Here she lies not making a sound,
    soon to be quietly resting under ground.
    A wonderful mother and amazing wife,
    now has went to heaven for eternal life.

    *An epitaph is a brief poem consisting of four
    lines inscribed on a tombstone praising a
    deceased person, usually with rhyming lines.*

  • BeautifulxMess
    18 years ago

    Awesome. Impressed me enough. YOu're in my favorites. =>

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    hi I thought that I would like to post....

    I'm Just A Poor Cinderella
    by Xx rock star babe xX

    I will never be his Cinderella but he'll always be my prince
    I could never love another and I've never loved one since
    How could I give up hope when that's all I could give
    When I made him my everything our life, I chose to live

    Don't make someone your everything, don't make him your all
    Because what is there to catch you whenever you will fall
    He will always be my everything, but I'll never be his
    It's the love that we once had that will be forever missed

    I see him now and then with his new princess
    Somehow, they fit so perfectly, I guess
    I wonder if he cares about this poor Cinderella
    But how could anyone? Especially, this fella

    I'm just some poor Cinderella, just some young girl
    Who stupidly made some boy her whole entire world
    So I guess I'll have to learn not to make that mistake again
    Because my path in life is covered with "might-have-been's"

    This poor Cinderella patiently waits for her prince
    Who has maybe loved another, but hasn't loved one since.
    Who will kiss away her troubles and off her feet, be swept
    Who'll dry up all the fears and tears. that over the years, she's wept

  • BeautifulxMess
    18 years ago

    Beautiful! Loved it. Impressed enough.

    -->Everyone it would mean a lot you know if I could possibly be put in yours, you don't have to but it would just mean a lot to me.

  • CHOKE
    18 years ago

    I dont think you really love me
    i dont think that is what this is
    i think you want something else
    something i wont give

    I'm tired of guys treating me like this
    I'm not a wh0re
    i don't deserve this torture
    i thought you said you wouldn't do this anymore

    but i guess i thought wrong
    i thought you really loved me
    but now i know
    now i can see

    love isn't real
    so lets not pretend
    just stop lying
    just let this end

    take my heart
    and throw it away
    just leave me alone
    let these fake feelings fade

    lets not kid ourselves
    we know whats going on
    if i don't give you what you want
    ill wake up one morning and you'll be gone

    love isn't what this is
    love isn't what this is about
    i know the truth
    whether you whisper, scream or shout

    love isn't real
    it never was and never will be
    lets live this life apart
    with you away from me

    i don't want to give in
    I'm not going to let myself get hurt
    this is it, stab me with your knife
    pile your lies under dirt

    it doesn't matter
    I'm smarter than you think
    love isn't real
    so just close your eyes, wish me away, then blink

    love can never be a reality
    only a dream
    remember this
    everything isn't always as it seems

  • Tine
    18 years ago

    From This Ink

    As this last drop leaves my pen
    I don't know when we'll meet again
    would things change if we did
    when our being together is always hid

    The last drop is falling very slowly
    in my mind I can almost see
    every word I've written to you
    to try and make changes in how we do

    I don't regret anything I've written
    because my emotions and words were always fitting
    I needed to get rid of them somehow
    And I did, there's only happiness left right now

    I gave my fallen tears to you
    living in a world this blue
    fully made of words of ink
    into the paper I made you sink

    I made you one of my best friends
    my only friend who understands
    how everything seems to be in my eyes
    who can see right through my disguise

    that blue drops made you so real
    but still so fake I could feel
    that your black hair only exists
    when the ink flew like it were gifts

    The last drop just hit this sheet
    And we haven't said yet when to meet
    what will I do without your big brown eyes
    of which the exact shade always varies

    I'll say goodbye to you for now
    and get on alone with everything somehow
    but we will meet again, right?
    You'll never be out of my sight..

    x

    I hope u'll like it!! :)