finalists click here!!

ok xxrock star babexx, twisted heart, dreading time.. were the finalists from my other contest so heres your challenge

challenge:

Pick one from these categories and make it sound beautiful..

chewed gum(reserved)
contacts
a piece of hair(done)
toe nail
wrinkles(done)

same rules apply from my other contest... one person per title... lets see wutcha got

I'll take a piece of hair. Man, It took me forever to find this because of all the spam.

Happiness and thanks.
Jeannie

o sorry to hear bout that... but yea im gonna put a deadline cause then this contest will go on forever....ok... so the deadline is nov 1st

An Artist's Brush
By: Twisted Heart

Each stroke her weathered hand has made
Into the swirls of florid paint.
Lazy circles with the artist's brush
She dabs upon the empty canvas.

Simple colors of brown and green
With a blue sky, becomes a scene
Nestled in her thoughts so clear
She paints away the wasted years.

Within the depths of paint she finds
A threshold to forgotten times
A whirl of love, out of control
Transcending from her very soul.

A stroke of passion from her heart
Brings to life this piece of art
Upon the canvas, now she sees
A lovely spark of fantasy.

dang... this is HARD!! I'll try chewed gum... can't guarantee greatness though...lol

ok just try your best and remember it has to be done by november 1st!

i wonder if dreading time is having trouble finding this contest... i hope not

hey,
dreading time had her account deleted. she said she'd still do it, but she'd have to use my account. So, I'm going to let her until this contest is over.

thanks, kate.

oh and she said she'd do wrinkles.

It's not my best, but I have a lot going on. So, it's gonna have to work.

Wrinkles

Grandma, sing me that lullabye.
The one you use to, when i was young.
Sing me that lullabye,
and tell the story of why it's sung.

Grandma, sing me that lullabye,
telling of great love.
Sing me that lullabye,
the one I'm thinking of.

Grandma, sing me that lullabye,
that tells why I'm losing you.
Sing me that lullabye,
you made as life you went through.

Grandma, you sang to me that lullabye,
and now I must sing to you.
Tell you of how much I love you,
and all you've helped me through.

Grandma,I sing to you the lullabye,
of how those wrinkles on your skin,
wouldn't add up to the love for you,
if you mulitiplied them infinity times ten.

Grandma, I sing to you the lullabye,
of your very death, the tears stream,
and I begin to remember those lullabyes
and all they made me dream

xxhopless romanticxx remember u have only till tomorrow..k... just wanted to let u know so there will be no confusion.. =D good luck =D

done!! lol here it is!

Chewed Gum

Staring up at you
you just pass on by
You would never ever know
That the chewed gum cried

It cries for the mouth
That has spit it out
It wonders, quite sadly,
What's this all about?

It was beautiful once
All wrapped up real pretty
But someone chewed him up
And spit him out in the city

He sat on the sidewalk
In the balzing hot sun
No longer enjoying life
No longer having fun

But he still feels beautiful
When he looks up at you
He knows he'll be okay
That much is true

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not my best work, this was a hard contest... but I feel honored to be a part of it!! =]

OK THE WINNER IS................................................................ ..................................... XXHOPELESS ROMANTICXX CONRADULATIONS YOU HAVE WON THE GRAND PRIZE WHICH IF YOU FORGOT ITS A COMMENT AND VOTE ON ALL YOUR POEMS AND A SPOT ON MY FAVORITES..CONGRATS!!! AND GOOD JOB TO THE REST OF YOU.. I ENJOYED READING YOURS AS WELL..

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holy crap!!! ... *stares in speechless shock* you are kidding me right? I was absolutely suprised at that!! I can't believe to express my thanks to you!!! I personally liked the other two way better!!!
Ciao xx

well u earned it fo realz.. haha... but dont be surprised because ur poems are REALLY good.. well lets use a better word like INCREDIBLE!!! congrats and keep on writing and i will keep on commenting on all your poems!! I'm glad your on my favorites list cause u really are one of my favorite writers!! so keep up the GREAT, INCREDIBLE WORK!!!

thank you soooo much! It really meant so much to me... The other poems were so fantastic!! guys, I would've voted for you!!! =]

go CIAO!!!!!! yea!!!!! congrats!

aww thanks leisa!! =]

Congrats.

Happiness
Jeannie