Clap On, Clap Off!!!!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    CLOSED

    yeah..ok...anyway now that that's over with...NEW CONTEST
    YAY
    ok this one is gonna b a double wammy thingy..yeah
    it's a title contest *crowd groans*
    yes yes i know ugh title contest but come on! i havent in a long time!
    ok so anyway not only do you have to associate (big word for me heh heh) the title to the poem, you also have to make it be about a relationship. BUT NOT JUST ANY RELATIONSHIP..no..like an on-off relationship. like...get together....break up..get together..break up...etc etc. yeah..OK
    RULES:
    -must be on off relationship
    -title has to be involved SOMEHOW
    -new or old i dont care
    -contest ends nov. 8th
    -cussing is ok...whatever
    -2 poems per person max

    Prizes:
    the usual for me..yeah if u dun kno what that is then wow..lol..but yeah...8,6,4,2 depending on the rating..yeah u know the drill lol

    ok title time:

    Goodbye, Again? done
    Sun Going Down Again reserved
    Together "Forever" ----------------
    Make Up Your Mind done
    You Confuse Me ---------
    Do You Love me or NOT? done
    Do you Really Care? done
    On and Off done
    Sunrise, Sunset done
    It's Over...AGAIN --------------
    Long Time no see -------------
    De Ja Vu reserved
    Back and Forth ---------
    As I Walked Across This Bridge Of Dreams done

    um yeah thats all i got right now...not very good titles huh...meh w/e...um yeah if ill think of more 2morro at school

    GOOD LUCK AND HOP TO IT!!!

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Can I please reserve Sun going down again?

    -Jenna.

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    you confuse me please!

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    yay jenna changed it back again! lol!

  • Letty
    18 years ago

    Can I please reserve De Ja Vu please?

    Thank you
    Letty

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    Do You Love Me Or Not plz!

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    18 years ago

    Lol I shure did!

    -Jenna.

  • disturbed one
    18 years ago

    YAY jenna changed it back! lol

    how serious can the cussing be?

    can i please have on and off.. i think i got an idea...and it may result in my first non rhyming poem ever...i dont like the sound of that but oh well

  • disturbed one
    18 years ago

    well...it didnt really work cuz i cant stand non rhyming poems so umm...sorry about the bad language...if you dont wanna read 4 bad words...2 really...then dont read it if u will be offended...so ya here it is...

    On And Off

    Harder Harder,
    Faster Faster,
    Get my heart beating,
    Oh your the master

    I loved it back then,
    When your light was on,
    We were naked,
    From dusk til dawn,

    Slut Slut,
    Whore Whore,
    Hit me again,
    This is war,

    I hate you once again,
    Your light is off,
    All we do,
    Is spit and scoff

  • PygmyPuff
    18 years ago

    theres a mess...so bump

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    moving bakc up because of the mess that is confusing me!

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Could I do "Make up your mind" please? Thankss, xx.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    omg u guys im so sorry ive been busy all weekend and cussing can be every other word of the poem for all i care..i really don't care...

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    im waiting...come on:(

  • Elynnka
    18 years ago

    I would like to reserve "Sunrise, sunset" please =)

  • Elynnka
    18 years ago

    Sunrise, sunset

    When the sun rises I know I’ll find you here
    Standing right next to me – to my face near,
    I know I’ll hear your voice saying “I love you”
    And I’ll smile saying “Yeah I love you too”

    Tough night last night was it not?
    Or have you so quickly forgot?
    Remember when you yelled at me
    Saying that the way things are couldn’t be?

    But I guess that’s history – time to move on
    Forget what was and enjoy this lovely dawn;
    Listen to the birds greeting us with their song
    As you tell me that only in your arms I belong.

    And I know that if the sun will shine
    I will be yours and you will be mine –
    We look so happy caressed by its rays
    As if we could laugh and have fun for days.

    We cease the moment and put the past behind
    Making fun when we hear the words “love is blind”
    Because we know that we have is real and strong
    And that if we try we can make things last long.

    But what is that I see? Oh no, it’s getting late
    Something tells me that this is the end of our date;
    I try to say something so you won’t realize
    That it’s almost sunset now instead of sunrise…

    I can see you frown and your face reveals disgust
    As if you’re looking at someone you distrust,
    Someone so pathetic and insignificant – so despising,
    A small hateful creature only worth for patronizing.

    So as the sun goes down – light emerging into dark,
    I know that now it’s time for us to once again part,
    You let go of my hand and tell me that you hate
    Everything about me and us – once again you are irate.

    I look at you with teary eyes trying not to care,
    I don’t want to fight again so I just sit and stare;
    And you leave me all alone in this endless darkness,
    Overwhelmed by silence as tears fall upon my dress.

    I sit in my cold bed – eyes fixated upon the ceiling,
    All alone I crave to see the sunshine in the morning
    For I know that I’ll find you here right next to me,
    Holding me tight saying “I love you, I’m sorry honey”

    The sun is our biggest friend and greatest enemy,
    Lucky for us it will come up and go down for eternity
    And each time it rises we will be reunited in bliss
    And when it sets I know that you I’ll greatly miss.

    I'm sorry it's so long, but I got carried away and couldn't stop writing *hides* I hope you like it though =)

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    reat:) thanks:D keep em commin folks oh and happy halloween:D

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    Do You Love Me Or Not
    by ciaobellaboo!

    Do you love me or do you not?
    You told me once, but I forgot.
    You left me twice, but then came back.
    Is out love still right on track?

    You told me you loved me, but then you left.
    You came back, was it something you regret?
    Things were better at first, but the pain came often.
    You were still my love, but the edges unsoftened.

    Do you love me or do you not?
    You told me once, but I forgot.
    You told me you cared but then you cheated.
    Your words are spiked with lies decieted.

    You could fill my head with softspoken lies
    You would never know it when you look in your eyes
    But now I'm just so sick of you
    Finally, you and I are finally THROUGH

  • Kalgalath
    18 years ago

    As I Walked Across This Bridge Of Dreams (revised)

    As I walked across this bridge of dreams
    I see such wonderful things
    My world is on fire
    I never want it to transpire
    If the fire were to die,
    Then I would surely cry
    Nobody would know
    It would be, to them, like a show

    You are at the end waiting for me
    As I look over the edge,
    I see such beauty

    Over to the side
    Is a star-reflected pool
    I use it as a guide
    So that I am not a fool

    The water is clear from the moonlight and pure
    I see images
    That are like a cure

    We are holding one another
    Whispering back and forth
    Our thoughts we try to cover
    Because they want to go north

    North is where the bridge of dreams lay
    Where snow falls everyday
    Such beautiful snow
    You wouldn't know
    Because only my angels glem
    And only my angels glow
    On my bridge of dream and show

    We are laughing and care not who's listening
    I lean over and give you a kiss
    Your eyes are glistening
    You light up with a little more bliss

    Nights are days,
    Days are nights
    My world is turned around
    Yet, that is what makes it beautiful?

    Not caring is a wonderful thing
    Wouldn't you say?
    Caring for you, and a broken wing
    That, I could care for forever and a day

    You are my lover
    And I yours
    I hope you never have another
    Because then my heart will have sores

    I am not lost
    Because I have you
    As I trace away the frost
    My path is renewed

    As I walked across this bridge of dreams
    Many wonderful things have I seen
    Wonderful things that will never be
    Because it was only a dream

    Alternate ending

    As I walked across this bridge of dreams
    Many wonderful things have I seen
    Wonderful things that seem to good to be true
    Even as I stand here with you

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    logan...that was sweet and all..but it wasnt on the title list OR on the topic.....sorry....if u submit something else ill take it...

  • Kalgalath
    18 years ago

    yeah i didnt seem to read the title names. and if you were in my mindframe when reading it it was on the topic but its okay.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    well u know i really like it..so im gonna let it slip in because its really well written...:) oh his just in..my on-off relationship is on again. lol 3rd time. yeah..thats my inspiration 4 the contest i dun remember if i said that up there but if i did oh well read it again

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Can I unreserve? Sorry. I just don't have the inspiration right now..

  • Autuumnbree
    18 years ago

    Can please reserve Good Bye Again?

  • Kalgalath
    18 years ago

    okay thanks for that. really appriciate it.

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    can u pls unreserve mine...i'm not in the mood...

  • disturbed one
    18 years ago

    bumpin real topics

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    yeah guys its fine..:) if u change ur mind later feel free to see whats left. and your welcome logan:)

  • Kalgalath
    18 years ago

    im writing another one. i chose make up your mind. just so youll have a titled one that you want if thats okay.

  • Kalgalath
    18 years ago

    Make Up Your Mind

    Make up your mind
    Would you please?
    It’s somewhat hard to find
    Time that will freeze

    We do not have all day
    Nor all night
    To decide if we want to stay
    With the flicker of the light

    The light is fading away
    Once again
    I begin to pray
    That we will have time to spend

    We have been through this many a time
    And always come back
    I start to sip my wine
    My heart begins to crack

    You came in
    With all your friends
    You had a little grin
    You were writing with a pen

    It seems to be a note
    You are writing for me
    You do not want to gloat
    Because you’re full of glee

    You decide to come back
    Big Surprise
    Your heart has turned to black
    You are full of lies

    I choose not to have you
    For once in my life
    I start to pursue
    The life of the knife

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    ok great job:) again..i think i'm gonna extend this contest a few days cuz there are still reserved poems and plus my bf (lol) is commin over 2morro so ill be busy..so new day...nov 8th (1 month b4 my bday WOOT!)

  • Kalgalath
    18 years ago

    i still would like my other one to be on there. i wanted to write two. i mean so you can have more to choose from and consider. you know if im allowed to enter two poems.

  • xxEvilAngelxx
    18 years ago

    I'll take
    Together "Forever"!!!

  • xxEvilAngelxx
    18 years ago

    I take that back! I'm not entering!!! lol...

    xxEvilAngelxx

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    lol logan you're changing all my rules..thats ok though:) ok, i've decided (w/ logans help:P) that people who have entered can enter more than one poem, just make sure it's not reserved by someone else. max: 2 poems per person.

  • *Charisma*
    18 years ago

    Goodbye, Again? please! Jpoet*

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    sure:) all u ppl that have reserved titles...are u getting it done?!

  • Kalgalath
    18 years ago

    sorry about that. i didnt mean to change them. but its cool. its cool.

  • *Charisma*
    18 years ago

    Goodbye, Again?

    Didn't we just do this?
    Wasn't it like this before?
    I recall this same scene,
    You closing that door.

    What was it this time?
    Why do you want to leave?
    Last goodbye it was you,
    This time is it me?

    I thought it was better.
    Everything was fine.
    Where have you been lately?
    Was it all in my mind?

    Were the smiles all fake?
    And if so, then why?
    When you looked happy,
    Did you really want to cry?

    Every time we pretend,
    That we're leaving for good,
    But we never do.
    I don't think we could.

    It's like we need each other,
    Then toss them away.
    It's never for sure,
    If we're here to stay.

    But I'm starting to wonder,
    If this time it's for real.
    Is it possible to leave
    To end this long deal.

    Was I that hard to trust?
    Am I such a bad friend?
    I need a good reason.
    Is it goodbye, again?

    By: Jpoet*

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    when is this over? hmmm... lol