front and center, right now!!!!!

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED CLOSED!!!!!

    well, anyways, i wanted to do another contest and it will last for only a day! yea! so anyways, this will be fast and this will, of course, end today! only 5 poems will be submitted here. no exceptions ppl! sorry! and now, here's the rules...

    RULES:

    [1] LYRICS
    [2] new
    [3] it can be how long you want it
    [4] no late submitted poems
    [5] about DARK or SAD NO LOVE!!!! but it can be about that when it's heartbroken..lol
    [6] cussings are ok, but no EXTREME cussings
    [7] i like it when it mostly rymes a/a/b/b or a/b/a/b

    PRIZES

    [1] 10 r/r/c and add to fave
    [2] 10 r/r/c [but depending on how good. if not really -----just 5 r/r/c

    [3] 3 r/r/c
    [4] 2 r/r/c
    [5] 1 r/r/c

    ppl who entered

    [1] [hopelessly romantic]-D by ciao bella
    [2] [pulse]-D by no need for a name
    [3]
    [4]
    [5]

    xxleisaxx

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    come on ppl!

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    haha hopelessly romantic! lol I want that one!! I can so totally do that !

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    yea i saw ur name and i liked it a lot! lol

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    u have to do it now, tho.....don't forget it's due today!

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    holy crap today! ahh! i'll work on it now!

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    yep it's today...lol. it says up there ^^^^^^ lol.
    i think it does..lemmi check.

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    yep it does!

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    haha I didn't see that... woking on it now!

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    Hopelessly Romantic [Lyrics]
    Ciao

    [Chorus]
    Hopelessly romantic,
    Feeling kinda frantic,
    Baby, what am I supposed to do,
    Now that we're finally through?

    [Verse 1]
    Baby, what we had was so special;
    No one can deny that.
    But now that it's over,
    I can't help but to keep looking back.

    [Chorus]
    Hopelessly romantic,
    Feeling kinda frantic,
    Baby, what am I supposed to do,
    Now that we're finally through?

    [Verse 2]
    Honey, what happened to our love?
    Did you just not care anymore?
    Baby, you were my everything!
    Stop closing the god damn door!

    [Chorus]
    Hopelessly romantic,
    Feeling kinda frantic,
    Baby, what am I supposed to do,
    Now that we're finally through?

    [Bridge]
    Sweetie, please don't do this to me!
    In our love, can't you believe?
    Now that it's over, is there no regrets?
    In our love, I couldn't forget.

    [Outro]
    Hopelessly romantic,
    I'm feeling kinda frantic.
    Now that we're finally through
    There's no way I'm getting over you?

    Hopelessy romantic,
    Baby, you're making me so damn frantic!
    Why are you doing this to me?
    Why can't you just let me be!

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    =] that wasn't so bad... I actually like it! hehe great contest!! =]

  • Autuumnbree
    18 years ago

    I hope my poem is ok, and I hope you don't mind me entering this contest.

  • No Need For A Name
    18 years ago

    Pulse

    I've been poisoned the reason
    Is that of your treason
    Against my sanity
    I've been stopping my sanity
    From becoming deaths vanity
    And now you will believe
    Believe that your last breathe
    Will be that of your death
    And now please set me free

    (Chorus)
    Run away from me
    Give me a pulse
    Let me breath
    Let my heart beat slowly
    Let me form into you
    My pulse just throbs through
    Parts of me thats bruised

    The destruction of my life
    Will be consumed by the knife
    The one that let me bleed
    Bleed through all those days
    Bleed in all those ways
    In which you caused
    Caused by being
    And caused by seeing
    The way I am now and always

    (Chorus)
    Run away from me
    Give me a pulse
    Let me breath
    Let my heart beat slowly
    Let me form into you
    My pulse just throbs through
    Parts of me thats bruised

    You let bleed
    You took my needs
    You stole my heart
    You ripped it apart
    You lied to me
    How can this be

    (Chorus)
    Run away from me
    Give me a pulse
    Let me breath
    Let my heart beat slowly
    Let me form into you
    My pulse just throbs through
    Parts of me thats bruised

    No.Need.For.A.Name.

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    umm i think ppl misunderstood the rules or something. the poem was supposed tobe titled with the titles i wrote down. but i guess u can do it in another way...anyways, i like it both. i'll judge this contest tomorrow.....if no one enters this one, i'll comment on the ppl who entered. make sense?

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    i'll give this till midnite!

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    18 years ago

    bump back up

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    yes bump!

  • xxmichaelxx
    18 years ago

    well 2 ppl only entered this contest so i guess, i'll just comment u guys...10 10 each!!!! i love both of the poem/lyrics!