Wantiing honest critique?

  • N J Thornton
    20 years ago

    Hey everyone. I did have another post on here on the same subject but i can't find it.
    My point is, if you want honest critique, i'll have a go. When i say honest critique i don't mean telling you your poem isn't good and i don't like it etc. I may love your poem and i shall then tell you i do and why. However if i find areas i feel could be improved (in my opinion) i will tell you, although it is up to you whether you take my advise or not. After all it's your poem.
    Ok please don't just say "please read my poems" because i will either look at your most recent, or i won't look at all, harsh i know. What i want you to do is say which poem you would like me to look at. I will look at up to two poems.

    Thank you. And if you have anytime feel free to take a look at any of my work, although you don't have to, but i will greatly appreciate it.

    Silver

  • vanessarrr
    20 years ago

    your choice... you're gonna have to pick a category that you feel like reading or you're gonna hate my suggestions. after all, all of my poems need honest criticism.

    if you don't read any at all, that's fine... it's all on me:)

  • Lucy
    20 years ago

    hey, if you could read a couple of my last few or couple poems...that'd be cool, thanks, and i will check out yours...later

  • Leah20
    20 years ago

    Hey, could you please critique my poems "Angel Eyes" and "Two Trees"? I would like to know someones honest opinions instead of oh "that was great" or okay or something. THANKS!!!

  • N J Thornton
    20 years ago

    I've critiqued your works - Blazing Rhapsody, *Victoria*, Lee Nicole, Leah20, Eddie Garcia. Thanks telling me which poem or hinting the latest poem.
    Worthless* I did read your latest but i question whether you read everything i wrote as i specifically asked not to just put "please read my poems". I want some kind of clarity to which poem/s you want reading please. And this goes to any people yet to ask.

    Thanks.
    Silver.

  • Nefarius
    20 years ago

    take a look on my poems
    maybe you enjoy them

  • Ş∂ņďħy∂
    20 years ago

    Hi Silver,
    I read each of your poems and I am greatly impressed by your talent. Your poems are very well written. Your comments will be very valuable for me. I am listing two of them. If you don’t have time, please ignore the second.

    *Happy anniversary (Rondeau Redouble) (This is one of my favorite poem but ironically, This is my lowest rated poem.)
    *Tear drops of pain (Sestina)

    Thank you in advance.
    Trincy.

  • Cantchangeme
    20 years ago

    Honest critique sounds good coud you check out my new poem ''Stick To Your Guns''